my fannovel: Mobile Suit Gundam HALO

Originally posted by jake hamoy
here are the characters for now:

Jasper Hawkes: a lad who never knew his parents. He survive an assault in kalayaan by fascists but was separated from his sister. thinks that being a soldier will help him find her sister.

Chitose Sakuraba: Jasper's operations partner. has secret feelings for jasper but is too shy to express it. pilots the Valkyrie high speed interstellar mobile armor.
Jacinth Mayers: once a young veteran soldier sent to middle east. he was trained since childhood how to fight.

Lucia Hawkes a.k.a. Lucy Nakata: Jasper's sister. she is a part time pop sensation at day and an extremist by night.

Paul Bryans: nothing is much known about this pe3rson but he likes playing arcade games.

Kyle Charles: AN ENIGMATIC PERSON KNOWN TO HAVE TWO PERSONALITIES.

Crimson Eastwood: a Person who is loved by a circus star named Solace. Almost apathetic.

thanks.

and he's gonna give jasper a hell of a fight! (since they are not allies at first and are rivals).

here are the MS updates:

U.C.A. -S.C.D.I. : GOPHER MS (Guardian Of Peace, Harmony and Equal Rights)- a creep ms that can operate in space and on earth. equiped with shield, beam rifle, beam sabers, shield claws, and napalm flamethrower.

Kalayaan: JAGUAR unit. an MS equipped with arm blades, thick armor and hyper boosters. very fast even its heavy.

The Kalayaan Mobile Suit sounds like an interesting take on the MS-08 Dom suit.

And I take it the GOPHER is a commander/Limited Production MS?

Originally posted by SoylentBlue
The Kalayaan Mobile Suit sounds like an interesting take on the MS-08 Dom suit.

And I take it the GOPHER is a commander/Limited Production MS?

it is massed produced but it could be the most powerful mass produced mobile suit unknown to W.F.F. it is also the most costly of the currently massed produced ms. however, the gopher here is fully equipped and upgraded. most gophers are only equipped with beam m-guns (depending on the situation, which can be compared to C.E. zakus

new update: not final yet
AGNUS (unspectered)
Equipments:Vendettium armor
Ultima Jammer Canceller (cancels all types of jammers)
Ultra sensitive anti stealth sensors {later added
in the story}
Weapons: 60 mm. CIWS x 2 (mounted on head)
70 mm beam steyr AUG x 1 (optional weapon, hand
carried when used
300 mm ION CANNON X 1(mounted on torso)
3 m solid state combat knives x 2 (stored in hip armor)

any other comments? reactions? suggestions? constructive criticisms?

I wanna see Halo lotflz. Wenz teh Master Cheef gnna show up?

ok. maybe one of these days. i still need to perfect each of the ms designs. the main characters are done (but still without color)

ME WANTS T3H MASTER CH33E3E3E3E3EEEE333FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF NOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH

anyway, here is PULSE AGNUS
Equipments: the same as unspectered AGNUS
Weapons: The same as Unspectered plus 9m beam sabers x 2, beam and shock absorbing shield x1(attached to left arm), 12m solid state thermal anti ship sword (stored and attached to shield, pops out when used),

SWORD AGNUS
equipment: the same as unspectered AGNUS
weapons: the same as unspectered form (but beam steyr AUG is not available) plus 13m combinable solid state thermal anti ship swords x 2, beam and shock absorbing buckler x2, beam boomerangs x2.

BUST AGNUS
equipment: same as unspectered form
Weapons: same as unspectered (beam steyr AUG not available) plus 200m beam cannons x2, JAVELIN missile launchers x 20, 90mm linear cannons x 2, 70mm napalm flame throwers x2.

VALKYRIE AGNUS
EQUIPMENT: same as unspectered foem
weapons: same as unspectered form plus 9m beam katars x2, cannon and blade pods x4 (each equipped with 50 mm bweam cannons x2 and 7m beam sabers x 2), helldart homing rocket launchers x 30

new characters:
Chairman Gerald Du Galle= Chairman of UCA. he is always compared to
the "fictional" Gilbert Dullindal, but emphasizes that he personally believes that no human has the right to control other humans' fate.

Princess Hotaru Peacewill= first princess of kalayaan kingdom. she inherited the kingdom from her foster father who fought for independence from all who nations who currently claims the islands.

any other comments????

new update: the timeline is changed to after revolution since i found that soylent eyes is correct about the timeline's biased name

new characters: souko todo: a type b newtype ( type a is a psychic similar to tiffa in gundam x, type b is super soldier similar to gundam 00 and type c is a versatile, "civllian" type newtype, similar to coordinators" in gundam seed) serving the wff

mason aerie: an ace pilot of wff. may be egomaniac to some extent.

is there a doomsday weapon and or a colony drop in your story?