Gender: Female Location: in a room.. a dark padded room.....
Rate my poem plz
plz rate my poem
Endless Tormet
Lost forever at the seas
The ocean of death
Filled with blood
And the bloated corpses
Drown in the pain you caused
The happenings of your torment
Your victims all slit their wrists
Some hang by the rope
The only hope they knew
For your words made them feel worthless
But they are worth more then you know
So now go taste your hurt
Taste the blood you spilt
Kiss the corpses
Tell them your sorry
Now I take the blade
And cut your throat
Gasp you're sorry
As I throw you
Into the waves of torment
You're swollowed by the sea
Dragged down by the lives you ruined
rate it plz
__________________ they're all dead, they just don't know it yet
you painted a picture of heartbreak and hurt with blood and gore..no matter the punctuation..was pretty good..the only thing i dont like about it is that it seemed to jump all over the idea and was kinda confusing...however, i knew what you were getting at...i would go along with sy and give it a 6/10
Gender: Female Location: in a room.. a dark padded room.....
Reflection of Deceit
Anger fills the mind
Rage torments the soul
Forever bound by the hatred love
Bleeding by the blade
Of which is in your hand
I grasp my arm
Trying to hold the flesh together
I look up
Only to see
The one thing I feared
The one holding the blade
I look up and see
The only thing in my sight
Is my reflection
In the mirror of deceit
__________________ they're all dead, they just don't know it yet
Gender: Female Location: in a room.. a dark padded room.....
thx... it is an outlet for my anger and rage.. but i can't seem to write any happy poems.. it kinda sux, but i like the darker poems better anyways.. lol
__________________ they're all dead, they just don't know it yet