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Destiny Kids! Episode-0;

“—Who’s there?” Nathan a strange boy legged his way across the grassy green field at night with a flashlight in his hand . . .
—The night sky was of a mysterious dark black. Very few stars could be seen in the universe and in the atmosphere. The sounds of an uncertain silence emanated from all around Nathan and stunned him as he approached the strange scene.
—Ghost like voices echoed from far away and whispered in such melodies of happiness and in possession of a various sports ball and there in the field, a game being played in the distances of the scene . . .
—Nobody was seen in the sight though . . .
It sounded as if there were children laughing and playing delightfully somehow far off into the darkness of the field . . .
The soccer field laid out far into the night although; Nathan stood out there all alone far and wide in a cometary like setting, which spooked Nathan a bit.
—Through the sky of the night and down below, Nathan saw everything...
—On the ground in a field of a miniature yellow cohosh he stood there waiting silently . . . —Laid out before him the temperatures rising and falling from the skies a cold and daring windy breeze which began to blow slowly, then faster towards Nathan’s tiny hairs on his face as mists of clear raindrops began to fall slowly from the clear night skies . . .
—Nathan himself had realized that he was running . . . !

In a presume to run even faster towards something unknown in his point of no return a narrow slight point of view . . .
[—Was he possibly running from something. . . , possibly a monster?]
His heart was beating very furiously though.
—Out of nowhere a gray chain link fence appeared through the fog and the tully mist. With amazing agility, Nathan hurled his body in one swoop and he bounced right over the fence and landed on the other side with no preamble . . .
—It was almost like a dream, that Nathan had the ability to do this.
Almost immediately another chain link fence appeared in front of him which Nathan likewise overcame very easily . . . This time when he landed onto the other side . . . , he found himself on a strange abandoned soccer field with a strange feeling of (lycanthropy . . .)
[;—Meaning he had a feeling he was not but a human . . . , but of an animal.]
—Behind Nathan he noticed for the very first time a very heavy animal like breathing . . .
As Nathan stood there looking into the distance he heard this breathing noise approaching him from behind in the darkness slowly . . .
Very slowly.
—As he turned to see it; he was unable to make out the apparency, of what the creature was in the dark background. [<—From which he could not see it . . .>]
—His instincts told him to keep on running with the fear of death at his pace as before him in which he ran with a renewed vigor...
—Faster and Faster... Nathan kept running.

<“—CLINK!”> <“—CLINK!”> All of the sudden (—Instantly,) Nathan stopped. . .
As he slowed to a stop he turned to look behind him to where the recent noises came from. He had sawn something flash on the ground which appeared to be some type of long thick metal object . . .
—He drew closer to it and at once he noticed it was a silver gray bat. <‘Huh?’>
—Nathan thought to himself stunned.”
[<“I wonder what a baseball bat would be doing out here on a soccer field?”>]
He thought to himself as he reached down and picked it up . . .
[—The bat seemed really strong but extremely light somehow.]
<‘—Must be aluminum alloy. . . ’> Thought Nathan to himself?

—While Nathan considered the bat he noticed all the noises of the night seemed to change. The voices and sounds of playing and enjoyment of the children seemed to suddenly vanish, or— evolve into sounds of creatures and monsters . . .

—Nathan had noticed that even the screeching noise had been silenced . . .
In the not so far distance Nathan could now see that the playground was abandoned. An odd new sound emanated from all around him. Nothing to make him deaf just enough to annoy him, possibly sounding a bit stranger then the last noise he had heard . . . Then an eerie feeling overtook Nathan’s mind and his heart was pumping to the scene that surrounded him. His very soul seemed to thicken in the white fog as the night seemed to frighten him even more . . .

[—He felt as if he were in some kind of play . . . !]
[An act . . . !]
As if Nathan felt people watching him and what he was doing in this place and they seemed to be smirking or laughing at him he felt . . . You know, the feeling you get when you feel like you’re being judged or made fun of . . . Well this sort of feeling was the type that burned Nathan inside and made him heat up with anger.
Although, —All alone, by himself only with the indifferent and wondering night to keep him in slight company of a unpredictable future . . .
—Nathan waited then out of the darkness from heavenward, a gray storm of powerful spooky mist with clouds that began to form and swirl up, up high into the sky . . .
A figure suddenly appeared from behind a tree limping slowly . . .
The figure almost looked like a person formed and human yet, it was so slight you couldn’t tell for sure. For the shadow of this figure on the ground blinded it with the figure itself for it was hard to tell whether the figure was human or not . . .
—It just stood out there in a purplish haze. Lightning flashed from all around the clouds and beamed down upon the figure . . .
—Behind the dark shadow the purple haze continued to roll forth and spread out upon the grass.
—Nathan was standing right in front of this shadow. Still Nathan was unable to clearly discern who the figure really was.

—The longer Nathan strained his eyes to peer beneath the haze the clearer the shadow eventually became. He was able to tell that the shadow was a female yet,
. . . Well somewhat. [—He was very confused right now.]
Whatever it was she was as tall as Nathan and looked like she couldn’t stand up . . . She was holding her stomach with her arm as if she was injured.
And as Nathan stood there, he could hear her, seeming to (descant) as if she was badly hurt and mumbling in a last resort of not knowing what to do . . .
The girl although wore a half an inch thick, purple dress with a winter yellow scarf around her neck. Her figure seemed to somewhat tremble unbalanced. Then Nathan saw and heard the swings of a playground begin blown aside or forward swung back and forth or sideways . . .
—The girl stood beside a green bushy tree . . .
—Her long blond hair looking almost golden, blew slowly in the winds as the skies grew more intense and stormy.
—Purple lightning flashed in the darkness behind the girl.
‘...Somebody help me!’ The girl yelled to who ever was on the other side of her or in front of her. She looked like she was limping and having a hard time walking falling down on her elbows onto the ground and then her chest . . .
“—Please somebody help me!” The girl yelled again and in total distress this time.
With her hand and arm out and reaching towards whoever was in the darkness.
‘—What?’ Asked Nathan. The girl was waiting silently in the rain for him on the ground for whoever was there to respond to her...
—It also seemed like the girl was waiting for another answer from Nathan. Her hair still blowing intensely with the winds to the right shoulder of her now then the left behind her back.
Nathan could see her now that the shadow of a tree suddenly turned away from her and uncovered her entire body and face. As the girl laid there the green leafy tree suddenly started to drop its leafs slowly and then quickly until all the green leaves turned yellow and dropped off the tree and seemed to cover the girl entirely...!
[—Nathan became frustrated. . . ]
“—I—I, …Don’t know what to do! Nathan replied as he tried to reply to her. But there was no reply; Nathan suddenly fell quietly.

—He was trying to run near her, to help her, but as he was running, no matter how hard he tried to run he just remained in the same place or moved very slightly or very slowly!
—He just could not get to her at all because he couldn’t do anything to move ahead to her to save her...!

—He leaned backwards onto the ground with his arms out forward. He had fallen backwards . . . He felt himself beginning to leave her.
<“—Wait!”> “—Wait!!!”
“—Who are you?! “What is happening?!” , Nathan yelled out.

(<“—It is your destiny . . . , Nathan!”> )

—Her voice had whispered silently to him. It was as if she was sitting right next him one side and then appeared on the other side of him like a ghost. But she looked as if she was far away still covered in the leaves...!
—The girls ghost whispered something into Nathan’s ear. Yet, quietly from a far off in the Distance or . . . So.
—She sounded as if she was relying on him, for something important, previously a task, agreed upon... It seemed no matter how far away Nathan went from her figure as he flew backwards and to the left through the trees and to the right, she was always there right besides him somehow . . .!

[<‘Wherever I Went . . .’>]
Nathan thought.
[<Where ever I’d go,>]
[<She’d always be there watching me . . . , Waiting for me silently . . . ! >]

—Nathan thought over and over again as he was traveling far backwards flying away from her in a rewinding motion again.
—Everything flashed white as Nathan was traveling backwards farther as purple lightning flashed in the sky and there through cherry blossom trees Nathan flew through their flowers and leaves. Farther away . . . Then up into the sky Nathan saw the ground far below him and he was still being pulled backwards.

Feb 18th, 2004 05:37 AM

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[<‘—What is this supposed to mean?’>] Nathan thought stiffly. . .

[<—Why am I being pulled away from her?! >]

[<‘What is the purpose of this all . . . ?’>]

‘—What is the reason of this . . . ?’

