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 Thoughts of faith about God
Thoughts of faith about God
O God how much I love you.. How much I need you..
who with me ? When I was sick.
Who with me ? when I was sad .
Who with me ? when I was alone.
No one else you.
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O God how much I love you.. How much I need you..
I remember my mistakes
I remember all the sad times and happy together.
How I was weak child
Child who did not understand the meaning of life.
After that.. I Known you .. my God ..
I liked you my God.
O God how much I love you.. How much I need you.
Everything was difficult
But after I known you Everything became easy.
Life has become with the right.. The Grief's has become friendly.. The
When I known you .. my god .
O God how much I love you.. How much I need you.
I Love you because you are Rahman Rahim ..
because you Know what inside me..
because you are close to the heart..
very close..
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Note
Please do not ask me ..why you love God?
Because God's love is in our blood.. you Can not see it but you can feel it .
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Immortality
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Hmm, nice work, though you are making some grammatical mistakes, just some of the words aren't in correct order and again the structure of the poem makes it a bit confusing, yoou should use like proper stanzas and stuff, other than that it's great! The Arabic words fit in nicely.
Don't mind me asking, are you a Muslim?
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Thats really good. Like immortality saud a few grammatical mistaj=kes, but it really was kick ass... awesome job. So true silver heart 
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Frankly, horrible poetry.
It is in no way interesting or fun to read. Aslo, the grammar used is atrocious.
You have a lot of improving to do. But don't let my criticism stop you.
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Dec 29th, 2006 06:31 PM |
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Immortality
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Coulda been a bit more subtle dude, I like the ideas expressed in it and not everyone's grammatical skills are perfect
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Dec 29th, 2006 08:17 PM |
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Bardock42
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Yeah, no offense. I mean. It might help in the long run, right?
Also, if you only get sugar blown up the ass you end up like Floo. And you wouldn't want that. No you don't.
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 Bardock42+ honest = good man
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absolutely .. you are right .. 
and people who do not make mistake who will not learn anything .
thx brother .. and always let me see your honest words . good luck to you .
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Immortality
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Hey cool, I'm muslim too! Eid Mubarak for the festival that just went by, well in England anyway, dunno about the rest of the world!
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interesting !!!
Immortality.. good news .. so you are muslim .. awesome !!!!!
and Eid Mubarak to you too 
and happy new year for all people in this forum . 
best
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But with this I have many friends of Muslims and many Christians. From America,Britain ..from around the world . . other countries. and I love them very much . I like to learn about other cultures often ... I do not care about the differences of religions and only I like to knows others . because that what islam teach me .. Islam always teaches us to be tolerant with others . 
