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The Life And Times of Chit (cliche, I know)
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Worried The Life And Times of Chit (cliche, I know)

Just gonna post a few things I wrote. Just want a little feedback from people who don't know me (I'm sure most of you know what I mean).

"The Old Low" (This was a first draft)

So we did it again,
I know I really shouldn’t but it felt good so I did it again.
Only 13 but I’m exposed to the weakness of men
And I loved it. This sin.
And I loved her. This girl.
So we did it again,
Even though she flirted with grown men.
Convenient amnesia -
The voice of common sense drowned out by moans.
“Shhhh! Don’t **** up my zone!”

So I did it again.
But I had a new friend
Everynight.
To me, they all looked the same.
Some call it game. Don’t know names.
Only 16, still hurt from 13: I’ll never be the same.
Still feel pain, until I did it again.
This happens to great men?
Don’t question now, here she comes – “Hey, how you doin?”
I’m still numb, did I want love?

So I do it again,
I know I really shouldn’t but “**** it” so I do it again.
Now I’m 19,
I tried some girlfriends, mission failed.
I’m much too fragile. Gotta force every smile.
Culture won’t allow for chivalry, not from a geek like me.
They say, “Do it while you young.” I’m not having any fun.
Was I even in love once with someone other than Lust?
It’s routine now. I’ll just meet her again @ the old low.

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"Get By"

Sponsoring mass genocide on ourselves
Blinded by ambitions of wealth, ignoring health
Of the mind
On the way avoidable crime
Loosely defined,
It was written black girls are lost
And reasonable doubt obscures the most righteous thought
What more can I say?

I like being liked 2, but don't let that guide all the shit you do.
Reality is the # of thinkers is few
Don't forget your roots, bear necessities from Baloo
Remind myself why I write, why fight temptation

Rap is the crack pipe - now brothers bassing
Make a woman shadow seem elderly, black woman meant for me?
Bending over like that? Naw brother fight that!
Still feeling frustrated? Yea brother, write that!

Spread the word to the people
Remind 'em shit ain't been equal,
Even since implantation of integration
And this will remain all the same
If we continue ignoring, playing the part of "Black Man Insane"
It's time for change!

And it's meant for me
And it's meant for you
And it's meant for them
And it's meant for us, to fail!
But don't make an excuse.
Tighten the belt and come along for the ride
Let's show 'em how through all the bullshit
We just get by!
we just get by!
We just get...
We just get...
We just...
We just...
We...
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"I Fell In Love With Love On A Sunday Morning"

I fell in love with Love on a Sunday morning
Snowing late January not before. Global warming
Or coincidence? Not that I cared. I wanted to kiss…
No, too soon? Hate for her to resist,
Reject, or push away. I’m afraid.
To sleep in this bed I made,
But damn she feels good next to me!
I’m seeing colors dude, but this ain’t ecstasy
The drug. I’m high on love,
Though I don’t fly, we still lay adjacent;
Love ask me to be patient.
But I’m foolish and brash
Already a month has past
Since I felt her hand stroke my face
As she said, “I want to learn from you.”
I cowered in her bosom like an infant.
Was this the comfort I was missing?
Rapidly, events took shape after Love’s departure
Business must be tended to, who am I to argue?
Even if it means I’m alone.
Please be happy, if it was meant to be…
I have no regrets, there is no mourning
I’ll just remember the time
I fell in love with Love on a Sunday morning

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