((Hey all this is my first time posting here so yeah be nice but I'd love some comments! Enjoy! I may post more then just poems in here but yeah I'll try to keep it updated. Thanks all!))
End of My Eyes
These eyes of mine, they hold no lies.
Light does not shine, in a town that is blind.
Minds are wasted, by ones who I see.
Behind the lense, lies destruction and hate.
Twisted by life, consumed by fate.
Blue eyes fade. Angels fall from the skies.
Hope is lost. Silence and cries.
Tears run red. Oceans dry.
Humanity is buried beneath time.
Traces are lost.
None survive, but those who’s light is blind.
Fear spreads among the bones of the past.
Time blows away, repeating till at last the light runs out.
No light is left, burned out by darkness that constantly creeps into
the lives of the good.
Turning the land into a place of war. Deaths go unseen.
Backs are turned. Voices dry.
They call for the light.
Seeking it’s peace once held by the past.
One stands alone. Watching time bury the place she called home.
Friends fade. Hearts turn to stone.
Only one is left and she stands alone.
She smiles and walks through the bones of the past.
Memories fade. All her time shall elapse.
No one left, she cries alone.
Standing on the bones, she wants to go home.
Darkness comes, her light escapes.
She is all that is left in this world of hate.
She is all that is left, no one hears her cries.
Her tears fall to the skies.
Reality sets, her mind takes it in.
Real as the fire, safe as a dream.
Behind my eyes lies a world unseen.
It is really sad. Lonelyness. And your use of words is rather visual, so i find it quite easy to see the imagery and the context from which you base it. Apart from some minor pacing and layout issues, this was good. Very well done love. x
A long time have I waited for this, my little green friend!
meh*shrugs* i just got bored and started writing i had something in mind but in the middle of it the poem grabbed me by the hair and said 'SQREW YOUR ORIGINAL WE'RE GOING THIS WAY!' And so yeah... Took a turn for the worst... I need to get something better out here... *sighs*
as i lie here with blood pouring out of fresh wounds
i now realise that my time here on earth is to end soon
theres no pain from the cut, just the memory of you
also, the thought of my death being your fault is there too
i wish i was back in a time of no pain
a time where your love wasn't in vain
when we were happy to spend time together
a time where you said you'd love me forever
my vision slowly burns to black and grey
there was never a thought of how this could end another way
i wish i could warn the next guy of your slow poison to the heart
so when you leave he won't go the same way i'm about to depart
the visions of marriage pass my tear filled eyes
now i'll have another place where family and friends will cry
a painful sight of me caused by your beauty and your might
a lonely house with silence throughout the whole night
tears run down to mix with my blood across the floor
i close my eyes for im getting tired and they're getting sore
through my clenched eyes tears of you still run free
i just wish to know why you did this to me
my time is near i can hear it call to me like the way you used to
i can care less now if this act of mine will actually hurt you
i just could care less of your worhtless, self-sacrificng life
and i can care a lot less that you used to call yourself my wife
i see the end of my rope, my time has come to an end
these are my last memories to you i send
don't come visit me when im buried, like you care
because why now would you want to be there?
this is it, im gone from this place of Hell
i can hear the slow rthym of the death-knell
looks like you had the last laugh, like you said you always do
just remember, the blood and tears on the floor are just for you.