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Dr. Leg Kick
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Help on Thesis Statement

alright im doin an essay on a novel, and my topic is about how this character is influenced by the people surrounding his everyday life.

here is my thesis statement

The decisions "our hero" makes are influenced by the people surrounding his everyday life.

can you guyz help me make it better smile


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Ooo, fun. My brother Captain REX has to do one and turn it in tomorrow. He's a kickass writer. Maybe he'll help.


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The variables that CHARACTER X faces in his life greatly affect and influence the choices that he makes in the "novel/book/movie/w/e the hell it is" TITLE


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thanks...anymore. i need a good one.


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what book? it might help.


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state somthing about how or why in the thesis, set up what you're discussing...
his decisions are influenced by x, y, z, etc.,
for example...dont give specifics, but some general ideas to be analyzed/explained in the body


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Dr. Leg Kick
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Crime and Punishment. im doing intro paragraph at the moment. any ideas?


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get off KMC n do it...
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laughing out loud


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if you dont care about my comparison...

"Man is a product of his enviornment" is more than just a basic idea of socialism, it is the basis of how (insert characters name here) makes decisions, and reacts to others. Even in society today, we can all relate to the constant struggle against the expected conformity of an individual to their enviornment.


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very nice big grin

I would help, but I'm tired, maybe tomorrow embarrasment

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Do what I do; write the essay first, and then write the thesis statement. It's much easier to do things that way, at least in my estimation.


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eewww school work..... for the love god someone help him out so we can close this thread


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