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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Love My Poetry

Um, I've been writing stuff for years now, and no-one's ever read them before but I felt like bringing this one out into the open. Hope someone likes it. embarrasment



What is pain?
It is but a feeling.
It can be mastered.
Locked away.
Hidden.
Such is anger.
Hatred.
To burst forth from the dams of time
When threads of patience
Weaken.
Fail.
It pours out, oblivious.
Aided by beautiful tormented screams.
Then you are. . .
Reborn.


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TheMercurial
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Location: Ireland

Powerful. I like the message of hope intertwined with the sense of powerlessness. Very nice.


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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Thanks. embarrasment Nothing on you, though. embarrasment

This next one's a Black Valentine I wrote... For stupid exes, lol... Tho I think it's a bit corny sounding... embarrasment

Roses are red
Drowned people are blue
Revenge is sweet
I'd run if I were you


embarrasment embarrasment


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Last edited by Disturbed Angel on Jun 18th, 2007 at 02:33 AM

Old Post Jun 18th, 2007 02:23 AM
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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Here's another corny sounding short poem-

Rip my chest open
Leave me to die
No-one'd give a ****
But then, neither would I.

To this day, I'm still not sure what inspired that. confused I'll admit, though, I was feeling a bit suicidal at the time...


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Old Post Jun 18th, 2007 02:36 AM
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TheMercurial
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Location: Ireland

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Selina*Starfire
Thanks. embarrasment Nothing on you, though. embarrasment

This next one's a Black Valentine I wrote... For stupid exes, lol... Tho I think it's a bit corny sounding... embarrasment

Roses are red
Drowned people are blue
Revenge is sweet
I'd run if I were you


embarrasment embarrasment


laughing I love it!!


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Old Post Jun 18th, 2007 11:38 AM
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TheMercurial
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Gender: Male
Location: Ireland

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Selina*Starfire
Here's another corny sounding short poem-

Rip my chest open
Leave me to die
No-one'd give a ****
But then, neither would I.

To this day, I'm still not sure what inspired that. confused I'll admit, though, I was feeling a bit suicidal at the time...


Intense. I've often found that depression can give rise to some really powerful work.


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Old Post Jun 18th, 2007 11:39 AM
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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Thanks. embarrasment You seem to be the only person that likes my stuff, though. ............... Anyway, here's another one I wrote... Bit longer....

I don't know what's
Inside my head
It's so confusing
All this pain
All this hurt
And all this loneliness
I don't care what people say
I just wanna be myself
But I don't know who I am
Sometimes, I just want to cry
Sometimes, I just want to die
And I want to get away
So then I hide behind closed eyes
And scream until there's nothing left
Until I'm...bleeding away inside
Now I can't breathe
I live for this darkness
It's the only way I feel alive
Away from the burning stares
Away from this ****ed-up world...
Everything here's so quiet and cold
And the only sound is my beating heart
Pulsing the blood through my veins
Reminding me of my own existence
All...by...myself.


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I do.

Old Post Jun 19th, 2007 02:51 AM
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TheMercurial
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Gender: Male
Location: Ireland

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Selina*Starfire
Thanks. embarrasment You seem to be the only person that likes my stuff, though. ............... Anyway, here's another one I wrote... Bit longer....

I don't know what's
Inside my head
It's so confusing
All this pain
All this hurt
And all this loneliness
I don't care what people say
I just wanna be myself
But I don't know who I am
Sometimes, I just want to cry
Sometimes, I just want to die
And I want to get away
So then I hide behind closed eyes
And scream until there's nothing left
Until I'm...bleeding away inside
Now I can't breathe
I live for this darkness
It's the only way I feel alive
Away from the burning stares
Away from this ****ed-up world...
Everything here's so quiet and cold
And the only sound is my beating heart
Pulsing the blood through my veins
Reminding me of my own existence
All...by...myself.


Powerful imagery.

For the record, your poetry is really good, but you shouldn't be writing it for other people to like it. As long as it means something to you and it captures the message you want it to have, that's all it needs to be really good poetry. People will respect that , but just write for you, no-one else.


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Old Post Jun 24th, 2007 10:45 AM
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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Thanks. But that is what I do. I've just never showed it to anyone before... much less an entire forum... So it's a bit daunting......... I posted them because I wanted a bit of feedback, I guess.. And I was bored. no expression So er...well, forget what I said.


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Old Post Jun 24th, 2007 08:28 PM
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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Here's another. This is one of my more personal poems... Mainly meant for someone who apparently has forgotten I exist.

