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Jury
Extreme Member
 Gender: Male
Location: Pearl of the Orient Seas |
 The Very Sad Story
As I sat there in English class.
I stared at the girl next to me.
She was my so-called best friend.
I stared at her long, silky hair
And wished she was mine.
But she didn’t notice me like that,
And I knew it.
After class she walked up to me
And asked me for the notes
She had missed the day before.
I handed them to her.
She said, “thanks”
And gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know that
I don’t want us to be just friends,
I love her but I’m just too shy,
And I don’t know why.
11th grade. The phone rang.
On the other end, it was her.
She was in tears.
Mumbling on and on about
How her love had broke her heart.
She asked me to come over
Because she didn’t want to be alone,
So I did.
As I sat next to her on the sofa,
I stared at her soft eyes,
Wishing she was mine
After 2 hours.
One Drew Barrymoore movie,
And 3 bags of chips,
She decided to go to sleep,
She looked at me, said “thanks” and
Gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know that
I don’t want us to be just friends,
I love her but I’m just too shy,
And I don’t know why.
Senior year.
The day before prom.
She walked to my locker
“My date is sick,” she said.
“He’s not gonna get well.
I don’t have a date.”
And in 7th grade,
We made a promise
That if neither of us had dates,
We would go together just as
Best friends, so we did.
Prom night, after everything was over,
I was standing
At her front door step.
She stared at me with her crystal eyes.
I want her to be mine,
But she doesn’t think of me like that
And I know it.
Then she said, “I had the best time, thanks!”
And gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know that
I don’t want us to be just friends,
I love her but I’m just too shy,
And I don’t know why.
A day passed.
Then a week.
Then a month.
Before I could blink,
It was graduation day.
I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel
Up on stage to get her diploma.
I wanted her to be mine.
But she didn’t notice me like that,
And I knew it.
Before everyone went home,
She came to me in her smock and hat,
And cried as I hugged her.
Then she lifted her head from my shoulder
And said, “You’re my best friend,
Thanks” and gave me a
Kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know that
I don’t want us to be just friends,
I love her but I’m just too shy,
And I don’t know why.
Now, I sit in the pew of the church.
That girl is getting married now.
I watched her say “I do.”
And drive off to her new life,
Married to another man.
I wanted her to be mine,
But she didn’t notice me like that,
And I knew it.
Before she drove away,
She came to me and said, “you came!”
And kissed me on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
I want her to know that
I don’t want us to be just friends,
I love her but I’m just too shy,
And I don’t know why.
Years passed.
I look down at the coffin of a girl
Who used to be my best friend.
At the service they read a diary entry
She had written in her high school years.
This is what it reads:
I stared at him wishing he was mine,
But he doesn’t notice me like that,
And I know it.
I want him to know that
I don’t want us to be just friends.
I love him but I’m just too shy,
And I don’t know why.
I wish he would tell me!
“I wish I did too…”
I thought to myself,
and cried.
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Last edited by Jury on Nov 13th, 2004 at 06:51 AM
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Nov 13th, 2004 06:49 AM |
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Lianslo
chasing the music
 Gender: Female
Location: USA |
I voted "very very sad" cuz I think its a terrible thing to miss out on once in a life time opportunities...or to miss something great because you didn't have the guts to speak your mind...
btw...hi Jury!  long time no see! i've missed ya!
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Nov 13th, 2004 06:55 AM |
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Morning_Glory
Sleeping In My Soul
 Gender: Female
Location: Mo-ningu Sakae |
that was sort of a gay story- I saw that ending coming - i know the moral of the story... blah blah blah
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Nov 13th, 2004 06:57 AM |
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Morning_Glory
Sleeping In My Soul
Gender: Female
Location: Mo-ningu Sakae |
i want to know how she died?
