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My Newley Written Song Never Felt This Way
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My Newley Written Song Never Felt This Way

Hi guys I wrote these lyrics for my new song that my mate might be performing at my school concert next year tell me what you think of it.

Never Felt This Way by Scarecrow756

Intro: Death what is it, is it a time for peace or just a time a time for reflection. Well my friend’s death is a time where I look back at the times. The time of where I saw that one of a kind girl. To the time where I took out my pistol and shot my girl in the back. Do you want to know a tale of betrayal and love then listen on my friends and I will tell you a tale that make spine tingle and your blood run cold. Because I never

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Felt this way, never again, these emountions were new, as I was growing up new things were coming up that changed my life for good and bad. Even though some of these emotions were of pain and sadness I still never felt this way, got to take the good with the bad never felt this way.

Verse One
My story begins in the hallways of a school, not taking a care in anything else but getting to class I was not quite prepared for what was about to come next. While rushing I bumped into an unknown person. When I saw her face, nothing else matted in the universe not even my careful matinace of my straight A average. She was so beautiful; she had a face like an angel from above and a smile that could any boy topple over like a toy solider. This feeling of love was new to me because I never

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Felt this way, never again, these emountions were new, as I was growing up new things were coming up that changed my life for good and bad. Even though some of these emotions were of pain and sadness I still never felt this way, got to take the good with the bad never felt this way.

Verse Two
As the years went on, we got to know each other very well. We grew closer and closer every single day with her was like a day in heaven, eventually we married and my best friend became my best man. But who would have known that what was going to happen later would make me do a deplorable deed that would make me feel a new emotion. Because I never

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Felt this way, never again, these emountions were new, as I was growing up new things were coming up that changed my life for good and bad. Even though some of these emotions were of pain and sadness I still never felt this way, got to take the good with the bad never felt this way.

Verse Three
My life could have never been happier, been married for two years and was thinking of having a child but however my plans of happiness would suddenly halt at the discovery of an unspeakable act. One stormy night where the darkness beckoned I came home in a rage. To my shock when I went to my bedroom, I saw my wife in bed with my best friend. In my rage I took out a gun from my pocket. Suddenly the clocked ticked 12 and the thunder roared, I shot them both while the bell for twelve midnight rang in all its glory. By the end of the loud bell, they both died from multiple wounds to the head, chest and eyes. This feeling of anger and betrayal was new too me because I never
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Felt this way, never again, these emountions were new, as I was growing up new things were coming up that changed my life for good and bad. Even though some of these emotions were of pain and sadness I still never felt this way, got to take the good with the bad never felt this way.

Verse Four
As soon as that happened I went on the run, the nebiours had heard everything. But much to dismay they came for me first. They threw me in a cell, tortured me and were trying to making confess. But I was already tortured by her face, how could that once beautiful face be now a instrument for torture. I was seeing her, where ever I would turn, she was not rested I could see her in my dreams saying “You Killed me.” This feeling of fear ate up my mind like maggots feeding on a fresh corpse. This feeling of guilt also was new because I never.

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Felt this way, never again, these emountions were new, as I was growing up new things were coming up that changed my life for good and bad. Even though some of these emotions were of pain and sadness I still never felt this way, got to take the good with the bad never felt this way.

Verse Five
I went so mad that I started threatening those around me as well as my self; every time I saw her I slashed my wrists. Eventually I confessed the whole thing with my remaining sanity. Then the day of my death came, it was a cold November 5th morning people from miles came to watch me dead. They hung me, death had seemed like a blessing these feelings had caused my downfall because I never.

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Felt this way, never again, these emountions were new, as I was growing up new things were coming up that changed my life for good and bad. Even though some of these emotions were of pain and sadness I still never felt this way, got to take the good with the bad never felt this way.


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Nobody answering. sad


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Is it a power metal song?


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Well me and mate have not decided on that yet. I want him to perform it as a acoustic guitar song but he wants to do it as a power metal song. So we have not made up our minds about that.

Cool sig Slay, I also support Arsenal, the best team in the world. What do you think of the lyrics.


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Well it's quite a long song...
Seems more like a short story..
I am always amazed by people who write songs as I could never do it myself..

It's hard for me to get a feeling on it without hearing the melody... confused

But I'm sure it's great.
The story is quite good. smile


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Originally posted by Piggle Humsy
Well it's quite a long song...
Seems more like a short story..
I am always amazed by people who write songs as I could never do it myself..

It's hard for me to get a feeling on it without hearing the melody... confused

But I'm sure it's great.
The story is quite good. smile


Thank you for your comments. smile


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All comments are fine, please confused I need feedback. sad


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