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i thought i would post some of my fanfic. i havent typed up the whole thing yet, but i will keep posting more as i type it. plze tell me what u think!

Jack and Liz: The Beginning

Jack was pacing his cabin. He was thinking about her again.
“What if she doesn’t love me back?” he thought to himself.
“I have to tell her. Now.” He said defiantly. He walked out onto the deck of the Pearl to a woman.
“Elizabeth?” The woman turned.
“Yes, Jack?”
“Um,, Elizabeth, I mean, Miss Swan, I have something to tell you.” He said nervously
“I’m listening.”
“Liz, the thing is…I love you!” he burst out. He looked hopefully at her. At first she looked perplexed, but then she wrapped her arms around him and kissed him. Just then a massive, slimy, tentacle shot out of the water and wrapped around Elizabeth and puller her into the ocean.
“Elizabeth!” Jack screamed, and just then, a man woke with a start.

Jack sat up in his bed and wiped his sweaty forehead. Another nightmare.
“That’s it. I have to tell her.” Jack said to himself. He stood up, put on his boots, and walked out of his cabin. Elizabeth was standing on the starboard side of the ship. He walked to where she was standing.
“Um, morning Elizabeth.”
“’Morning, Jack.”
“Elizabeth, there’s something you need to know.”
“And that is?”
“There’s no use fighting it. I love you.” Elizabeth was shocked.
“Jack…I…what do you expect me to say?”
“Nothing.” Said Jack and without even thinking, he grabbed Elizabeth and kissed her passionately. Liz struggled for a moment, but then relaxed.
“Cap’n? Oh sorry.” Mr. Gibbs had walked up to them.
“I won’t disturb you.” Mr. Gibbs walked off.
“Elizabeth, do you love me?”
“Jack, I…”
“Just answer the question.”
“I…um…”
“Elizabeth, do you love me?”
“Who wouldn’t?” They reached for each other and kissed long and hard.
“Perhaps we should get a little more privacy, darling?” asked Jack, out of breath. He led her to his cabin and shut the door. They continued their kiss. Jack was stroking her cheek, Elizabeth stroking his hair. They finished moments later and Jack pulled Liz onto his lap. Jack caressed her.
“I finally have you in my arms.” He said. Liz blushed.
“Liz, there’s one thing that has been bothering be above all most. That kiss.”
“You mean ‘The Kiss of Death’?”
“Exactly.”
“What about it?”
“That wasn’t just a diversion, was it, luv?”
“No. Kisses like that don’t come about by a mere need for a distraction, Jack.” She said quietly.
“How long have you loved me?”
“Ever since you saved me in Port Royal. But you are not the easiest to keep up with, Jack Sparrow.”
“Nor are you, Miss Swan.” She smiled. They started to kiss again. Just then, Will walked in. Jack and Liz stopped abruptly.
“Elizabeth? I…you…him…WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!”
“Nothing!” she said fast and quickly got off Jack’s lap.
“Elizabeth, I don’t know what to say! You’ve been my fiancé for over a year and I open a door to find you making out with one of the most notorious and devious pirates in the Caribbean!” Jack smiled proudly.
“Will, it’s not what it looks like, really!”
“Of course it is, Lizzy! Isn’t it?” he said nervously.
“Jack, I’m sorry. Will, please!”
“Elizabeth, we’re over!” and with that Will left the cabin, slamming the door on his way out.
“Will!” Liz screamed after him.
“What’s a matter, luv? Now you can have me!” said Jack
“Jack, it’s not that simple!”
“Of course it is! Look at what I did to Scarlett and Gizelle!”
“And I wonder if you’ll do the same thing to me.”
“Darling, this is way different,” he walked over to her and grabbed her hands, “This is true love, savvy?” he kissed her briefly on the lips, “Consider that.” And Jack left the cabin also. Elizabeth was left alone, staring blankly at the wall.
“He truly loves you.” She thought to herself, “I’m finally his.” She smiled to herself and left the cabin.

The next morning, Elizabeth was lying in her bed, insisting that what happened yesterday was a dream. She had herself convinced until Jack walked into her room.
“Good morning, luv.” He said
“Good morning, Jack.”
“Sleep well, darling?”
“Fine, thank you.”
“Um, Liz, about yesterday…”
“What about it?”
“I just, I wanna be the man you wake up to in the morning. I wanna be the shoulder you cry on when you’re sad. I wanna be the man that has your child…”
“What?!” Liz started to panic.
“Kidding on that last.” Liz eased
What I mean to say is…” he knelt at her bed, “Elizabeth Swann, will you marry me?” Liz was totally shocked.
“Jack, I…I’m sorry, but…it’s just too soon. Just give me time to let this sink in.” Jack’s face dropped.
“Oh…ok.” Liz stroked his cheek.
“Buy a ring first.” She said reassuringly. Jack’s face lit up a little.
“I love you Lizzy.” He kissed her on the cheek.
“I’ll see you on deck.” Jack said, and he turned and left the cabin.
“A child?” Liz whispered, perplexed, to herself. She rubbed her stomach cautiously, but found no bump. She shook the thought and began to get dressed.
Elizabeth walked out on deck 2o minutes later, fully dressed. She spotted Jack at the wheel and she walked over to him.
“That was really sweet, Jack.” She said
“Hmm? Oh, thank you.” He replied nervously
“But it really was too soon.”
“I know.”
“I really will consider it though.”
“Thank you, luv. You are gorgeous, Elizabeth.” Liz got a little teary-eyed
“Thank you, Jack.” She whispered.
“It’s true. You are absolutely lovely, Liz.”
“You’re handsome too, Jack.” Jack kissed her passionately
“You are so sweet.” Jack said, and stroked her cheek.
Then Will walked by and slammed against Jack’s shoulder as hard as he could as he walked past.
“Stop being such a jealous prat, Turner!” Jack yelled at him
“Stop being such a boasting git, Sparrow!” Will yelled back at him. Jack spun around to face him.
“That’s CAPTAIN Sparrow, William.” Jack whispered dangerously.
“Stop it! Both of you!” Liz stepped between them.
“Sorry darling, this is childish, isn’t it? Maybe we should get a little more privacy?” But before she could even answer, Jack gave Will one last deadly glare and grabbed Liz by the arm and dragged her into his cabin.
“Liz, don’t worry, Will‘ll get over it sooner or later.” Jack said comfortingly.
A month and a half passed with no change in Will’s behavior. On a Saturday night, Jack invited Liz into his cabin. He got down on one knee, once again, only this time he had a beautiful diamond ring in hand.
“Elizabeth, will you marry me? Please say yes.”
“Jack…yes.” She said hesitantly
“Oh, I underst…did you just say YES!?”
“I did, Jack.” Jack’s face was the most alight it had ever been.
“I love you so much Lizzy!” he yelled and he shoved her face into his, and kissed more deep and passionate than he had ever before. It seemed to last forever until Will burst in, looking slightly crazed and very drunk. He had his sword pulled and looked like he’d been crying his eyes out. Jack pulled away.
“Do you mind, eunuch? We are TRYING to celebrate our engagement!” Will’s face dropped completely.
“Engagement?”
“Yes, Turner. That’s what happens when two people love each other so much they decide to get married!” Jack explained to Will like he was 5 years old.
“I know what engagement means, Jack!” and with that, Will slammed the door behind him and Jack and Liz continued their kiss. The exited the cabin hours later, out of breath and very messy and slightly disoriented. Will, who was at the wheel, gave them a dirty look as they came out, but then turned back around.

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