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Canadian.

Gender: Male
Location: Canada eh?

General G's poems and others

Alright, I am rather new at this, this is actually my first, I came and got tips from King of Blades first and he even checked it over for me being it was my first one, thanks again. I am rather proud of my first one, it is about my love:

Her voice is a peaceful song of beauty
Affecting all within its vast range

It doth fills the air surrounding
like the Robin so angelic in the early morn'
With a sound that is naught but astounding
her voice is angelic even in scorn

The verbal lashing is deserved
But I cannot keep the smile from forming
For her voice is forever being preserved
Her anger slowly fading
'I love you' she says
'I know' comes the response

I gaze her in her pearl-like eyes
Asking for no forgiveness
But silently receive it out of habit
'I love you' I say
'I know' comes her response'


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Ya Krunk'd Floo
Moving with the swell.

Gender: Male
Location: West of the Sun.

why


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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.

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General G
Canadian.

Gender: Male
Location: Canada eh?

Why what?


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Originally posted by General G
Why what?
I think he doesn't like it.


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General G
Canadian.

Gender: Male
Location: Canada eh?

No, I would guess not. It was my attempt, I am proud of it for my first one.


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King of Blades
The King

Gender: Male
Location: The South

Your poem was beautiful, please grace us with more. In the meanwhile, this is for you.

Waking noises of war
There lies me shattered in the fray
So goes on the day.

Perturbing oneís sleep
Silent rustling waters
Lap against the rock.

Who yells for the boy
Falling leaves to his feet
Awakening dies

Rapid scribbling
With dark coats of lead and pain
A message for you.

Go with the windís grace
Against the current of man
Live long and prosper.


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