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Dr. Leg Kick
Aesculapius
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Help on Thesis Statement
alright im doin an essay on a novel, and my topic is about how this character is influenced by the people surrounding his everyday life.
here is my thesis statement
The decisions "our hero" makes are influenced by the people surrounding his everyday life.
can you guyz help me make it better 
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May 13th, 2004 11:27 PM |
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Bespin Bart
Buggy
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Ooo, fun. My brother Captain REX has to do one and turn it in tomorrow. He's a kickass writer. Maybe he'll help.
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May 13th, 2004 11:28 PM |
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Spearhead
Prophet
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The variables that CHARACTER X faces in his life greatly affect and influence the choices that he makes in the "novel/book/movie/w/e the hell it is" TITLE
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May 13th, 2004 11:30 PM |
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Dr. Leg Kick
Aesculapius
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thanks...anymore. i need a good one.
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May 13th, 2004 11:31 PM |
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Tptmanno1
Life Ponder-er
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what book? it might help.
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May 13th, 2004 11:59 PM |
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Real
I have more tech than you
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state somthing about how or why in the thesis, set up what you're discussing...
his decisions are influenced by x, y, z, etc.,
for example...dont give specifics, but some general ideas to be analyzed/explained in the body
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May 14th, 2004 12:08 AM |
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Dr. Leg Kick
Aesculapius
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Crime and Punishment. im doing intro paragraph at the moment. any ideas?
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May 14th, 2004 12:24 AM |
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Real
I have more tech than you
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get off KMC n do it...
j/k
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May 14th, 2004 12:32 AM |
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Dr. Leg Kick
Aesculapius
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May 14th, 2004 12:46 AM |
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Curl_Up&Dye
Pretty in Pink
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if you dont care about my comparison...
"Man is a product of his enviornment" is more than just a basic idea of socialism, it is the basis of how (insert characters name here) makes decisions, and reacts to others. Even in society today, we can all relate to the constant struggle against the expected conformity of an individual to their enviornment.
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May 14th, 2004 02:44 AM |
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silver_tears
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very nice 
I would help, but I'm tired, maybe tomorrow 
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May 14th, 2004 02:46 AM |
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Gregory
International Sex Symbol
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Do what I do; write the essay first, and then write the thesis statement. It's much easier to do things that way, at least in my estimation.
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May 14th, 2004 03:00 AM |
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wuTa
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eewww school work..... for the love god someone help him out so we can close this thread
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May 14th, 2004 04:34 AM |
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