Harry Potter and the Fall of the Sorcerer

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I like it a lot! Please post more!

plsss post more the story is great.... post post post

Harry would never kill anybody, i quit reading after i rad that part, because it totally kills the story. Unforgivable curses land you in azkaban, Harry would never kill anybody, he might use the cruciatus as we saw in book 5, but he didn't mean it and he would never kill anybody.

Actually, Harry did try to kill a death eater once, but he couldn't do it because he lacked the hate.

the story nice so plss continue

I'l post this weekend. But most likely Sunday.

umm what does R&R mean

Sorry for not posting for so long but here is the next part. This is still chapter two. And R&R means read and review. I'll post more either later today or tomorrow, and without further ado here is the next part.

“RONALD BILLIUS WEASLY! I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOU WERE ABOUT TO CURSE HARRY, YOUR BEST MATE AND , MY BOYFRIEND” screamed Ginny looking straight at Ron.

“Oh, your boyfriend who broke your heart, is that the boyfriend you are referring to” asked Ron struggling to get loose from Fred and George.

“Ron we broke up and now we are back together”

“Yeah and in a week you’ll break her heart again Harry. I cant see you like that Ginny, not again” said Ron who finally stopped struggling and just lay there looking away from everyone.

“Ron I promise you and Ginny, that wont happen again” said Harry looking from Ron to Ginny.

“Ok, so now Ron can we let you go” asked Fred looking down at him.

“Yea, you can let me go, but Harry if you ever hurt her again I promise you that I will kill you” said Ron as he was standing up and brushing himself of.

“Don’t worry Ron I wont” said Harry as he put his arm around Ginny’s waist.

“OK, so back to the plans to go out to night -” said George

“We have the perfect place to go -“ continued Fred

“Ok, and what might this place be” asked Hermonie

“Well Lee Jordan was going to through one of his famous parties, so will just stop by there on our way to the joke shop and tell him to make it in honor of Harry’s birthday” Said George

“Oh and mum and dad mustn’t know -“ said Fred

“And we’ll come by and tell you when to go there, Ok” finished George, and after everyone agreed they disappearted.

“So what do we do until they come back and we go” asked Ron as he sat down at the table

“Well we could try and figure out why that death eater wanted to control Harry” said Hermonie sitting down next to Ron.

“Aww, the fun Hermonie is gone already -” whined Ron but was cut off by Ginny who said “Hermonie all we’ll be doing is taking wild guesses. There could be thousands of reasons of why he would do that”

“Yeah, Hermonie, Ginny is right all we’ll be doing is guessing, and I know you want to find out so do I but it’s pointless for us to spend a whole day trying to figure it out. We’ll get no where and we wont be able to enjoy tonight cuz we’ll be worried what that could mean.” said Harry as he sat down and pulled Ginny down in his lap. Ron who was bearly Ok with Harry and Ginny being together looked at them with discust and said “OK, just cuz I’m Ok with you two dosen’t mean I want to witness it. So when around me will you please not sit on each other”

“No” replied Ginny as she put her arms around Harry’s neck and laid her head on his chest.

Thanx to those who replied and as always R&R

hope you can post more during the xmas break.... i mean everyday....

Originally posted by deathgod
hope you can post more during the xmas break.... i mean everyday....

yea same here i can't go two days without cheaking up on your story

what does R&R meen... ur story is great

R&R means Read&Review, and I'll post over the weekend or earliest on friday.

Ok so here is some more of Chapter 2 and I'll try to finish it on my next post which means it will be a long one. But I'm not makeing any promises. Also thanx to those who always review. And on with the story.

“Yeah, Hermonie, Ginny is right all we’ll be doing is guessing, and I know you want to find out so do I but it’s pointless for us to spend a whole day trying to figure it out. We’ll get no where and we wont be able to enjoy tonight cuz we’ll be worried what that could mean.” said Harry as he sat down and pulled Ginny down in his lap. Ron who was bearly Ok with Harry and Ginny being together looked at them with disgust and said “OK, just cuz I’m Ok with you two dose’nt mean I want to witness it. So when around me will you please not sit on each other”

“No” replied Ginny as she put her arms around Harry’s neck and laid her head on his chest.

