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silver heart
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something bigger than imagination !!

this is my first poetry to me .

something bigger than imagination ..he lived among us..

something, live between roads

Something , reminds us about our hopes..

And he tells us about magic of our childhood..

something ,Greater than expectations�

it Grown and grown between our hearts�

the friendliness was title for it..

It was rejoicing when he met the love..

and Without any sense he stolen us

he stolen from us our feeling and hopes..

so ,Thorn planted between our sides..

but ,we Did not understand the pain of Thorn..

we Did not feel in Pricks of thorn..

and Without Voice of pain we tolerated..

we tolerated for yearning of salvation..

something bigger than imagination

something .. was Sailing in our seas and cross our oceans..

that is the love

the love which stayed in our selves ..

Beautiful love which we live in it .. in a few days�

Without any chance for us .. to tell him about our grief's and our pains ..

That is the love

Dec 25th, 2006 12:53 PM

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Lurvely poem lol happy

i like it good job, i cant wait to read more, keep 'em comin big grin

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Dec 25th, 2006 08:15 PM

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Immortality
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nice poem, loved the ideas expressed in there, but not sure about the structure though...

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thx

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii welcom big grin

thx a lot for your nice words ... that really encouraged me very much ..

when i wrote this poetry .. i meant from it .. that the love is bigger than everythings . and the love is the most interesting thing in this life .. the love give the life meaning to live inside this world .

Perhaps the structures is not clear but the message of meaning is clear ... the love in the first palce .

thax again

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Dec 27th, 2006 06:46 AM

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Thats very nice Alia , wish to you all best ...

We cannot describe the love ....its very deep emotions ... wink

Dec 27th, 2006 05:45 PM

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thx

yes fatima ... you are right ... ....its very deep emotions .. it is make you fly wilth all birds and butterflys ....thx wink

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Dec 27th, 2006 07:23 PM

Fatima
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Yup ...I wish to fly like abird ..but I afraid you would eat me ... stick out tongue

Did you love before ...?

Dec 27th, 2006 07:36 PM

silver heart
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woow love

hiiiiii fatooma

but I am not such a monster of jungle .. But I am adore flying with Lovely birds ...

yes

I liked My mother and father, my brothers and sisters .. all my friends ..

so i think ... I did not fall in love, so far.. iam lucky wink

Dec 27th, 2006 08:48 PM

Immortality
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Wow! You got that right! It's a bloody nightmare falling in love, especially if there are certain...obstacles standing in your way!

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Fatima
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Re: woow love

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hiiiiii fatooma

but I am not such a monster of jungle .. But I am adore flying with Lovely birds ...

yes

I liked My mother and father, my brothers and sisters .. all my friends ..

so i think ... I did not fall in love, so far.. iam lucky

I miss baba w mama sad

...

Yea , I know you are very kind ..I tought you to be a nice .. smile

Dec 27th, 2006 10:39 PM

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When they say love hurts.... boy they arent lyin lol. Love hurts... baby there were never truer words laughing out loud

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Dec 28th, 2006 01:07 AM

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hiiiiiii agian

hiiiiiiiii ...

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t's a bloody nightmare falling in love, especially if there are certain.. I agree with you strongly wink

fatima
Do not worry. they will return fine .. god willing smile

When they say love hurts.... boy they arent lyin lol. Love hurts... baby there were never truer words .. yeah .. i think it is truly words .. laughing