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not her way to end

She landed on the ground in a heap, the pain emanating off her body,
she
looked up to her parents tear filled eyes, and watched horrified as the
snake like man called voldemort, walked to her. Placing his foot on her
chest, and, stepping down.

She watched as her mother in the arms of her father, cringed, her
father
began to get tears in his eyes, as did her mother, when they heard the
sickening crack of her ribs.

She cried out in pain as voldemort stepped down again before walking
away
and apparating with a ‘pop’.

Ginny looked to her mother and her brother and father remembering how
she
found out the truth about it all.


FLASHBACK

Ginny woke with a start, damn, another dream about the Malfoy's, she
had no
clue as to why she was dreaming about those horrid people. She
shrugged her
shoulders and stood from the warmth of her bed.

Walking across the room, Ginny went to her small dresser and choose a
pair
of light blue jeans with little heart patches sewn on them all over;
she
pulled out a deep purple shirt that says ‘this is the part where I nod
my
head and act like I'm listening’ written across the front in big neon
pink
letters.

She walked across the hall to the measly washroom. A half an hour later
she
stepped out of the shower and got dressed as she looked in the mirror
to
apply her eyeliner and lip gloss, but what she saw was not what she
wanted
to see, with an angry yell she tore from the washroom, down the stairs
and
into the kitchen, where she cried

“Mum the twins put hair dye in my shampoo!” Mrs. Weasley turned and
immediately started crying, muttering the words, “no not now, I’ve had
her
for 15 years please not now”

When all the sudden a pop came from the fire place signaling a guest
had
come, as the two women turned molly cried all the more harder and Ginny
looked confused before she said, “professor Dumbledore sir, what are
you
doing here?”

The old man looked startled and then he turned a confused yet strict
look to
molly before asking, “Why have you not told her my dear molly?”

Molly was to hysterical to answer so Dumbledore turned to Ginny saying,
“take a seat dear.” Ginny sat, and looked expectantly to the aged
professor.
Dumbledore cleared his throat before saying, “you are a Malfoy
miss…err,
Ginny. Your parents asked me to protect you from the harm of voldemort,
when
you were born, I of course, took you in and gave you to a family
telling you
birth family that you would be returned to them in the future and I
guess
fate has played it self out today, for your glamour charm has worn off.
I
can’t give you many details, but once you return to your parents I'm
sure
they can supply
You with Information”

Ginny just nodded and took it all in. then feelings began to rush at
her,
feelings of betrayal and hurt for this secret being kept for so long.
Ginny
stood saying,

“I'm going to get my things I will be down in a few minutes.”

Ginny packed all of her belongings into two trunks, and dragged them
down
the rickety stairs. Saying a hasty ‘goodbye and ‘I love you’ to molly
and
following the hundred and some year old man into the fire place.

Ginny cried out softly as she was lifted into the strong arms of her
father
and carried off, to most likely the little medical wing in the manner.

Ginny woke with a start and looked to the eyes of her lover, and
fiancé.

Blaise looked to his love with tears in his eyes, he knew she was
strong but
the punishment she received was fierce and he didn’t know if she could
make
it.


Three weeks later.

Blaise, Draco and Lucius took turns staying by Ginny. The previous week
Ginny had slipped into a comatose state, she was like a cooked noodle,
un-moving, limp and all around soft, not her usual soft but almost a
mushy
soft.

Narcissa had not left her baby girl’s side for three weeks, no one
tried
after the first week, and Lucius had taken to staying during the day
and
letting one of the boys stay at night with his wife and beloved
daughter.

Lucius remembered how hard it was to accept the fact that his baby girl
had
been raised a Weasley. But eventually the young girl… no… young woman,
had
found her place in his hart, he never stopped loving her from when she
was
born, but he now loved her tenfold to that day.

Ginny was fighting the layers and layers of sleep and pain that stopped
her
from living her life, she missed Blaise’s face, she could hear his
voice,
and her mothers and fathers, and Draco’s, occasionally pansy would come
visit her but she was heavy with child, from what she heard last time.
Oh
how Ginny longed to call out ‘I'm here I still am alive, don’t loose
faith!’
but her own faith was dampening quickly, she tried and tried to open her
eyes,
or to move her hand, but he muscles would not agree with one another,
and
she just got worn out, she needed to try harder, she depended on it.

Ginny thought hard on opening her eyes, ‘come on, open I know you can
do it,
come on, come on..’

But to no avail did her eyes show any sign to opening, she needed to
give
her family reassurance, they were all there, her in laws to be, her
fiancé,
Draco, pansy, and her parents she needed to show them, she was still
there.

All of the sudden she had an itch on her leg, she almost, if she could
move,
jumped out of her skin, the first feeling she had had in only Merlin
and her
parents know how long, without thinking she lifted her hand.


“Draco, Draco look, look!” pansy shouted in joy, pointing towards
Ginny’s
bed, a very doubtful Blaise looked at the same time as Draco, they say
Ginny’s hand twitch, then stop, and then it moved, it fully moved. Then
her
eyes began to flutter. Finally after everyone had turned to look, and
began
holding their breath Ginny opened her eyes.

Pansy, being hormonal and pregnant began to ball, Narcissa doing the
same,
Draco and Lucius went to their wives, tears glittering in their eyes.
Blaise
took a timid step forwards, and grabbed Ginny’s hand and said,

“I thought I lost you.”

Ginny smiled a weak smile and said, “It wasn’t my way to go.”




ok i have tried a new story, i want to know if you guys think i should leave it like this or continue it??? please please tell me what you think.

(this story is un beta'd still)

originally posted on harry potter discussion forum


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cool, interesting idea but a little confusing in the way its written - you jump too quickly between the different points in the story and the formatting is a little confusing too. but in general its really nice and original story


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Gender: Female
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thank you for reading!


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Um- I guess it was interesting.
You could've done better.
But it'sa still a beautiful story! big grin big grin


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harrypotterluvr
misses blaise zabini

Gender: Female
Location: shopping!

thanx!


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quote: (post)
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thanx!


Ur Welcome! smile big grin


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That was good and very interesting. I wonder what wiil happen next.

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