sexyking
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Dreams of our father.
As I lay by your side and stare at what you have become I shed a tear a tear of sorrow a tear of joy a tear of relief. I Sit and reminisce about the words you spoke so loud words that forever echo in the midst of my mind “my boy will be a lawyer , my boy will be a Doctor, my boy will be a teacher. I remember those words and the smile you gave beaming down upon me when speaking them I remember the Saturdays when I asked to play and you gave me books to read, I remember the tests you gave , I remember the words we had. As I sit here and remember the past I shed an unknown tear perhaps for you or perhaps for the little boy who lived the dreams of his father.
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Feb 2nd, 2007 03:36 PM
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Re: Dreams of our father.
quote: (post ) Originally posted by sexyking
As I lay by your side and stare at what you have become I shed a tear a tear of sorrow a tear of joy a tear of relief. I Sit and reminisce about the words you spoke so loud words that forever echo in the midst of my mind “my boy will be a lawyer , my boy will be a Doctor, my boy will be a teacher. I remember those words and the smile you gave beaming down upon me when speaking them I remember the Saturdays when I asked to play and you gave me books to read, I remember the tests you gave , I remember the words we had. As I sit here and remember the past I shed an unknown tear perhaps for you or perhaps for the little boy who lived the dreams of his father.
Thats some preety deep stuff i wont lie it gets you thinking, again another great poem look forward to more of your stuff.
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Feb 2nd, 2007 03:59 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
Aww I agree it's pretty deep damn u can right my stuff sux compared 2 urs mines the one that says A Broken Heart Is Hard To Heal
Feb 2nd, 2007 09:41 PM
sexyking
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Gender: Unspecified Location: United Kingdom
quote: (post ) Originally posted by SouthernGirl814
Aww I agree it's pretty deep damn u can right my stuff sux compared 2 urs mines the one that says A Broken Heart Is Hard To Heal
Nah i thought you poem was amazing i loved it.
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Feb 3rd, 2007 11:26 PM
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Re: Dreams of our father.
quote: (post ) Originally posted by sexyking
As I lay by your side and stare at what you have become I shed a tear a tear of sorrow a tear of joy a tear of relief. I Sit and reminisce about the words you spoke so loud words that forever echo in the midst of my mind “my boy will be a lawyer , my boy will be a Doctor, my boy will be a teacher. I remember those words and the smile you gave beaming down upon me when speaking them I remember the Saturdays when I asked to play and you gave me books to read, I remember the tests you gave , I remember the words we had. As I sit here and remember the past I shed an unknown tear perhaps for you or perhaps for the little boy who lived the dreams of his father.
That is niiiiice.
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Feb 4th, 2007 12:56 PM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
quote: (post ) Originally posted by sexyking
Nah i thought you poem was amazing i loved it.
That stuff is nuttin compared 2 urs the only poem I like of mine now is the one I wrote thats on pg 5
Feb 4th, 2007 01:12 PM
sexyking
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by SouthernGirl814
That stuff is nuttin compared 2 urs the only poem I like of mine now is the one I wrote thats on pg 5
Your compliments are received thank you so much, i personally think you have a lot of talent and i enjoy reading your stuff.
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Feb 7th, 2007 12:38 AM
SouthernGirl814
Why Can't He Be Mine
Gender: Female Location: United States
thx same 2 u
Feb 7th, 2007 03:10 AM
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