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doomsday49
your worst nightmare!!
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The Top
Not sure, why i wrote this, but it came to me after watching The Godfather, the other day. Feedback would be nice, people!
The Top
Since youth, he understood the true meaning of influence
Astute in his sense, dude’s truly intelligent
Never a slave to the trade, see he master the art
A natural; it was a gift he acquired from start
He would smile when he meet you, but inside, hollow and dark
A born leader, that’s why he never followed his hear
Some used guns, but his ears were his deadliest weapon;
he can hear you’re deepest fear from your opening sentence.
calm, cool and collect he was a patient beast.
Never head over heel so he can’t face defeat
everyday he'd day dream of being corporate chief
with no doctorate degree, he was forced to cheat
He planned his success rather than pause and dream
cause in every success story there's a plot and scheme
The first part of the piece was strength in numbers.
and the trick was to seek for the weak and dumber.
He knew their need; their silly fiend to feel important.
So he played to their greed and slowly breached their fortress.
innocence crush, by the darkest social rapport
And then a cycle of psychological distort
numbing gut feelings, without guns or killing
subconsciously forcing actions against their willings
CONSCIENCE twisted....into the SCIENCE of CON
Lift their spirits, then drop into a fiery pond
now he's fishing, and wants only the winning catch
when their life is on the line, that’s when there’s strings attach
yeah, he was sly, a serpent exist behind those eyes
inside every frIEndLy smILE, theirs twice the LIES
Beware the nicest guy who tell you life is great
cause when you sell your soul, there's always hell to pay.
His goal's on track he's running laps passed his foes
Winning’s the only thing that matter as his passion grows
backstabbing his close friends cause they're weights to him
he refuse to be taken down; his place was King
it’s a race for success you gotta take some breath
Cause nice guys finish last a DICK is always A-HEAD
then it was known, heh, a kingdom all to his own
Plotting and planning for this moment, as precious as gold
He looked back at his subject, bright gleams in their eyes
And saw himself back then when he was dreaming the sky
But something’s wrong as he frown down upon his prize
It was the way they smile that sent a chill down his spine
he realizeds he's on his own, all alone wit no crops
life’s a mountain climb....heheh....it gets cold at the top...

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my life rap isn't for the weak or feeble/ my youth was no sunshine the grind'll eat you/ they say learn from the past history can teach you/ but if i live backward all i see is evil.....Doomsday biatch!!!!!
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Jun 16th, 2007 01:44 AM |
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modslayor
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liked it, kinda confuseing becasue from what i got it went from a guy wanted to be invovled with the police to life race or something
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Jun 16th, 2007 02:48 AM |
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doomsday49
your worst nightmare!!
 Gender: Male Location: Pandora's Box |
"Police" LOL!! But, thanx for checkin it out, sister.
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my life rap isn't for the weak or feeble/ my youth was no sunshine the grind'll eat you/ they say learn from the past history can teach you/ but if i live backward all i see is evil.....Doomsday biatch!!!!!
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Jun 16th, 2007 02:56 AM |
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