[—Suddenly, ...]

[—Everything became black . . . ]

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(“Nathan, . . . Nathan . . . ”) (“…Nathan”) Something was calling Nathan’s name. In his dreams (“~Nathan …Nathan.”)
The voice seemed sneaky and creature—like.

<“Huh?’> <‘—Who’s there?”> [“... ... ... ... ...”]

(“—Ni–tri–on . . . !”) It replied...
The voice seemed deep and monstrous this time. Nathan could still hear the lightning striking in his head. Electronic occurrences...

“<—What? > <—Who are you? > <What do you want? ! >”
—Nathan asked it he turned in his bed. Whatever it was, it was waiting patiently for a reply back subconsciously . . .

(‘—…Your destiny . . . , The lake!’) It had replied as if giving some kind of commanding advice.
<“—Wait!’> <“—I still don’t know who you are!”> Nathan demanded immeaditley in his dream. (“I’ve been waiting . . . ’) (For a very long time . . .! )

(‘…Search harder.’) (You’ll find me . . . !) (‘Until then’)
(‘—Your destiny will begin . . . !’) [... ... ... ... ...]

(<‘—…Ni-tri-on!”> ) ...Lightning bolts of thunder and statically signified sounds simultaneously struck and flashed rapidly in Nathan’s mind instantly...! Nathan could sense himself rising out of a murky surreal world. Somehow he felt as if he were perceiving another type of reality or perhaps a new dimension. The clearer his understanding of where he was the more fictional the one world around him seemed.”
—It was almost like he could imagine drowning would be, fighting for air trying to break the surface. Yet, he wasn’t fighting for air. He was struggling for clarity. Seconds before breaching the surface he woke, from his odd dream.

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—Nathan raised himself forward . . . His mind was overtaxed, wondering if he just had a dream or was he really somewhere else just then. A deep sense of confusion perplexed his mind. Nathan had looked out once again through his bedroom window. The night seemed extremely dark. The stars of the night were all clearly visible in their familiar constellations. Nathan looked outside, beyond his neighbors . . . beyond the highest roof tops . . . Far beyond the highest mountain ranges . . . Far into the horizon . . . He peered there hard alone . . .

[<‘—Nothing . . . ’>] It was a bad, dream.

—Far into the horizon Nathan looked for . . . something . . . And then like that, he forgot what or why he was looking for . . . ( or at ) . . . If it wasn’t night or that he had his pj’s on Nathan wouldn’t have even known he was sleeping just moments ago . . .
—Like the flashes of lightning, he had totally forgot the visions that he just had. Nathan thought as he sat on his bed again. He could not remember his dreams anymore, much less what they were all about . . .

[—He had totally forgotten everything . . . !]

—Beyond the hills and houses was a lake. Far away from where Nathan’s house laid, a lake called —Laguna Lake . . . Through his window . . . Nathan had noticed the antenna–towers.
Far off in the distance flaring, sputtering, and flashing could be seen high on the tippy top of the one of the Mountain ranges. Acting very strangely . . .

—The Antenna towers were acting kind of strange by flaring energy about and around it. —Blue thin strains of electricity arced up the massive buildings. Once reaching the top, they would arc off. Swerving and flowing down the black antenna wires through the air. The entire while slightly lit small electric strands of sparks zipped and zapped this way and that.
The long black cable wires ran back toward the tall and dark–green bushy pine trees. These trees covered almost the entire mountain side. Nathan watched as the strange electric currents rose higher and higher.

—Nathan’s bedroom window just low enough for the fence to block his bottom view of any thing else. He couldn’t see where the cables actually attached. ‘One of those buildings must have been hit by lightning’, thought Nathan to himself. Nathan realized he couldn’t sleep any longer so he got out of bed. <‘Wah!’> He said to no one in particular. ‘Wah! ,’ Was the sound that he made when he got up? He thought to himself,
[<‘—It’s really nothing too strange . . . ’>] Nathan had yawned in a tiresome attempt to stretch as he rose from his bed. He stared at his calendar on the wall . . .
—Next to his fish tank in his bedroom. ‘Oh–no, I–forgot!’ Nathan thought. <‘I’ve got to get ready for the Midnight playoffs tonight . . . !’> Nathan turned to look at his small black alarm clock with green digital numbers written on it.
(“It’s 8:15pm?”)
—He reached over and turned his night stand light on.
‘Oh man did I oversleep again . . . ?’ Jumping out of bed he searched for his pants, fumbled through his draws looking for ah matching set of socks. Limping over to his closet he searched for a shirt and found his duffel bag with his soccer uniform in it.
<‘Cool . . . ’>. He thought to himself. Pulling his shirt out of the closet he put it on while throwing his duffel bag on his bed. Going over to his bed he sat and put his socks on. Realizing he forgot his shoes he ran back to the closet and grabbed the shoes then ran back to his bed and put his shoes on. Nathan hurried over and turned on the bedroom lamplight.

—Blue neon light shined clearly from the lamp throughout Nathan’s bedroom. He heard a sort of noise from outside of his room. It sounded like the TV. A news report probably . . .
—Looking over at his fish tank, Nathan started to look at his messy room and stuff. ‘You know someday I really need to organize this room’, he thought to himself. At least some of the stuff was in the correct places. Where he left them last. Nathan looked at his open closet door on the other side of his room. ‘At least when it’s closed it hides some of my stuff.’, He mused to himself.
—He had liked his blue shirt and favorite pair of genes. He remembered something else he forgot . . . ! Nathan reached under his bed for his bluish sports bottle. Nathan had tossed it on top of his bed with his duffle. —Fortunately Nathan had already packed before tonight. Checking it rapidly while grabbing his soccer shoes. He tossed the shoes over his right shoulder, the duffle over his left shoulder, and sports bottle in hand he was all set to go...!
—Fully equipped with everything he needed Nathan reached for the light switch on his lamp and turned it off. Closing his door he headed straight out of his room . . . <‘First stop?! > The bathroom.’ Nathan had to refresh himself splashing water in his face and removing any sleep from his eyes.
Since Nathan was at it he decided he’d go ahead and wet his hair down. Before Nathan could, he stopped. —Silently Nathan stood leaning over the sink. His hands shifted near his face getting ready for an extra rinse of water upon it. Nathan began to realize something weird about himself . . . !
—His eyes seemed different from normal. [His blue eyes] seemed to have a strange glow about them. Just a bit ‘Unusual . . . Hmmm’ Nathan thought to himself.
Nathan’s eyes began to tingle followed by a strange burning sensation. ‘Hmmmmmm is this what it feels like to lose your vision?’ Nathan fattily thought to himself. Something seemed different but, everything was the same. At first Nathan thought perhaps he had been exposed to radiation?
He knew that wasn’t so though. Nathan had been in the dark so long it kind of hurt to look at the light.
That’s normal though. Nathan stared at himself a little longer in the mirror. [<‘I’ve got to get a grip . . . ’, >] He thought.
—[‘Although . . . ’] ‘I’ve never felt like this before.’
[‘—What does it all mean . . . ?’]
—He pondered until he saw the clock on his wrist. ‘Oh shoot! I’m gonna be so late!’ As he finished cleaning his face, he headed out of the bathroom swiftly. He barely grabbed a towel to wipe his face dryly.
Nathan shuffled toward the front kitchen by way of the dinning room. As Nathan passed the dinning room table, he looked down to see what was left of his family’s dinner.

[‘—Fried eggs and rice . . . joy of joys’] Nathan mumbled to himself. Apparently Nathan’s whole family had already finished eating earlier. Pulling out the chair Nathan sat to scarf down the rest of his food. Someone had left the dinning room light on. Which Nathan duly turned off. Nathan could hear people in the living room fighting.
It sounded like dishes and stuff where being thrown about. Nervously Nathan approached the living room expecting to see two people in a heated debate with broken stuff everywhere...
—Fortunately he was surprised to see just the TV on.
The TV was the only source of light in the room. It was interesting to see the many hues of light it made on the kitchen ceiling. The yellow colors gave off odd glows.
Nathan reaches down to turn down the volume on the TV. Suddenly, the TV in the living room totally caught Nathan of guard. Nathan had inadvertently stepped on the remote and actually turned up the volume. At the same time he could have sworn he heard someone mention his name.
[—The TV made a bizarre high pitch sound.]

