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Eternal Turmoil
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Thanks for coming into my poetry thread. My first poem is really short, but the title of it is what I based my username on, seeing as I thought it was quite a good poem.

Eternal Turmoil

Forever, darkness will be my abode,
Forever, my soul will slowly erode,

My grief, my pain, my hurt, my toil
It is what I am, it is Eternal Turmoil.

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Nerdanel
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short but simple. i love it..


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Eternal Turmoil
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Gender: Male
Location: look up. :)

Smile Thank You.

Here is my second poem. It was inspired by Darren Shan's poem Lord Loss, which is about a demon, and I liked the idea of compiling a horror story into a few verses, so here it is.

Demonica

Hell is where she will always reside,
With darkness she is forever allied,

A stroke of blood painted on each nail,
Her soul non-existent, her skin deathly pale,

On their knees her minions quake,
Quivering, trembling, their fear awake.

Her alliances intimidated,
Her home a crypt,

Her beverages ghastly,
And slowly sipped.

The light a repellant,
The shadows a host,

Not possibly human, improbably ghost.
By night she lies,

Waiting for a
Victim for Demonica.

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Nerdanel
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Location: The Black Parade

ooo good work.

mine r here under the name tempest. Check them out.. not as good a yours but well i like them


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Eternal Turmoil
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Gender: Male
Location: look up. :)

I'll take a look. happy

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Nerdanel
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thanx


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Eternal Turmoil
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Gender: Male
Location: look up. :)

This poem hasn't got much behind it, I just decided to write a tragic poem, and this was the outcome.

Last Moments

I bang on your door,
I hope your awake,
My hand twists the doorknob,
My mind screams "MISTAKE!!”

My eyes fail to close,
My lungs won't release
A gasp as the world falters,
And begins to cease.

An eternity of shrieks,
sighs and a scream,
As I try to condemn this
as a bad dream.

I gaze around,
There’s nothing left,
So I clutch onto you,
And we share our last breath.

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Eternal Turmoil
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Here is another poem, inspired by the Dark Phoenix X-Men Storyline. However when I was writing I thought maybe I could expand it to be about the mythical creature, a phoenix. As you may realise the first few lines is in my signature.

The Phoenix

On a day yet to come
The Phoenix will rise
An inferno against
the midnight skies.

Such excruciating beauty
Within this angel of death
Terror and disaster
In its heart, in its breath.

The lives of so many
In its infernal claws
The embodiment of destruction
No restrictions, no laws.

Its own malevolent intentions
Can be stopped by none
We can simply watch in awe
Until we are gone.

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Weeping Fairy
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Ur poems are so awesome, i really love them!!! Good job happy


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Eternal Turmoil
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Thanks happy

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Emilinka
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ooooh, good! they remind me of another persons style.

i love the rhyming, to me, its not a poem if it doesnt rhyme smile


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Eternal Turmoil
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Same here. Thanks for replying.

happy

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Miroku Herko
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YOU SHOULD WRITE A BOOK


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Diamonds
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Location: Newcastle, England


Really well written, brilliant job!


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Eternal Turmoil
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Gender: Male
Location: look up. :)

I'm not sure I'd write a book, but whatever floats your boat.
And thanks Diamonds. <3 the new sig btw.

happy

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Diamonds
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I'm not sure I'd write a book, but whatever floats your boat.
And thanks Diamonds. <3 the new sig btw.

happy
You're welcome.
Danke happy


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