“Look why don’t we just figure out what to do for the rest of the day” said Hermonie before Ron could further argue.

“Ok, well we could play quiddich” said Harry looking at everyone in the room.

“Yeah what two on two Quiddich” said Ron sarcesticly

“Yes” replied Harry “just a keeper and a chaser”
“Hey that sounds like fun” said Ginny as she lifted her head off of Harry’s shoulder

“Yeah” said Hermonie

“What Hermonie I never knew that you were interested in learning the game of Quiddich” said Ron looking shocked at Hermonie.

“Well Victor -“ started Hermonie but was cut off by a very angry looking Ron “Oh, yes your beloved Vicky”

“RONALD I can’t believe you just said that and I thought that he was your hero” said Hermonie as she stormed out the room

“WAS, HERMONIE, WAS MY HERO” yelled Ron after her.

“Ron, your such a git” said Ginny at Ron and then said to Harry “I’m going to see if she is Ok”

“No, Ron you started this you clean it up” said Harry “and until you clean it up we are not going to do any thing remotely interesting, well at least for you” He added and flashed Ginny a sly grin.

“I didn’t do anything” pleaded Ron

“Yeah Ron mabey that’s the problem you don’t do anything right. You always do or say the wrong thing” said Ginny as she got off of Harry and pulled him out of the kitchen door, into the back yard, and left Ron pondering. After a while he decided that he should appolgise to Hermonie so he wouldn’t spend the whole day being ignored by Harry, Ginny, and Hermonie. As he walked up the stairs he was thinking of what to say when he heard a door slam shut but he thought nothing of it and continued up the stairs to see Hermonie and appolgise. As he knocked on the door he heard Hermonie crying and felt way worse than he originally had.

“Hermonie” he said as he opened the door slowly

“What” she said her voice muffled from her head being in her pillow

“Are you Ok” asked Ron as he entered the room and closed the door behind him

“What do you think Ron” she asked coldly as she lifted her head and whipped the tears from her eyes.

As always R&R!!!!!!

awwww ron made hermione cry....can't wait till you post more...pleeeese post it soon

great post! please keep going!

This is some more and I know I said I will finish the chapter in the next post but I couldent so probebley the next one would finish it. Anyway Hope you like this little bit.

“Hermonie” he said as he opened the door slowly

“What” she said her voice muffled from her head being in her pillow

“Are you Ok” asked Ron as he entered the room and closed the door behind him

“What do you think Ron” she asked coldly as she lifted her head and whipped the tears from her eyes.

“I don’t know” said Ron

“Well that’s a new one” replied Hermonie sarcesticly

“Hey that’s offensive” Ron said while trying to act hurt just to make Hermonie smile or laugh, but he didn’t succeed.

“Ron, why are you up here” said Hermonie now looking strait at him as he was sitting on the end of Ginny’s bed.

“I’m here to apologies” said Ron as he looked straight in Hermonie’s eyes.

“Are you, really” she asked, her anger subsiding a little.

“Yeah, I’m really sorry” said Ron in the sincerest voice he could muster “ I just don’t know what gets over me when you talk about ‘Him’” he added and put an emphasis on ‘him’.

“Tell me Ron, What ‘dose’ get over you when I talk about Victor” said Hermonie as she looked in Ron’s ocean blue eyes.

“I just told you, I don’t know what gets over me” said Ron as he looked down at his shoes avoiding Hermonie’s eyes.

“Well Ron you better figure it out, because I’m not accepting your apology until you tell me” said Hermonie

“I it’s that he could get you interested in things not even me or Harry could” said Ron while still trying to avoid her gaze.

“Really things like what” asked Hermonie

“Things like Quiddich for one” said Ron now looking straight into her eyes “I mean me and Harry tried to teach you the basics of the game several times and all you said was that it was just a game and we took it to seriously, but apparently when Victor was teaching you, you were interested and it hurts to know that you like him more than us and that you wouldn’t mind learning from him. I know he is a world famous Quiddich player but still it hurts to see you want to learn from a total stranger and not your best friends” Finished Ron not breaking eye contact with Hermonie.

Thanx for the replies and as always R&R!!!!!

that was a strange but good bit so keep posting

love it

great job!

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