—Yet, the intrusive noise seemed to come from some place far away.
—Nathan listened carefully to the television to make sure it wasn’t the source. All of a second, Nathan thought he heard a weird announcement. For some reason the Television was acting kind of funny.

Feb 18th, 2004 05:40 AM

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—Wiggly gray and colored lines flooded the screen . . . The same kind of lines you’d normally see if the cable was off line. The screen kept getting weirder by the second. The cable company itself was paid for. There was no reason why Nathan’s house was losing cable. Not at this time of morning! “–Hey!’ Nathan banged the top of the TV hopefully. ‘What’s wrong with this stupid thing?!’
Nathan listened more discerningly and thought he heard someone say something about a rampage. Obviously it was a news station that barely came in.
There was also something about, a teenage girl kidnapped...! Nathan reached down grabbing the remote and turned down the volume.
—Nathan tossed the remote on the coffee table. It was then he noticed his sister sleeping on the couch...
—Nathan’s eleven year old sister Nattily was sleeping with a light blue blanket falling off of her. She was lying sideways on the couch sleeping in front of the TV screen.
([<‘Zzz zzzzzz...!’>])

—She was out like a light. Nathan quietly reached down and pulled the cover up over her. She responded by grabbing the blanket snuggling up in it while muttering something like, ‘My blanket’. ‘Typical, even in her sleep she’s selfish.’ Remorsed Nathan.
—Meanwhile it seemed that the news reporter guy on the screen had a deeply concerned voice...

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[News Reporter Man:] ‘—Seven teenage girls have been missing since Thursday. That has been nearly two and a half weeks. For the past eighteen days there haven’t been a sign of the girls.
The local police are coordinating their efforts with the FBI. —Search Warrants are being issued. Nothing is being overlooked nor stone unturned. —The parents of these children are understandably upset.
With me I the parents of one of these lost girls...

“—Pardon me, Mrs. Howabout. Is there anything you’d like to say to the public?” Screaming uncontrollably while crying out,
“Help me please!! Find my babies!”
“—My poor sweet babies!” The News man placing his hand on her back patting her sympathetically.

“—Thank you Mrs. Howabout I’m sure everyone understands the pain you’re going through.” , turning to the camera, “I’m sure all of these dear parents are upset.
—If you have any information please call our station. Or the special hot line which we will flash on your screen momentarily.
—Even as we speak efforts are..., ” Quickly the news reporter grasps his ear piece bending down... He yells into the ear piece,
“—You what?!” Looking back up and turning back to the camera,
“—Thank You!” Said the Newsman to his microphone...

“—This just in folks, it appears, one of our own local police has found a piece of purple clothing attached to a plant.
‘—At this time we are unsure if this is anything significant or not. ”
The newsman mumbles something else and the screen goes back to the news people in the studio.

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“Huh?! ... Well this is interesting, slightly amusing.” Nathan murmered. Then the TV became even more berserk. Nathan had heard some other weird language’s occurring on the screen from other weird foreign newscasts.
It seemed as if someone was determined...
—Trying to contact him though the television. The channels kept changing. It was as if he were listening to it like a radio system...
—Then suddenly, [<—It went blank!>]

“Ok, this is kinda annoying.” Nathan pressed mute on the remote. Changing his mind he turned the TV off... Nathan stared at his sister. (…Hum.)
(<…Better not wake her up...> )
—Nathan thought. Nathan went to the sidewall and grabbed his backpack and stuff where he left it. Nathan had finished his dinner. Now it was definitely time to get going.

—(‘Well–sis?’) (‘...See yah –later.’) Nathan sort of whispered to her as he slowly walked out the front door. He turned around outside and locked it closed behind him. (‘…I’m ready.’)

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—As Nathan heard the dead bolt latch shut he thought he heard something in the house. Shaking his head Nathan thought, “My imagination is going overboard...” The sense of night, it had a calming effect on him.
White stars dotted the dark blue skies. The skies seemed to shimmer with yellow and blue mostly of stars. —Far off in the distance the sounds of cars in motion could be heard.
For some reason it made Nathan’s skin rise with goose bumps. It was actually sort of a pleasant feeling.
—It was a very calm February, Thursday night.
—Nathan headed across the street to get to the bus stop. In a route to the bus stop he stopped right in the middle of the street . . .
BAM! THUMP!
Falling to the ground he found himself looking up at a girl. Nathan saw her bag hit the ground before he could brace to save himself. “—Aawww shoot!” yelled the girl just before grabbing Nathan. Stopping him before he hit the ground.
—I’m so sorry! “I didn’t mean too!” She helped Nathan back up. Afterward she got up off the ground and ran off in a hurry, breathing hard!

‘—Hey wait!’ Nathan yelled...
She was gone...

“Thanks. Well... That was rather odd.” Nathan thought.
She continued running on. Her long blond hair waving in the wind behind her as she ran.
...She has such beautiful emerald green eyes. Nathan thought.
She was as tall as Nathan and wore a purple dress with a pale yellow scarf. Nathan noticed a crowd of people standing just as he rounded the corner.
They were all apparently waiting for the bus.
—Nathan saw the girl as she struggled to get through the centerline of people waiting to get onto the different buses…
Oddly enough the whole scene shifted in Nathan’s head like as if he were watching a television or something, and there was a brief pause... For a brief second it looked like he was seeing though a machines eyes.
Examining everything in implicit detail. All kinds of different types of data scrolled through his line of site.
It totally freaked Nathan out!
—Automatically Nathan smacked his head as it shuttered in radio waves and television fuzz. He shook his head trying to wake himself from this temporary lucid moment.
—Instantly everything went back to normal.
Nathan couldn’t help thinking about the girl she looked so familiar. It was as if Nathan had seen her somewhere before. She seemed so nervous...! —Nathan wondered what was she running from?
Nathan thought it was strange that so many kids were going to this event also...
—When Nathan arrived at the bus stop he was surprised the distance was as short as it was.
For some reason he thought the distance was further away than what it was. His thoughts mused many different quandaries as to the scene he now beheld.
—It looked as if all the busses were packed full of people. Yet, still there were many people still stuck in a line just waiting to get aboard.
—To Nathan’s right were other busses.
Nathan couldn’t figure out why everyone was taking the same bus and not the nearly empty looking one. Both the buses to Nathan’s right were also similarly packed. To Nathan’s relief he saw the empty bus. Nathan sashayed up the bus and handed the bus driver his ticket. While handing the bus driver his ticket he asked,
“—Is this bus going to Laguna High?”
“Yeah.” The driver nodded and turned his attention to the people behind him.

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Minutes later Nathan had arrived at Laguna High School. While looking out the bus window Nathan recalled how this occasion was only for top players and he was one of them. Nathan could hardly wait to try out for their team.

—As the bus neared the school, all he could hear was chattering of other kids and people. The moment the bus stopped, everyone lined up to exit the bus... —Everyone was retrieving their belongings. Nathan watched as an old man grabbed his newspaper, an old lady was still sitting down inside the bus at her seat.
Probably waiting for all the youngsters to get off the bus so she could relax without kids and chattering...!
[—Kind of a graceful way of thinking.]
—Nathan grabbed his duffel bag and stepped down the walkway from where he was sitting.
—As he exited the bus he noticed even more teenagers.
The school parking lot was literally packed with people...

—Nathan made his way through the herds of grazing people. They were packed like cattle. All kinds of teenagers were there like Cheerleaders and soccer players wearing their favorite jersey’s in a rainbow of colors and many of them seemed thrilled to be there.
[—Initially the school didn’t think there would be a lot of people interested in coming to this soccer event. —Not at Laguna High anyways. —It was pretty much a scholastic and prodigy type school.
[—Few people if any thought they’d have this kind of turnout...]
—But given the turn out to day they might go quarterly with the try outs.

—Nathan got stuck behind a pack of Cheerleaders doing their practice routines and stuff. Needless to say they were directly in his path. Apparently the girls were excited to try out their new cheers that they’ve been practicing for so long.
Many of the girls either had boyfriends who were trying out for the soccer team or the football team.
All Nathan’s friends were practicing while he headed to the gym area.
—Nathan walked down the pathway and into the school cafeteria building to go around them to the gym. As he entered the gym he saw some of the P.E. instructors having some type of meeting in a room.

