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Vathu
Rougue
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Vath's poetry.. Thing
Yeah. I have some.. Work.
But most of it is copywrighted by my Girlfriend and I. Yet I'm still glad to share some with you.. She's really good. She helps me most of the time. Actually ALL the time. But hey. The following I was for my lovely girlfriend, Caitie.
Habit was.. A dud at first. But then it kind of grew into a love poem.. Glad it didn't go down the depressed path. I don't like that path..
But it was intially for me to declare my love for her and so forth..
Enjoy. =]
My Habit
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My love for her is like no other,
It's sweet and longing, Soft and true.
My love for her can blow you away.
If you care to share the sway of hearts beating and breathing, mingling.
My love for her, so simple, so sweet,
just to watch her smile, and raise the beat
of my heart with such a simple action.
Just watch me break down, and catch the fraction,
of the twinkle, of the magic. Once I know she'll be my habit.
Copyright ©2006 Tyler Dale Cox
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Jan 1st, 2007 03:04 PM |
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King of Blades
The King
 Gender: Male
Location: The South |
The copyright thing it pretty neat....oh the poem. It was good. However I am a little intrigued by the title. What did you mean by "my habit"?
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Jan 2nd, 2007 04:10 AM |
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Vathu
Rougue
Gender: Male
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Well. It seemed to fit.. But when I did think about it.. She's my girlfriend and well.. She's like a drug. Can't get enough of her. Y'know?
If not. I guess it cannot be explained. ._.;
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Jan 2nd, 2007 04:15 AM |
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Vathu
Rougue
Gender: Male
Location: |
Thanks. I have some more, most of them were written by my girlfriend. At least one I wrote was written from her perspective ABOUT me. o-O
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Jan 4th, 2007 11:42 AM |
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Fatima
Bissmillah
 Gender: Female
Location: United Arab Emirates |
Its great ..Vathu 
Keep writing ..
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Jan 4th, 2007 05:01 PM |
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Vathu
Rougue
Gender: Male
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Thanks for the encouragement.. <_<
My girlfriend is my Inspiration. ;_;
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Jan 4th, 2007 08:22 PM |
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