Harry Potter and the Fight of Destiny

ye it is really good but i still think it needs just a bit more of an improvement but its still really gr8

More description would help, since you asked for honesty.

I like the word "Thunderstream" though. tongue_ss

Originally posted by Barker
More description would help, since you asked for honesty.

I like the word "Thunderstream" though. tongue_ss

I agree, I think that you're story is really good, but you could use a little more desription. And I like the word Thundertream too!!! That was really creative!

Yep, but your story is really good

Keep posting!!

Hey just read all that you posted and i love it cant wait till the next post

i like the new broom that Dumbledore made harry

its awsome keep posting

are you going to post soon or what

i dunno. actually i havent had much time latly anyways

you forgot how could you

lol well it wasnt just forgeting but i have been out alot latly and i am rarely ever home

same here