Feb 18th, 2004 05:42 AM

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Nathan then signed in so that it was recorded he arrived after volunteering to show up at his school tryouts for his team. There he arrived outside and near the soccer field he went.
The tests and tryouts on the team began...
—A kid besides Nathan said to another kid. “We must compete over other members also you know.”
“—We have to try our very best if we want to get on this team!” “Yeah!” Said another kid beside the other taller kid. “—Man how I would like to be picked for kicker.” Said a darker looking guy to a more olive skinned kid.
“—Yeah, I bet those kickers get paid awfully good too, and get sweet scholarships!” “Are you kidding?” Asked another kid. “—They get paid overtime!’
“I bet that captain for this team we’re supposed to be trying out for is only looking for the bigger guys to compete!
‘—Yeah he wants pure muscle and meat for a team instead of fast slender and thick at kicking.’ —Yeah. Said a smaller looking kid looking over at Nathan as there were about four of them, all talking...
We have to see if we can be qualified first!
“—Hey!’ You practice during rounds and eat food at the tryouts cafeteria all the time Man?” Said this other kid to another.

‘—Yeah so what?”

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—“Man you eat well, and you get paid!” He said.

‘—Yeah, well what would you expect?’ He joked...

—Meanwhile at the area outside as Nathan watched, a bus comes in and stops at as it’s breaks shriek and the side of the sidewalk the tires rub and a window gleams dark tinted windows. <—A team suddenly arrives...!>
“—We are the Ultimate hyper!!” Yelled the manager. “Test your best skills and we shall start a game off to truly see if you can qualify against us!”
“Every one challenging will know nobody!”
“This is truly a test, to see who can survive and win!”
[—Soon enough Nathan and those other kids all line up to try out in the competitions.]
“Behold, we have brought to you a real challenge!!”
“The latest most powerful team ever to be completed and is ready for a challenge once we qualified almost all of you!”

“—Maximum Plasma!!!” The announcer announced on the microphone. Kids cheered and yelled and screamed as girls and cheerleaders began to do their dances and cheer.
—Nathan looked and saw the team and seemed unsurprised to see the guys dressed in black clothing with orange signatures and samples. Of course no way can he complete rounds with those guys. Nathan rolled his eyes.
[‘This is going to be easy...’]
—You be careful out there. “—Yah hear?’ Yells a kid to another. Yeah! I’ll be careful. I hear!
As every one lines up to play, a short but long game begins. They are ready. The new team in black and orange looks vicious.
—Nathan thought. But deep down in Nathan’s own mind he knew that every team had some kind of down–fall, some kind of weakness...
Suddenly as kids in a line step up they all wait as some others are aloud into the soccer field and they move when the whistle blows. “—Woe!” “They are fast!” And slick!! Says the manager.
—Every one on the Hyper side team is trying to do their best but it’s impossible to keep up almost.
“The ball is in the center and rolling as Alex the kicker, kicks it to the side!” Yells the manager with a microphone...!
He yelled,
<“—Goal!!!”> <“Score!!!”>
Seconds later.
“—That’s one point low for Maximum Plasma!” Said a kid laughing insanely.
—Meanwhile random kids were competing with various members of Plasma. “—Come on!” Nathan yelled.
“Anybody can do that!!” What...? Asked a kid to Nathan. The ball suddenly jumped and it hit a Plasma member as it was knocked off him and kicked into the goal by a regular member.
—Whistle blows! “—GOAL!!!” “Just give it all you’ve got!” The manager yells. Give it all I’ve got? Nathan asked himself.
[—Never really tried or thought about that before.] He laughed. Soon the line of kids shortened and it was now Nathan’s turn.
To stand in front of the line for the tryouts. Nathan waited as he heard horns and instruments blew as their was a sound of rave.
“—Ready when you are!” Said a kid to another in the game as the whistle blows.

—Nathan watched as he saw the kid kick the ball over and another kid bounced it on his head and then this third kid with a red jersey kicked it into the goal like the ball was nothing! Actually the first one to make a major move!
—Replied a another guy.
“—Yeah!!” Yells the crowd. “You go get them!!” Nathan waits as the line shortens and the kids go on the list of their timings and are recorded by the judge as Nathan watches them all carefully. There are guys hustling fast running on the field and then jumping and keeping the ball away from a Plasma member.
—The kid grabs the ball with his foot and turns it left, then right, left, then to the right!
—As another kid kicks it in the goal again. “—Yeah!!!”
“—GOAL!!!”
—Whistle blows and as Nathan was waiting he saw a man standing there in front of Nathan. He was a tall man wearing glasses. He wore a brownish trench coat suit like an agent would. He didn’t look very familiar, but instead, suspicious. “Well, duh. Anyone wearing a trench coat is just begging to look suspicious.” Nathan thought. He looked at the man closely. In one hand he had a notepad, in the other a pen.
And he was writing something down on the notepad as he seemed to be talking to somebody.
[‘—But the strangest thing was that there was nobody besides him.’]
[‘—Nobody there at all...!’]

Feb 18th, 2004 05:44 AM

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—The man looked like an agent. And it was as if he was talking in a miniature black microphone on his shirt Nathan noticed. Soon the line moved up and Nathan saw something as he stepped up closer to the man. He saw what he was writing on his tablet.
Nathan saw names of kids. Their ages also were written on the tablet next to their names...
[—‘Nathan looked again at the tablet after slightly turning to hear and see more people stepping up in line.’]
The strangest thing was all the judges and managers that were writing down names and signing up kids for the <Team Hyper> were all near the seat posts inside the arena.
‘—But this guy was outside.’ Why was there a guy standing outside the arena and signing names on a paper?’ [‘What for?’] To Nathan this thought seemed yet strange and yet very suspicious. “Something’s up, I’d better keep my eye on this guy.”
—But as Nathan looked closer at the man he saw he probably worked for the police and the (FBI) or something...
—Meanwhile the tryout captains stepped down from their seats and awed at the sight of their new players. Nathan thought again...
—And then he was at the very front of the line he noticed. It was his turn to play.
The man at the front of the line allowing kids in the game assured it was Nathan’s turn and so he let Nathan in the arena.
Nathan walked down the grass in a proud sort of way as he felt that this was his chance to prove himself victorious. As the crowd saw him approach the game and the main player the main kid on the Hyper team stepped up to Nathan.

“—Alright you stay in the front and knock the ball out of their reach.’
‘—Got that!?” The guy asked Nathan. “Yeah, I got that...!’
Then the whistle blew and Nathan started up and ran as the ball was kicked by the guy on the Plasma team.
Nathan snagged the ball and ran, but then it was kicked away from Nathan to a guy in purple and green clothing on the Hyper team.
“The guy hits it ‘left–to–right” Nathan thought. The guy kicked it right to avoid a Plasma player and Nathan received the ball left, and guarded away from the opposite team. —Nathan ran with the ball and kicked it with a flying karate jump. It flew gracefully into the net, one point for Team Hyper.
“—YEAH!!!” Members yelled and rejoiced.
“Well, at least it’s a start.” Said the main guy on the Hyper team. Just as the teams began again, Nathan heard a kid snicker close, but in the background off the field. He knew he wasn’t hearing things. He heard a voice as if out of thin air. He looked around and he saw the other team as they weren’t even talking to each other. [<“—Hey!”>]

[<‘—Watch that new kid! —He’s kind of fishy!’>] Said some other guy as Nathan stared at him but he didn’t say anything. Nathan heard this as if he were listening to their thoughts, like as if he was tuning into a radio.
[‘What?”]
[—Impossible...] Nathan thought.

[‘—How on earth am I hearing what they are saying if they aren’t even speaking to each other?’]

‘—Then, all of the sudden Nathan was hit with a force of thought like never before. It all started when Nathan saw a newspaper article about something...!’

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—Nathan remembered seeing it when he was ten years old. His dad was reading a newspaper holding it up at Nathan’s old house.
—Something Nathan remembered seeing on it... The year on the newspaper was —2031...!

Something that read on this paper.

[‘—There had been some experiments done on children and teenagers in the past in which scientific brain research told that,
That they were probably gave an extra gene in which it caused those children to have the ability to hear radio signals...

—With this ability these kids that were born with they could speak to each–others minds without saying anything with electronic devices...

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—Nathan knew about this.
But this couldn’t be true! [<‘—Could it be?’>]
[<‘...Why on earth?’>] How did I even remember seeing that news paper article?
Thought Nathan.

