chillmeistergen
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Nothing to do but Nothing
It's a pretty dysfunctional verse really. Feedback welcome.
Nothing to do But Nothing
Falling in love with deja vu,
Time is for change,
Nothing to do but nothing again,
Apathy and allusions,
Dancing time leaving everything behind,
Cannot be drawn upon and cannot be bought
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Feb 2nd, 2007 12:58 PM
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I like the imagery and the alliteration
Feb 2nd, 2007 01:00 PM
jlee17xoxo412
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Re: Nothing to do but Nothing
quote: (post ) Originally posted by chillmeistergen
It's a pretty dysfunctional verse really. Feedback welcome.
Nothing to do But Nothing
Falling in love with deja vu,
Time is for change,
Nothing to do but nothing again,
Apathy and allusions,
Dancing time leaving everything behind,
Cannot be drawn upon and cannot be bought
I love the title of this Poem, Nothing to do But Nothing. i always think the first thing to a good peom is a good title. Nice poem.
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Mar 2nd, 2007 03:54 AM
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