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Prof. T.C McAbe
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Why not

Help me my Friend, I'm going mad,
Against the wall, I smash my head,
Untill I'm sane, until I'm dead...
Too late my Friend, I'm already mad,
I don't even feel, my bleeding head,
I see the blood, I know I'm dead...

You know my Friend, we are all mad...

I don't write poems in english but wanted to try something small big grin.


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Re: Why not

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Originally posted by Batman-Prime
Help me my Friend, I'm going mad,
Against the wall, I smash my head,
Untill I'm sane, until I'm dead...
Too late my Friend, I'm already mad,
I don't even feel, my bleeding head,
I see the blood, I know I'm dead...

You know my Friend, we are all mad...

I don't write poems in english but wanted to try something small big grin.


Very nice thumb up

I like the repeating pattern. Kind of like smashing your head into a wall...

Not that that's what this poem was like.

I'll stop now before I get any worse


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Prof. T.C McAbe
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Location: BatCave

Re: Re: Why not

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Originally posted by King of Blades
Very nice thumb up

I like the repeating pattern. Kind of like smashing your head into a wall...

Not that that's what this poem was like.

I'll stop now before I get any worse


Thank you big grin. No offense taken wink.


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