[<—Some people could hear it!>]

[<—Others pray they didn’t hear it!>]

[“Ok!”] Nathan shook his head trying to get those voices out of his mind.
—Nathan was stunned. Nathan was shaking his head standing in the middle of the field. “Hey!” ‘What is that kid doing?!’ The manager asks.

[<“—What? He knows of us!” “—He can hear us?!”>]

[<“—He actually can hear us?”>]

—Another says to another plasma kid as Nathan noticed this...
The whistle blows and Nathan moves out then another kid moves in.
Nathan hustled as he grabbed the ball with his foot. He ran to the right and he knocked it into a Plasma kids chest as it bounced off. It flew into the air towards a group of his team and another kid kicks it.

[<“—No, Go that way, —I’ll get him from the right!!”>]

—Nathan heard this through radio waves as he stunningly ran to the left. He knew for some reason what this kid was thinking of and what he was going to do.
—Nathan ran up swiftly and grabbed his pass with his feet again and ran with it towards the goal at danger instinctive speed! “—Hey!” “—Now this kid is pretty good!” Says a judge by the manager. Then suddenly a kid grabs the ball from Nathan and kicks it opposite of him.
He kicks it to another black dressed guy and they get a goal 2 to 1...!
—That was what the score was. [“No way!”] Nathan thought. Nathan knew that those kids knew Nathan could hear them and that Nathan could read their minds.
[‘But Nathan guessed again...’] I have to turn this up a notch or two.
—If I’m going to win. Nathan thought. Then as Nathan saw a kid slowly glimpse directly at him something hit him. Nathan felt strange suddenly.
He knew the next thing was true.
Nathan avoided contact with their eyes and their mind and suddenly Nathan heard their voices.

Feb 18th, 2004 05:46 AM

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[<“—What?!”>]

[<—He is avoiding us!>]

[<“—Now we can’t read his mind!!”>]

—Nathan laughed to himself. He was thinking something different and he lost track of those kids radio waved voices.

—Those kids think they can fool me.
[‘I know what their saying...!]

—But suddenly Nathan almost didn’t feel quite right. The whistle blows again.
“—Go team go!!!” “—Go team go!!!”

“—GO TEAM HYPER!!!” Cheerleaders scream over the game. Meanwhile Nathan’s in perfect range as the whistle blows.

Then just as a Plasma kid tries to grab the ball from Nathan, Nathan kicks it ahead and runs really fast, dodging all and takes the ball all the way to the end and kicks it into the goal!

“—Nathan scored...” Quietly Nathan looked at everybody and walked off back to his position.

[<“—NOOOOOO!!!”>]

—Nathan could hear their voices yell in agony. “Now lets play this right!” Said Nathan’s team. His own team huddled.

“Well here I go.” Nathan thought. The Whistle blew.
“—Lets play!!” Hyper team yells. Nathan ran for it.

He swooped out “Woah!” A kid screeches then Nathan hurries the ball as another kid tries to stop him and falls. The judges step down a porch and a coach steps towards team Plasma in a huddle.

“—Huddle, Huddle!” The whole Plasma team huddles up and then steps all together in a crowded circle. “Huh?!” Nathan thought as he watches them.

[‘What are they up too...?’] “Hey. Kid! Their starting to get pretty nervous about you.” Another kid says to Nathan.

‘—Wouldn’t you think?’ —Nathan heard the kid say. Nathan tried to listen to the huddled up team but as he tried to listen, all’s Nathan heard was mumbling in the background as Nathan looked behind himself.

The last sentence Nathan heard was the only one he heard in his head.
It was:

[<“—Just watch that kid!!”>]

“What?” Nathan thought. “Ok! Now lets get this on!” Team Plasma all hurried up. Plus a new guy appeared in front of Nathan to tried to stall him.

—Huh? Who are you? Nathan asked the kid.

“—I’m the one who’s going to kick your butt you little Hyper wimp!”
The guy yelled at Nathan. “Oooh! You must be feeling like a special muffin!” Nathan baby-talked. “What the heck?!” The kid replied, trying to sound more mature than him.
The game began again...
When the whistle blew Nathan rushed out avoiding the kid! Nathan ran past all those hefty flashy dressed uniformed people and right about when he was going to hit it in the goal this newer kid just bumped Nathan aside and hit him viciously to the ground with his elbow.

“AGHHH!!”
And just as Nathan fell down his fingers stretched out and became hardened. Nathan rips across the leg of the one that knocked him down.

<“—AGGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!”> The kid screamed!

“Oahhh!” “What the? What’s wrong?!” The other Plasma team members yelled. —Just then as Nathan reached to his feet to get up his fingers become normal again.

“…What the!? What happened?”
A time out was taken and the coach and manager came over to investigate the scene.

They looked at the kids leg. <“OahhHHAA!”> “It hurts! It hurts!”
A kid in green and purple came up to Nathan as he stood!
“Nice going!

That was awesome! You sure showed that kid something! Good job man put it there!” “W-what happened? Did he pull a knife at me and it back-fired? Or...” Nathan replied quietly, rather perplexed, looking at the slash marks on the kid.

<“Clap!”> The kid who high-fived him suddenly ran over and kicked the ball into the goal.

“SCORE FOR TEAM HYPER!! WE ARE THE ULTIMATE CHEESEBURGERS!” He laughed!

He thought it was pretty funny, so that others were laughing too! Nathan needed somebody to call an ambulance. The injured kid screeched. <“Somebody!!”> A couple of men just came up to grab him by his waist and feet!

—His leg was bleeding. “Woah!” That’s a pretty deep cut. “How deep?!” Oh not deep enough to touch his bone, but pretty deep! “—Owe!!!” It hurts! Somebody! That kid did this to me!
Said the big kid that got injured. “What in carnations?!” Is going on here?
The manager yelled!

Every one there was shocked. Everyone glanced at Nathan as all the kids they all gathered around to see his leg!

“Whoa.” exclaimed a medic. This is no ordinary scrape...! It’s a cut! It looks as if it’s been cut by some kind of animal claw or something! Or something...? The Manager asked. Everyone glanced at Nathan as Nathan walked off trying to act normal.

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—Ten minutes later after the game, Nathan began to go to the locker room. Off the field it looked as if the manager and coach and some two strange looking people were talking afar from Nathan then as Nathan stood there in the pathway they saw him. “Oh—no!” Nathan thought.
Those men began to come near him slowly walking up to him.
[‘They were wearing dark glasses...’]
They saw Nathan and began to run after him.
Nathan went behind a corner slowly and just as he turned to look behind him he saw them.
“—Get him!!” —They were actually after Nathan!
[‘—What did they want?’] As Nathan ran and hid behind a corner of a packed locker room nobody even noticed him. Every one was changing in the room.

<“—Oh will get him yet!!”>

Yelled a guard at the side of the lockers and didn’t see Nathan hiding around the corner. <“—Guard the doors anyways!!”>
<“Just in case we cant loose him!”> Yelled another man on the search also. Nathan waited hidden behind a locker room shaft closet with a door inside a fenced in room.
Nathan kind of felt afraid… He couldn’t believe it. There were people actually after him.

Feb 18th, 2004 05:53 AM

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[“It was too unreal.”] Nathan didn’t want to get caught. So he bunched up tight, with his knees bent and held them close to his chest. He waited about ten to twenty minutes.
Waited for the last people to get out of the locker room. The lights dimmed.
—Nathan stood there in a now quite darker locker room which the lights were being turned down the lesser kids there were in the locker room.

Nathan then decided it must be ok to go now. Then Nathan got up and walked down the hallway slowly and looked behind the corner. He ran across the hallway.

—Nathan went to his locker and he then switched to his regular shirt and pants as he heard strange electrical humming noises from a lines of gray metal pipes and hinges from above heading down to the exit. Nathan knew he’d better get out faster, because the doors outside the locker room would soon be closed up.

Nathan decided to head for the door. When all of the sudden, Nathan ran right into one of the managers actually.

The manager... Nathan looked up quite frightened in his own state of mind.

—The manager stared down at him and gave a straight face. Then as Nathan tried to go around him with out saying a word he blocked him. The man looked at Nathan in a suspenseful way.

—Then Nathan smiled and then tried to pass him again and he blocked Nathan.

“What gives you the right to injure my players!” The manager looked at Nathan slowly and dreadfully in such a voice and in disgust also.

—Nathan became quite and paced in those sudden words... Slowly backed away in the tone of his voice.

[‘—It was creepy...’]

—Nathan almost wanted to run for it. But Nathan wasn’t scared. He wanted to know something.

