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Darkness~Calls
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Harry Potter book 7:Harry Potter and the final battle
This is going to be my version of the seventh book. If you have not finished reading the sixth do not start to read until you have finished. I will try and write everday(no promises). if it is good please replie i have no problems with them. I will start posting tmrw, july 19.
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DarkC
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HINT: People like perfect grammar.
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Jul 18th, 2005 06:55 PM |
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crazykim
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coooooool
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Jul 18th, 2005 06:56 PM |
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Midnight109
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ok
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Jul 18th, 2005 08:28 PM |
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Darkness~Calls
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thanx for the advice Dark thats why i write all my stories in word (also write on mugglenet) before i submit them ill post my first chapter tmrw
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Jul 19th, 2005 08:07 PM |
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DarkC
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HINT: .......and good use of paragraphs. Make it steady, not too fast-paced. The readers love detail.
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Jul 19th, 2005 08:17 PM |
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Darkness~Calls
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A/N orry its not much.
Harry sit in his room 2 weeks after Dumbledors tragic death. He would be expected at the Weasleys for Bill and Fluers wedding that day. He stood up and began to pack for he had to be there at 12:30 that day and it was already 12. He packed his muggle clothes and his maurders map. He even packed his school books in case he needs help with a potion or learning a spell.
After he finished packing he went down stairs to tell his aunt and uncle goodbye and see them happy for the first time in his life.
"Aunt Petunia...Uncle Vernon I need to tell u something."
"Hurry up..." said his uncle.
"This will probally be the last time you will ever have to see me again...I am going off to do something that i was meant to do for the whole wizarding community in Britan." they looked nervous. Almost like they were going to get in trouble for letting him go" Before you say anything you are not going to be hearing anything from Dumbledor this past year a teacher killed him."
"Harry please keep in touch get to know us better and we can get to know you better." said petunia. harry was takin aback. He did not know what to say. He just looked at her and nodded.
"I must be going there is a wedding at the weasleys tomorrow. Goodbye." His uncle looked relived that he would no longer have to look diffrent or feel diffrent.
Harry apparated to the burow without a thought from the kitchen. He walked up to the door and knocked.
"Who is zit?" asked a lady behind the door
"Harry Potter."
"What is zee password?"
"RON!" he yelled he was getting no where. A mintue later Ron opened the door and was pulled in. Inside looked a mess things were all over and not because there was a wedding the next day either but because there was a death eater attach.
"Ron what happened?"
"Draco Malfoy paid us a little visit along with that betraying Snape!" said Hermione coming up and glaring at Ron it was clear that they had gotten into a row.
"Snape and Malfoy? Man I wish I was here i would have killed them for what they did to Dumbledor." scowled Harry. Then he heard a yell from the other room.
"Ron go get Remus!" yelled Mr. Weasley from the other room. ASnd with that Ron sprinted off. Harry wen to go look to seee what yelled but an arm caught him and helled him back.
"Not yet Harry." said Hermione sitting down" Have a seat."
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Jul 20th, 2005 12:14 AM |
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Darkness~Calls
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that was really bad i know but it gets better
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Jul 20th, 2005 02:02 AM |
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DarkC
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Well........it IS a little fast-paced.....
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Jul 20th, 2005 02:26 AM |
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hpfanatic99
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it's cool
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Jul 20th, 2005 02:27 AM |
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Midnight109
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its good , but i have to admit its a bit far-fetched (i mean no offence by this
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Jul 20th, 2005 02:39 AM |
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Darkness~Calls
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i just wrote another part but it all got deleted! MY COMP. SUX!!! anyway it was a lot better than the last partnot so 'far-fetched' as the last one so ill write that one in word tmrw and put it on
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Jul 20th, 2005 03:18 AM |
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Midnight109
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your going great so far though .i make the same mistake as you do ,(i'm too fast paced) though i'm trying my best to improve.
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Jul 20th, 2005 05:44 AM |
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Midnight109
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your going great so far though .i make the same mistake as you do ,(i'm too fast paced) though i'm trying my best to improve.
support really helps you improve though.