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Nov 13th, 2004 06:58 AM |
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Jury
Extreme Member
Gender: Male
Location: Pearl of the Orient Seas |
i dunno ... i don't eve know who the author was...
juz found it ... and shared it.
yo, Alis  same here 
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Nov 13th, 2004 07:00 AM |
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InnerRise
Restricted
 Gender: Male
Location: In Your Heart Building a Station. Account Restricted |
It was sad. Where you get the story from? It was good. How old were they when she died?
I am kind of in a situation like that myself.
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"I'll Stay Gold For U.H."
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Nov 13th, 2004 07:01 AM |
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Jury
Extreme Member
Gender: Male
Location: Pearl of the Orient Seas |
no real facts maybe... but anybody who's in that kind of situation can relate, right.
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Nov 13th, 2004 07:02 AM |
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Phoenix Aska
<Insert title here>
 Gender: Unspecified
Location: Dreaming |
.............
I know people like that......
It's a shame that people can be so shy.....
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Nov 13th, 2004 07:14 AM |
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Lost
Senior Member
 Gender: Female
Location: Looking For A Box In A Ditch Somwhe |
It is very sad that one's cannot speak up and live their lives in a lie...from others...from themselves.
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Nov 13th, 2004 07:34 AM |
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Paola
Salt
 Gender: Female
Location: -- Moderator |
he should have told her!!! or she! 
nice story, Jury dear 
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Nov 13th, 2004 07:39 AM |
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Captive
yourz truly
 Gender: Female
Location: A location |
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Join the Darkside!
"You can not love or hate something about another person unless it reflects to you something you love or hate about yourself."
[[myspace.com/dlshs1]]
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Nov 13th, 2004 08:08 AM |
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D-Double
.. and some junk
 Gender: Male
Location: St. Elsewhere |
Very sad.....Regrets are the devil's cupcakes.... 
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Oh Sweat!
Last edited by D-Double on Nov 13th, 2004 at 08:17 AM
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Nov 13th, 2004 08:15 AM |
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silver_tears
can i keep you?
 Gender: Female
Location: life not wasted |
I loved it
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diamonds. she'll pretty much have to.
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Nov 13th, 2004 09:25 AM |
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Kotarija
Lone Soul
 Gender: Male
Location: UK - Cumbria - Barrow-In-Furness |
yeah that was very sad, geez the feeling he must have had when he heard her notes , i guess everyone can learn from this, i hope i do since i'm dealing with it
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Nov 13th, 2004 12:02 PM |
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Jury
Extreme Member
Gender: Male
Location: Pearl of the Orient Seas |
DO YOURSELF A FAVOR
TELL YOUR LOVE ONES THAT YOU LOVE THEM
EVEN IF YOU DON’T KNOW HOW THEY WILL REACT
JUST LET THEM KNOW HOW YOU REALLY FEEL ABOUT THEM
THEY WON’T BE THERE FOREVER…
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Nov 13th, 2004 12:23 PM |
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Spearhead
Prophet
 Gender: Unspecified
Location: word, holmes |
thanks for that find, Jury
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Nov 13th, 2004 02:21 PM |
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Gaca
KATIUSHA
 Gender: Female
Location: Poland |
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Drugs: Just say 'AarrghaarrghpleeassennononoUGH'.
I MISS MR ZERO
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Nov 13th, 2004 02:23 PM |
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Kostabot
Item 9
 Gender: Male
Location: The Apex of the Vortex |
I'm a sucker for sad poems and movies. I liked it, Very sad.
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Rock when I rhythm, when I'm rolling on clouds, shout loud, breathe in, won't you drown in the now.
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Nov 13th, 2004 02:45 PM |
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Thorondor
Love?
 Gender: Male
Location: Scotland |
Teen drama 
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A God Among Geeks
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Nov 13th, 2004 02:48 PM |
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drunk_nazgul
obscure
 Gender: Female
Location: YOU ARE HERE |
Awwww... I wasn't gonna cry today...
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Nov 13th, 2004 02:48 PM |
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