It seemed as if it was some kind of trick he didn’t say anything after that for a while.

The same idea of it repeated over and over in Nathan’s mind.
“Well?” asked the manager.
“What do you have to say for yourself?!” Asked the manager upset.

‘Kid you made a big scene out there today!” You caused the police to get involved. Where’s your three bladed knife? Or did you mutate a tool to dispose my player with?!

“I used no knife! ...What?!...” Nathan asked suddenly quietly...

‘—The FBI knows what you did kid.’ They are the ones who have sped to place you under arrest!

“They are after you now as we speak!!” The mangers voice was now really loud now, which felt like a sharp thorn in Nathan’s side which stunned Nathan so suddenly...
“…But why?”

—Nathan asked. It was only an accident no more!
—Nathan tried to convince him. The manager still seemed very displeased. Oh my. Said the manager.

Their’s some of the FBI now... He said in a very bad way.
—Nathan looked docile and afraid in seconds. Nathan began to try and move out of the managers way but manager blocked the door and still wouldn’t let Nathan pass!

‘—Listen!” Said Nathan. “—You’ve got it all wrong!’ I didn’t hurt anybody. Nathan said.

“—That is a complete lie!!!”
The manager yelled in a mad way that made Nathan shiver again. Nathan stood there and didn’t know what to do now. But then he thought of running the other way and he went for it!

“You can’t escape kid!!!”

<“You’re in deep trouble!!!”> The mangers voice echoed down the P.E. locker room hallway as Nathan ran!

Just as Nathan dogged for the door he saw two nicely dressed FBI agents stepped slowly through the back door down the locker hall and blocked it. They were wearing black tinted small sunglasses. Nathan then stopped in shock and turned around and slid while doing so.

—Nathan ran all the way back down the hallway and came back to the angry manager who tried to grab him but missed.

—Nathan went passed him and almost made it out the door just until two more nicely dressed in black and gray suited agents stepped inside and looked at Nathan as they took out their badges and held them out so Nathan could see them. Nathan was totally shocked at all the agents in the locker room.

‘—Kid, you’re under arrest for assault on a individual.’ You have the right to remain silent!
—They pulled out silver handcuffs and opened them up and placed them around Nathan’s arms. They closed they shut. Nathan looked puzzled... What on earth?
He thought.
“Did I mention that you are also the suspect of awkward mutation?”
—You will be contained, kept, and placed under analysts for the government! Said an agent on the right of Nathan. “What?” Nathan asked. ‘Are you trying to say I’m a mutant?!’ Nathan asked. You’re all insane.

<—You’re all crazy!> I’m getting out of here! Nathan said as he broke free from the agents trying to grab him and ran off handcuffed and headed straight for the door!

Hold it! A man steps in front of Nathan with a bat and hits Nathan on the back hard just as he turned around to run the other way. Nathan fell down... Meanwhile the agents all grab Nathan and pick him up off the ground.

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They all carry him to the edge of the campus to the parking lot!
They all stand around a police hospital van and all carry Nathan and throw him into the van. Meanwhile the manager looks at Nathan and laughs hard in a vengeful way.
<“Wait!!”>

—Nathan yells as he is stuck inside the van. He bangs on the window and just about as the people get ready to hop into the van, <“—HOLD IT!”> A man in a brown trench coat says as he steps up to the van and Nathan see’s him all of the second through the windowed back of the car. Nathan heard mumbling and then he heard yelling...
Then he heard the man say something...!

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[‘Five minutes passed and then suddenly the doors opened on the hospital van and Nathan was leaning on the doors trying to listen to what they were saying as he fell out on his chest and slowly began to get up!

“—Hey!” What gives...? Nathan asked them all.
“You’re case is over.” Said the man in the brown trench coat.
—“There will be no case involving you! You are free to go. There is nothing more to identify...! All’s we know is the cuts on the kids leg were caused by sharp objects in the grass that we found.” Suddenly the man showed Nathan these objects.

“We took a sample of you’re DNA and we tried to match it with the blood or finger print essence on the knifes and there is no match!
—Between me and you, you are not involved...! So you are free to go.
There is although no proof you were carrying sharp objects in your hands. Because many people saw you and saw something else...”

—“Well, you’re free to go...!” Continued the man, “Everything all’s been taken care of!”

“All—right!” Nathan said. Suddenly a couple agents uncuffed him and he was free to go...!
Nathan looked at them all and he suddenly walked away from them all as they all hopped in their cars and left suddenly.

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Nathan was left and he stood there for awhile in reflection. Then all of the sudden the manager walked up to him.
“I know it was you kid!”
“—There is no way you’re innocent...!’ I will prove your guilty one of these days.”
“Oh and by the way I will make sure you never get on the soccer programs again! And that you will fail in qualification to all sports you try to intend to!”

“—...What?!” “—You can’t!” Nathan said, “why would you do this to me?”
“You know why.” The manager replied, “because I know what you are! You’re a freak!! —And I don’t let freaks attend the team!”

—“What!?” Nathan asked. “I’m not a freak! And I’m a good player!” Nathan said to him. “How can you prove your insane claims?”

“I know because I saw what you did very clearly!” The Manager yelled.
The Manager then came up to Nathan and pushed him back and yelled. “—Out of my way you freak!!”
—Now Nathan watched as the Manager walked away in a hustling grudge against Nathan. Now he knew that his days of trying out for a soccer team were over... But he stood strong and looked back towards the manager.

Feb 18th, 2004 05:56 AM

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—Nathan now waited for his bus while cars picked up other kids in the lines outside the chain linked fences of his school. It looked like Nathan’s soccer reputation would never build up to famed potiential. Angry at what he had become of himself Nathan’s eyes gleamed at the ground and in an upset sense of injustice...
With a strange almost unseen way of thinking Nathan thought to himself.
They’re just afraid of me. [—They knew I could have been the best...]
Almost as if Nathan was possessed with a abnormal thought. He could see images of people in his past.
His mom his dad and his sister Nattily... These thoughts proceed through Nathan’s mind. Would they be upset if that had found out what had happened to him tonight...?
And what if those people arrive at his house?
Would they endanger his life? [...Some alien creature...?] Nathan thought. What am I really...? He looked down at his hands and then his fingers. Then Nathan looks down at a puddle of water in the road. His own reflection gleams at him then vanishes in the dark night time sky. Till no one is left around in sight at night...
Nathan waited, and he waited, until all the people all vanished.
“The parking lot is totally empty... —Hey where is my bus?” Nathan thought.
He jolted to look around. Then he calmed himself down and looked at his fingers.
[<...Nobody believes me.>] I’m innocent... Nathan thought.
Suddenly that very thought made Nathan’s anger vanish...
Still waiting in the front of the school for his bus... It was quiet and Nathan hardly heard anything.
He didn’t even budge. He was leaning against a wall almost seeming to want to sleep. He could not take it anymore. Did those mean people cancel his bus ride home?
Or was he just too late for the city bus to arrive at the bus stop? This question had sewn his lips. He did not dare speak at the moment...

He was afraid too for some reason... [...Maybe...] One of the reasons Nathan was afraid, was Maybe because somebody was watching him he felt...
—The quiet grounds of the place seemed to dimin a little bit. Nathan felt that being alone on the school campus at night gave him a haunting sort of eerie feeling.

A very creepy feeling...
—That he could not yet seem to notice or understand. But yet Nathan felt a rage to do something drastic...
—Sense nobody was there at the school grounds, Nathan felt that he should go find a phone and call for his mom or dad to pick him up... -When suddenly! He heard a strange thumping sound around the corner of the school building.
Nathan thought he saw a tree move and then shake a little... Nathan heard a strange sound. Sort of like a chainlink fence rattle or a car cruising yet a girl yelling... A shrieking noise!
<No!!> <“Please don’t, Stoop!!”> Her voice echoed in the area.