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Jul 20th, 2005 05:44 AM |
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misslilsweetie
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yeah well good job
im confused today
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Jul 20th, 2005 06:51 PM |
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Harry took a seat at the kitchen table and the thing yelled again.
"What the bloody hell is screaming?!" he asked a little nervous.
"Well its Bill he hes almost the same. When he got out of St.Mungos he was said that he was in shock of what happened. He will act like a werewolf every month on the night of the full moon. Although he will not transform. Lupin will escort him to the shrieking shack the night before and stay with him. If the potions that Mrs.Weasley is giving Bill does not help him recover from the shock of the attach then he will probally be mad for life. And belive it or not hes gotten better." Harry did not know what to say to this. A minute later Ron and Lupin came running through the Burrow from the garden. Hermione looked away.
"I have a couple questions for you." he said looking at her.
"Go ahead." she looked at him knowing what was coming.
"Why did Ron just go and get Lupin and also..." he paused to look at her a moment"why are you mad at Ron I thought you liked him?"
She took a deep breath."Somehow Lupins presence makes Bill calm down mabye he can feel another werewolf in the room or something. And the thing with Ron, he just dosent seem to get that I like him its almost like he forgot that i couldnt stand being around he and Lavender."
Harry thought about this for a moment and then he thought about Ginny who he had not yet seen. He broke Ginnys heart and he broke his own in the process.
"Hows Ginny?" he asked almost in a whisper.
"Upset, you broke her heart. All she ever does is mope arund here. I thought i heared her crying this morning." said Hermione in a comforting way.
"I know I broke my own heart too. I did this for her own protection. If she got hurt i dont know what i'd do." he said. Hermione smiled almost like she found a loop-hole in his plan.
"Harry do you remember what Dumbledor said the diffrence between you and Voldemort is?"
"Yes the ability to love but what-"
"Mabye you can date Ginny. Mabye because you have love that would protect her and you."
"Yes thats true and by me being protected I can also protect the rest of us by defeating Voldemort! Hermione your a genius!" he knew what he had to do. he would find Ginny and see if her feelings had not changed for him. Hopefully they did not. Hermione looked happy to help. "thank you!"
"Your welcome. And Harry by the way no matter what you say the three of us are coming with you. Where ever you go were right next to you." Harry smiled. He liked knowing that he had friends that would risk their lives for each other and him.
"Wheres Ginny?" he asked
"Behind you." said a voice. Harry spun around to see a bright red-haeded girl standing in front of him smiling. She must have heard him because at that moment she went up to him and gave him a small kiss.
"Will you two knock it off?" said Ron coming out of the bedroom.
He pulled Ron aside. Harry thought the least thing he can do was do the same thing for Hermione as she did for him.
"What they hell are you doing?" he yelled.
"Do you like Hermione or what?"
"Yes ofcourse i do!"
"Then why didnt you ask her out last year you ninny?" he said and hit him in the back of the head which made him yelp. Ron turned red and he did not know what to say. Then Mrs. Weasley came out of the bedroom in which Ron came out of and went to Harry and gave him a hug.
"Harry dear. Its great to see you. Ronny told me of your plan . I was not for it at first but seeing as Hogwarts is not re-opening until his whole You-Know-Who mess is over I am granting my permission for my Ronald and Ginerva to come with you. And we will forever be in your debt." she said beginning to cry.
"Thank you Mrs.Weasley." then they went to the kitchen to see what the girls were doing. When they got there they saw something that was shocking. They saw that n their kitchen stood Viktor Krum.
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"So one time at bible camp we made a flow chart... it cant be proven or anything but god created man, and man created transformers...so transformers are like...A gift from God!" Elias ClerksII
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Jul 21st, 2005 02:36 AM |
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hpfanatic99
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your going 2 fast
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Jul 21st, 2005 06:42 AM |
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misslilsweetie
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true srry..but good job!
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Jul 21st, 2005 05:23 PM |
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crazykim
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VIKTOR KRUM, WHA THE HELL?
sorry that i have to say this but i loathe VIKTOR KRUM
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