Have you ever wanted
To scream
Til you bled
So all the world
Could feel your pain?
Do you ever feel
So trapped
In life
In society's hateful routines?
Did you ever fantasize
About taking a life
About squeezing someone's throat
While you laughed?
Have you ever thought
That to play with a gun
And shoot yourself in the head
Would be fun?
Do you prefer
To walk alone
In the beautiful desolation
Of your own tortured mind
To being in
The scorching lights
Of the city?
Do you think death is beautiful?
Are you like me?
Are we the same?
Are we meant to be together
Forever?
Promise me
We'll walk always hand in hand
From one life into the next
Through fire and ice
Always
As one
And never
Let
Me go.


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I do.

Old Post Jul 1st, 2007 09:21 PM
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Running Mascara
Keeping My Distance

Gender: Female
Location: field of disaster

I lk that one and some of the things you described I have wanted to do for some reason.. lk taking a life and laughing while doing it...for some reason I've wanted to do that before

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Selina*Starfire
Here's another corny sounding short poem-

Rip my chest open
Leave me to die
No-one'd give a ****
But then, neither would I.

To this day, I'm still not sure what inspired that. confused I'll admit, though, I was feeling a bit suicidal at the time...


This is my favorite love It's deep yes


quote: (post)
Originally posted by Selina*Starfire
Thanks. embarrasment You seem to be the only person that likes my stuff, though. ............... Anyway, here's another one I wrote... Bit longer....

I don't know what's
Inside my head
It's so confusing
All this pain
All this hurt
And all this loneliness
I don't care what people say
I just wanna be myself
But I don't know who I am
Sometimes, I just want to cry
Sometimes, I just want to die
And I want to get away
So then I hide behind closed eyes
And scream until there's nothing left
Until I'm...bleeding away inside
Now I can't breathe
I live for this darkness
It's the only way I feel alive
Away from the burning stares
Away from this ****ed-up world...
Everything here's so quiet and cold
And the only sound is my beating heart
Pulsing the blood through my veins
Reminding me of my own existence
All...by...myself.


I love this one too, it is my second favorite..It totally hit meh deep down cuz I feel lk that too


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Running Mascara
Keeping My Distance

Gender: Female
Location: field of disaster

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Selina*Starfire
Thanks. embarrasment Nothing on you, though. embarrasment

This next one's a Black Valentine I wrote... For stupid exes, lol... Tho I think it's a bit corny sounding... embarrasment

Roses are red
Drowned people are blue
Revenge is sweet
I'd run if I were you


embarrasment embarrasment


cute happy

had to double post..to many images


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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Thanks RM.


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Old Post Jul 8th, 2007 01:40 AM
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Running Mascara
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What's wrong??


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PrincessNk
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Selina*Starfire
Thanks. embarrasment Nothing on you, though. embarrasment

This next one's a Black Valentine I wrote... For stupid exes, lol... Tho I think it's a bit corny sounding... embarrasment

Roses are red
Drowned people are blue
Revenge is sweet
I'd run if I were you


embarrasment embarrasment

AW..So cute!!!!!!!
I love this one and other ones too!!!!!!!!!


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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Running Mascara
What's wrong??


Nothin.


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Location: On the quest for Neverland

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Originally posted by Nightingale14
AW..So cute!!!!!!!
I love this one and other ones too!!!!!!!!!


Thanks. embarrasment


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Disturbed Angel
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Gender: Female
Location: On the quest for Neverland

Haven't written anything in awhile, but I thought I'd put this up. This one's more really song lyrics than a poem, and I was NEVER gonna post it but it's how I feel right now. Anyone that's obsessed with Avril Lavigne enough can see my obsession with her in the lyrics, lol. embarrasment


I hate this place
I hate this world
What can I do
I'm just a girl
I feel so trapped
Like there's no room
To make mistakes
I'll never learn

I wish I could break out
I just wanna freak out
I wanna run away
I wish I could break out
I just wanna freak out
Hold me in your arms and take me away
(Break me away)

Oh, won't you find me?
Somewhere inside me
I think I'm falling
Falling endlessly
I'm lost in darkness
And I can't find myself
Trying to escape this
But you're stalling
And I'm still falling
We'll fall together

I wish I could break out
I just wanna freak out
I wanna run away
I wish I could break out
I just wanna freak out
Hold me in your arms and take me away
(Break me away)

It's cold outside
And I feel so alone
I'm lost inside
And there's nowhere to go
Help me find my way
'Cause no one understands.....

I wish I could break out
I just wanna freak out
I wanna run away
I wish I could break out
I just wanna freak out
Hold me in your arms and take me away
(Break me away)........


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Old Post Jul 27th, 2007 04:14 AM
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Running Mascara
Keeping My Distance

Gender: Female
Location: field of disaster

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!


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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Running Mascara
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!


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