<‘Leave me alone!’> <“Leave me alone!!”>

—Then Nathan hears a screeching shriek and then a scream. A terror like cry came from within the once abandoned soccer field.
Nathan heard everything and immeaditley ran to go investigate! He ran past the street behind another building and he sees stairs as he begins to climb up them quickly.
He raced and climbed a hill until he reached the top of the upper school grounds. But to his surprise he heard a strange voice saying something strange...
[‘It sounded like a cackling deep man voice...]
—Right around the corner of a very tall building that was part of the huge school auditorium, something in a black cloak that looked tall and creepy was standing over a girl.
—The thing yells.
<“Now hold still!!”> <“NOOOOO!!”> <“AGGHHH!!”>
<“Keep away!!”> A strange girl, she shrieks in the night. She screams up in the air with her lungs and in the cloaked things hand there was a strange needle device...
(<“Who’s she?”> )

(<“What is that thing?’> )

(<“What’s going on?!”> )

Were the thoughts that were going through Nathan’s mind.
(<“Don’t worry help’s on the way!”> ) Nathan thought.
—Nathan jumped over to the fence and found a baseball bat lying on the ground near an unlocked equipment shed.
Nathan ran over with the hard silver metal bat ready to cause great harm to unknown menace.

<“Wait!!”> The thing says. Nathan turns around the back of the thing. Nathan couldn’t see it’s face! The wind blew. Nathan was quiet with the bat in his hands waiting to attack the thing. <“What?!”> “Who is that?!” The creature thing yells.
<“Who’s there?!”>

Nathan looked towards him. “—Who’s there?!!!”
Nathan ran away and ducked behind a bench seat on the grass and low underneath the seat beneath it ready to hit anything that came his way.
The creature turned and looked to see if anyone was there. Then it decided to raise the needle again to its captive.
<“Now hold still this wont hurt a bit!!”>
“I’ve come to destroy you little girl.” “I have you now!” <“Come here!”>
<“Let me go!!”> Yelled the girl, kicking and struggling. <“No!”> There is no other way than killing you now! The creature says. <“No you cant!”>

<“There must be another way to salve this!”> The girls tells the thing. No there is no other way than killing you my dear! <“Now I’ve got you yet!”> While the creature warns the girl to remain. But she cant resist. <“WHAT?!!”>
The girl breaks free from the monster and jumps out of his arms.
<“—Why you little BRAT!!!”>

The creature mysteriously swoops out! While on the ground waiting Nathan stays calm under the bench seat.
The creature decides to continue his operation. <“Now I’ve got you!”> Huh?! What’s that sound?! The girl then ducks and the creature loses her again! <“Noo!!”> He yells. No!
<“I haven’t lost you yet!!”> <“—Leave me alone!!”> I’m not coming with you!
<“You— creep!!”> Yells the girl.
“No! Don’t!!” Yells Nathan. The creature yells suddenly.
—Nathan decides it’s his chance to strike and he runs towards. His foot trips over more metal bats. The bats tumble down to the grass. Oops! Nathan thought. <“What?!!”>
The creature asks. So we happen to have a little visitor! Growls the Monster! The Monster leaves the girl on the ground lying down and decides to go after Nathan! Nathan stands, the thing sort of dashes and then runs as strange towards Nathan like as if a mechanical maneuvering or something.
—Nathan ducks one last time behind the stool he had tripped on. He grabs the strongest Metal bat he could find. He leans up and strikes at the monsters arm!
The creature backs up.
<“Noo!!”> <“Don’t!!!”> Cries the girl. She cries again.
<“Leave him alone!!”>
<“Leave him out of this!!”> She yells in distress again and again! Nathan and the creature fight and fight.
Nathan climbs a fence jumps over off of it almost doing a complete backwards flip and hits the monster even harder than before.
<“—FOOL!!!”>
<“I WILL DESTROY THOSE WHO STAND IN MY WAY!!!”>

Yelled the creature. The girl meanwhile try’s to run off, but then,
<“Oh no you don’t!!!”> The monster angrily growls as she grabs after the girl again. Just about when he turned after her, Nathan swung a hard one!

<“Ouch!!!”>

<“—WHY YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!”>

Feb 18th, 2004 05:58 AM

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The creature grumbles.
—Nathan again swings at him. But this time the creature gets his arm in position blocking Nathan’s next hit slickly and Slashes Nathan’s bat! And then it breaks like a long tin foil can almost.
Slicing it totally in half the creature does. The creature swipes at Nathan and throws him with the back push of his side right arm!
—Nathan attempts again than falls.
The creature grabs him by his blue material shirt, Holds him for a second,
<“You little fool!!!> He growls.
<“Don’t you know what I am?!!”> I’m pure power and strength!
<“Existing in a living body!!”> <“I can not be hurt so easily.”>
He throws Nathan to the ground!

[—Nathan is badly hurt!]

When all of the sudden Nathan fills a strange surge of power rising through him. The girl meanwhile was summoning something to happen. With her neckless! —Closing her eye’s it suddenly floats up and shimmers and shines a sparkling glitter of power. Light shines over onto Nathan’s body. He gets up. <“NOOO!!!”> The creature yells.
<“Where did that source of energy come from?!”> A mystic neckless?
“—The girl!?”
<“—I must get you!”> “Nathan gets up once more attacking with his fists at the monster. Such power he’d never felt ever before in his life assures him victory!
With the power of his fast fists.
—He fills energetic power! Rushing through his body.
<“STOP IT!!!”>
The Cloaked creature dashes and grabs the girl! Turns her way.
“Nooo!!” Nathan yells and runs after him.
“—You fool!!” The ground begins to shake a little and calms down a bit. Huh? Nathan stands too close to the creature.
<“NATHAN LOOK OUT?!!”> Yells the girl. “Huh?!” Nathan asks.
How did you know my name? He asked her... The girl screams again! An orange scorpion like tail sneaks up threw the split underneath end center slice of the creatures huge black cloak behind the creature!
And just as it strikes it misses Nathan! <“You fool!!>
<“I am far from anything!!!”>

—Nathan starts to move but the creature is acting strange! It begins to shake and change...
[<“Sttttttttzz!!!”>] The creature began to transform. <“—STUPID—HUMAN!!!!”>
You have no idea what you’ve become!
—The creature begins to rip through his cloak. Spikes appear to be protruding out of his shoulders and they appear.
He then transforms to reveal a weird beetle bug like face. He growls loud and curves his body into a downward C shaped thing of a neck.

And his eye moves in a spiro direction revealing green eerie spiro looking monster eyes. <“—GRRAHHHHGGGHH!!!”> He screams and swipes his scorpion tail at Nathan! <“Ruuun!!!!”>
The girl yells and scurries off. Nathan shrieks in a panic of great fear.
—He jumps up and he runs. It comes near him with an angry gleaming spark in its spiro looking eyes. Nathan keeps running and it follows after him.
The faster Nathan ran the faster it had ran. Like a giant monstrous rhinoceros beetle combined with that of a scorpion and a giant lizard.
Nathan ran threw the soccer field past a gate baseball diamond fenced door and closes it and runs while hearing it run threw It had stomped the ground tremendously like a tyrannosaurus rex.

<“…Huh?!”> It was mutating while growing. It got bigger and bigger the further it came Nathan’s way. Now things were getting really getting scary. When Nathan had rushed through the fence climbing it and jumping over it and falling to the other side, with the things face like as if it were as tall 16 feet to 12 feet tall school fences were maid of barely thick enough. Tin foil compared to the strength of this monster. It was roaring now like a giant meat eating beast coming down the mountain hills Nathan’s way.
—As if all its personality transformed into instinct to do nothing but Kill! Still the whole dang place was abundant still and no one around for miles what the?! Nathan ran aside the buildings as his ugly orange face came through the top of the tall trees.
“It was gigantic.” Nathan kept on running and he ran as fast as ever!
—Nathan was running out of options and time!

—Suddenly it came through the trees and jumped over me giving off a power blast Rocket affect as in its movements!
…It was in front of Nathan! It swung its tail many times hitting anything in its site! Even electronic flashes of power lines gave off!
Electronic waves of blue energy and began to flow along the power cable cords,
—When all of the sudden, it corralled to give Nathan a sting with its tail just missing him the first time, like a Razor with out filling pain Nathan was injected the second time! With a tiny bit of (green—lizer) gooze!
—Nathan fell to realize his face on a puddle of water! His eyes were glowing, his lively blue eyes changed somehow into a glimmering sapphire shortly! …
—Nathan sees the creature come again with another whip when all of the sudden something makes him jump!
His hand looks different. It was changing. His hands begin to transform into a creature’s or something. <‘What am I?’> Nathan in mid air stares slowly at his transformed hands. “The creature dashes and spins scorpion like with its long tail.” <“AGGGHHHH!!!”>
Nathan yells as he slashed at the creature with his hands and claws then what appeared to be long sharp claw fingers. It went back somewhat.
Nathan runs off and with the creature right behind him. While Nathan is running the creature hurdles from behind a corner of a school building. It slips and gets up from behind!
“Nathan runs and runs down into a strange shed like building garage while inside he heard the creatures footsteps beat against the ground. Nathan turned to see.
<“GREAT!!”> <I’VE LOST HIM!> The creature yells.

