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Muck101
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Alternative poems.

For those who've been pulled aside by teachers and questioned as to why they've written somthing like that, or why they've rented so manny violent books from the library. This is for those who are misunderstood, under-appreciated, and not taken seriously enough.


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Muck101
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Wrote this in 6th grade.

The gears grind on

Metal churns
Screamers scream
Lovers die
Killers dream
Don’t look too deeply
When exploring the mind
You’ll wind up hating
The things you find
Men scream
Women shriek
But in the end
They all bleed the same
And the gears grind on
And your better off not knowing what keeps them turning
Like hells fire
Always burning
The gears grind on
And on
And on
The only thing scarier than a madman with a gun
Is knowing you’re the reason he’s gone mad


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Muck101
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Written Froshman year, Highschool.

A Vampires Proposal

My dear…
Do not be afraid
For I’ve come here tonight
To be with you
Breathe in you
Forever be in you
My sweet…
Do not run
For I have come tonight
To sigh with you
Die with you
Be born anew in you
My love…
Do not worry
For my mission is a peaceful one
I wish to show you the meaning of lust
Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
My only one…
I bring you pleasures
Beyond compare
I’ll run my fingers
Through your hair
Be still my love…
Allow me to embrace
You in your entirety
Caress your face
Don’t cry my dear…
Shed no tears
For what I bring you
Will be the greatest thing
You could ever receive
So surrender yourself
And simply breathe
Be born anew
With a single kiss
And feel no pain
Feel only bliss…


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Arrow well done !!!


Well done Muck101 ...


your beginning of writing poetry is beautiful thumb up





My sweet…
Do not run
For I have come tonight
To sigh with you
Die with you
Be born anew in you



indeed nice !!!
happy


best
silver heart

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Totally kick freakin ass. awesome job. i kno how u feel, my poems arent as dark, and full of feeling as urs, but i hate how my dad read my poetry journal without me knoing, and he thought i had serious problems erm. it just bugs me, but like i said before, awesome job. i really hope you post some more


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Muck101
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Thank you! I'll work on a few now. nothing better to do.


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Muck101
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Er. No use. Not feelin it. I wrote a few not too long ago, have to find em in the clutter of my room.


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