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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

my poems

Some crap I wrote:


A purple flower on my mind,
A flush when he smiles and says good bye,
A heart ache when heís out of my sight,
A tear in the sky when he doesnít reply,
Itís gonna rain.

It doesnít matter I am gonna stay,
With you in my arms or just me with the rain,
I feel sick but I canít complain,
Is it so bad if itís fake?

A sour grape on the rise,
A regret on the turn, no hands tied,
A burst of hate when he lies,
A comfort lost, time to hide,
Itís gonna rain.

There is no reason for me stay,
Astray from the field of pain,
This should be my happiest day,
Can this be just another simple mistake?

Iím addicted to rain.


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Old Post May 8th, 2006 08:19 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

I don't fall in place here,
I don't fall in place there,
Not in my dreams,
Not anywhere,

Solely in my chair,
Without a care,
While time spins me I slowly die,
As lonely as a ghost in disrepair,

Feeling so good,
When I am so high,
I never worry about the fall,
I'm always at the end of the line,

Always something about truth and lies,
When you ramble on,
I'll pretend to care,
Does this make me a treacherous swine?

Awful feedback,
Devastating blows,
An aggravated day,
Time to go home,

Don't think it will ever be the same,
People change,
Should I grab my tools and build a new world?
It doesn't matter anyway,


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Old Post May 8th, 2006 08:21 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

You imagine that you are dead
In a world where you are king
So you canít feel pain and witness democracy.

Those you hate are servants
And they serve only you,
The ones you love are near
But they donít have any emotions,
Just the way you want them to.

You control everyone like pawns in a chess game,
It makes you feel like you are in gods shoes
But yet you wonder
Just who is leading who?

All the riches and fame you wished you had gained
Are right at your feet,
Everything you want is in your mind
composed as a dream,
It must be nice to know if everything in life fails
You can always be a king.


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Old Post May 16th, 2006 02:35 AM
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Valharu
Where's my beer woman????

Gender: Male
Location: Australia

As I'm writing this poem
I push a beer down my gullet
2006 and I still wear a mullet.
To make up a word like jingles
So I could rhyme it with pringles
I went to the doctors
And he cured me of shingles.=Not true..............I was never cured shifty

My talent is lacking
in creating a poem
By reading this trite
It might make you groan =(GROAN)
I read your own poem's
They were better than this
For me to read this
I'm gonna have to get pissed.

My poem isn't heartfelt
In fact it's quite daft
So after I'm done
I'm going to stab my heart with a dart.= that bits particularly bad.

So to my Clone
I write this poem for you
And if you don't like it
I might make love to emu's.=That's where I lost the plot. laughing

I apologize to everyone who reads this..........NOT!!!!!! evil face

Old Post Jun 7th, 2006 10:09 AM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Valharu
As I'm writing this poem
I push a beer down my gullet
2006 and I still wear a mullet.
To make up a word like jingles
So I could rhyme it with pringles
I went to the doctors
And he cured me of shingles.=Not true..............I was never cured shifty

My talent is lacking
in creating a poem
By reading this trite
It might make you groan =(GROAN)
I read your own poem's
They were better than this
For me to read this
I'm gonna have to get pissed.

My poem isn't heartfelt
In fact it's quite daft
So after I'm done
I'm going to stab my heart with a dart.= that bits particularly bad.

So to my Clone
I write this poem for you
And if you don't like it
I might make love to emu's.=That's where I lost the plot. laughing

I apologize to everyone who reads this..........NOT!!!!!! evil face

That was horrible laughing out loud


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Old Post Jun 8th, 2006 03:43 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Valharu
As I'm writing this poem
I push a beer down my gullet
2006 and I still wear a mullet.
To make up a word like jingles
So I could rhyme it with pringles
I went to the doctors
And he cured me of shingles.=Not true..............I was never cured shifty

My talent is lacking
in creating a poem
By reading this trite
It might make you groan =(GROAN)
I read your own poem's
They were better than this
For me to read this
I'm gonna have to get pissed.

My poem isn't heartfelt
In fact it's quite daft
So after I'm done
I'm going to stab my heart with a dart.= that bits particularly bad.

So to my Clone
I write this poem for you
And if you don't like it
I might make love to emu's.=That's where I lost the plot. laughing

I apologize to everyone who reads this..........NOT!!!!!! evil face


That was wonderful, Valharu! Wait! did you call me an emu? mad

shifty


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Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 12:17 AM
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Valharu
Where's my beer woman????

Gender: Male
Location: Australia

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Clone
That was wonderful, Valharu! Wait! did you call me an emu? mad

shifty
You LIE!!!! mad That was terrible. And I did call you an emu. Clone doesn't rhyme too well with "you". big grin

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 06:18 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

I always tell the truth.....even when I lie.


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Thank you, Pittman! ^_^

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 06:37 AM
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Valharu
Where's my beer woman????

Gender: Male
Location: Australia

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Clone
I always tell the truth.....even when I lie.
I believe you.....even when I know your lying.

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 06:59 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

If you fool your self....you will be happy.


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Thank you, Pittman! ^_^

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 07:14 AM
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Valharu
Where's my beer woman????

Gender: Male
Location: Australia

If I'm happy......will I be a fool?

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 07:22 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

Yes....and you will be stuck in a laundry room...............*widens eyes* FOREVER.


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Thank you, Pittman! ^_^

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 07:24 AM
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Valharu
Where's my beer woman????

Gender: Male
Location: Australia

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Clone
Yes....and you will be stuck in a laundry room...............*widens eyes* FOREVER.
Ahh. The good old days.

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 07:26 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

laughing

I hate laundry rooms. Worst place in the world!


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Thank you, Pittman! ^_^

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 07:29 AM
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Valharu
Where's my beer woman????

Gender: Male
Location: Australia

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Clone
laughing

I hate laundry rooms. Worst place in the world!
Yeah. My washing machine scares me. Especially when it tries to headbang. wink

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 07:34 AM
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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

laughing


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Thank you, Pittman! ^_^

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 07:37 AM
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Valharu
Where's my beer woman????

Gender: Male
Location: Australia

More poems Clone!!!

Old Post Jun 16th, 2006 08:04 AM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

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Originally posted by Valharu
More poems Clone!!!

Less talk more poetry indeed! stick out tongue


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Dr. Zaius
Damn Dirty Ape

Gender: Male
Location: Planet of the Apes

There's real promise here, Clone. Your poems are heartfelt and skillfully rendered. Keep up the good work.


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Clone
War Goddess

Gender: Female
Location: Dogma

Thank you. ^_^


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