<“I’VE LOST HIM AND THE ANCIENT ONE!!!”>

<“I’LL GET MY REVENGE!!!”>

—Nathan is now inside the building and beside a window. Nothing there.
[<‘Shuue I must be safe.’>] “Wait!’ Should I look? Nathan thought. He slowly turned to look again. And he saw its green Spiro eye notice him all of the sudden. It saw him right at the window. Staring at Nathan from the side!
[Bad choice to look.]
[“I shouldn’t have moved.”] Nathan thought.
“—AGGGHHHH!!!” The creature screams in relief almost as if in a shrieking way and a monstrous tone of voice. He had found Nathan. Nathan crawled helplessly toward some tool saws used for cutting large pieces of solid wood! And then <“CRASH!!!”>

—The ceiling of the basement garage broke half way! The creature! It was coming in! …Nathan went to the side door where he had figured it wouldn’t be, but he was wrong! It reached in through the door with its hand busting it and then came its “head!” …Along with its large devilish long curved— inward bug pinchers it came busting in slowly. Its mouth began to, clamp open and shut! It was trying to eat Nathan!

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Nathan kicked a case of heavy tools out onto its face!
Then Nathan reached for a strong metal rod or something but he lost it, down a floor crack of wood Nathan reached for everything prowling around for different options. “Oh no its too late!! Nathan shut his eyes and curled up into a small hunch! Nathan became so afraid he put his arm back hoping to hang on incase he broke the floor. Then Nathan accidentally pushed a large leaver of some sort! …As the creature came!

—Nathan yelled and screamed in terror and then a whirling metal sound of a “steel saw,” became dominant above all sounds in the environment of loudest sounds here! The saw blade!!
“—That’s it perfect!!”
Nathan pushed the table towards the creature; the stupidest thing was the creature just kept on coming! There! “Now!!” Nathan yelled! Nathan kicked the table once more and it landed on its side! (“Whirrrrrrrrl!!!”)
—The creature still coming the creature kept on screaming as it came towards the ground. A large piece of heavy wood came down pinning the creature’s head onto the floor! And the ground cracked and broke more and more!
And the saw blade came sliding down slowly the creature lifted itself breaking the wood when it came up Nathan was right in front of it! It was going to stand up straight and lower its head to clamp down on Nathan and devour him! But then Nathan saw the saw blade in front. Nathan kicked the handle to turn it on. Then as the creature lowered to defeat Nathan, it cut right through the creature’s stomach! And chest,
—The Monstrous creature screamed in terror! “Rahhhhhhhhhhh!!” Growl—!!!
(-------“Whirl, whirl, Whirl, whirl!!!-----”)
Went the saw blade! Then the creature “erupted- exploding” with ooze and who knows what totally into half! […And it was dead...] … …Nathan felt himself in relief and all his energy token right out of him! His hands were normal again! And Nathan fell down “asleep,”
He—…fainted from the over excitement of the monster trying to kill him! …Nathan fell asleep, Nathan saw quick flashes of memory accruing in his head, Spinning around, and around. Nathan saw himself, the soccer game, the girl in trouble, the creature in the cloak, and what it transformed into!
…And Nathan saw it die in his own mind!
And Nathan was left spinning in his own darkness. Almost suffering. Crying… —Alone in his sleep.
“His leg felt injured.” …Was this real or not?
Then Nathan fell totally asleep. He woke up suddenly, and he was somewhere now.

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—He was riding on a bus home. Strangest thing was he didn’t even remember how he even got on the bus... He looked outside his dark black glass window and saw and heard sirens of hospital vans and police cars outside and he wondered why he heard them rushing to get somewhere.

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—Something important. But it wasn’t clear at all.
[‘What on earth happened to me?’] Nathan thought to himself as he sat up in bed, confused.
…This particular night Nathan awoke from a rather peculiar dream.
His head was spinning as he tried to make sense of it all. Nathan reached one hand up over his face and slide it down as if to wash the exasperation from his mind.
Then he placed both hands on his head and massaged his face.
His dark brown scruffy hair was left uneven. His hair went every which direction sticking up as if static like electricity. Sweat was forming on his face. Nathan was sitting up as he grabbed his soft light blue nylon blankets. He mindlessly tossed the blankets aside as he hopped out of bed.
His dark blue eyes seemed to magnify the air around him and in his room. Nathan was a skinny kid, with an oddly white yet tan complexion. Nathan walked over to the window and looked closely as he gazed at the moonlight. He walked

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back over and sat back down on his bed while still facing his window…
—Nathan had turned to the right of his bed and removed a book that was standing on the floor just below his bed.

He laid the book flat on the table. He kept his body still, his mind slowly convinced him of his reality, but the disturbances that were still there inside of him didn’t leave. He turned his head to look around his entire room, something didn’t seem right…
—His gaze stopped when his window was in sight. It was as if something was pulling him toward the window… Silently he approached the window, his mind continued to dwell on the chaos that woke him. He leaned over his window, trying to see something.
He parted the dark blue curtains and peered up at the dark blue skies. The moon’s light was unusually bright. There in the distance beyond the trees he could just make out the edge of Milsburg city.
“…Going to be another one of those nights…”
He thought. He continued to gaze, but sleep was slowly calling him back. As he looked down he noticed his hands for the first time. They didn’t seem right.
As if they were strange to him… It was as if they weren’t his hands at all, but they were. Everything seemed fine, eight fingers and two thumbs. No! Everything was fine, but… still… something seemed wrong. As Nathan continued to contemplate he realized he was missing a day.
—He couldn’t remember at all what he had done the night before. The more he tried to remember the faster the memory faded. It was as though time was forever and he could almost barely remember something that had seemed to slip away…
—Nathan felt he knew something had happened to him the night before but he just couldn’t recall it. He was able to remember the soccer game try-outs just fine. He also remembered an odd feeling before the try-outs. He could even remember changing his uniform in the locker room. “But… That’s all he remembered. And he remembered giving the game his all…”
He drove his mind and remembered further. During that same night he… had some how hurt someone… While he was playing in the soccer game… And it was an accident if fact…!
[<“It wasn’t fatal.”>]
—It didn’t even really hurt the poor boy. “It was just a cut.” Nathan thought. “It was all, weird… He felt he shouldn’t even be able to remember this.” Something from Nathan’s hand had cut the kid. Nathan tried to remember what it was, but the memory of that day just kept slipping further and further away.
He just kept picturing some type of bizarre blue reptile fish-like animal nails that seemed to grow from within his skin.
Changing the form of his fingers and fingernails.
—Nathan knew he was on to something now, if only he could just remember more… And just like that everything he had just remembered faded from him.

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—Nathan remembered he didn’t make the try-outs that night… But from then on, strange things kept happening to him. He could feel odd sensations inside his entire body, but nothing he could put a finger on…
—It was as if he’d left home a normal boy, and returned a changed individual the next…! Even weirder then the last things that happened to him… What bothered Nathan most of all was his memory lapses. Some times whole days just disappeared. It was like when you have a scratch on a CD. The song skips, but the recording is still there… Only it’s distorted and doesn’t read correctly. But you just know it’s still there! To Nathan it brought an undeniable fear.
“Nathan remembered, waking up one night on a city bus…” To Nathan it was to say the least disturbing… Upon waking up Nathan looked out a window to see where he was headed. Fortunately the bus was headed toward Nathan’s home.’
“How did I get there…?” None of this made sense to him. He couldn’t help it; it was like he was all wrapped up, tangled up and confused inside. Nathan felt as if he was missing something (Aside from his mind), something huge!
—He turned over in his bed and stared up at the white moonlight from behind his two blue window curtains. He seemed to forget even the things that had happened to him the other night ago…
Except for the try-outs and the results. He was a bit tired of being blamed for things and being put down for things he had no control over. It was just as though it wasn’t his life he was living anymore… Nathan’s mind was weary from thinking around in circles. Sleep finally won as he slide down beneath his covers and began to unwind. With one last effort he tried to connect and conceal all his thoughts. The night was unrelenting as it claimed him and he fell fast asleep.

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