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Sirius_Rulez
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Lily/James
Hi everyone, Ive decided to do my own Lily/James story. And I've decided to do it only from James point of view cause most Lily/James fiction I read is mostly only of Lily and not enough of James. Also I'm going to make Lily be in the house of Ravin Claw cause I dont think that she was in Griffendore but thats just my opinion, I mean she could be in Griffendore but I'm not entirely sure cause in all the Harry Potter books everyones read so far it doesnt really say which house she's in. And could everyone plz comment and tell me what you'se think? cause I'd really like that and it would also make my writing improve.
Enjoy.
"Time to get up James" said Mary, shaking her son gently in an attempt to wake him up and Sirius up.
Sirius was staying with the Potters for the year until it was time to start their 7th year of Hogwarts School of Whichcraft and Wizardry. He left home after his 6th year to go and stay with the Potters cause he had just had quite enough of his family and the way they only liked purebloods and no one else.
James just grunted his response, turned over on his side and fell back asleep. Mary was getting quite frustrated, she shaked them both harder with better results. James and Sirius just took their time in getting up, get out of their nightware and chuck on some clothes."Quick, get a move on" shje snapped. Now that James and Sirius were 17, they were allowed to use magic out of school, they both made their beds with just the flick of their wands. That done, Mrs Potter walked out with the boys lagging behind, dew to lack of sleep cause they stayed up really late. James yawned and put his hands at the back of his head, accadently hitting Sirius in the head. He just retaliated by slapping him across the head. "Watch where you streach your arms Prongs"
"Sorry mate" replied James in a somewhat sleepy voice. Mrs Potter smiled in recinition and just smiled and shook her head. They all went to breakfast, sat down and ate. "Acio" the boys said simetuesly, their lugages floating down the stairs towards them. They went and put their things by the door ready to leave for Hogwarts in the morning."James, you just recived a letter from Hogwarts" said Mrs Potter, holding the letter out for James to take and read. Mr Potter arrived just a few minutes later, all dressed and ready for work when James was about to open the letter that was addressed to him. "Good morning everyone"
"Good morning" came the chorased reply. Mrs Potter had just said that their son recived owl post so he just sat down next to his son. He just opened the letter and couldnt couldnt belive what he had just read.
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May 21st, 2006 04:03 AM |
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Re: Lily/James
Pretty Good So Far, Though Lily Is Definitely In Griffindor... 
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May 21st, 2006 05:07 AM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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well ill just change her to Griffendore than
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May 21st, 2006 10:04 AM |
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iluvhp1_7
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first it's Gryffindor and Ravenclaw. DO SPELL CHECK!
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May 21st, 2006 11:10 PM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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i tried to at first but it wouldnt let me
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May 22nd, 2006 05:22 AM |
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iluvhp1_7
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you have to do it on Word first then post it don't do it on here.
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May 22nd, 2006 08:25 PM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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if i did post on word then how would i transfer the writing on this forum? cause i dont no how
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May 23rd, 2006 06:41 AM |
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"Well read it, what does it say?" Sirius asked quite agitatedly.
[i]Dear Mr Potter,
We are pleased to inform you that you have been chosen to become Head Boy this year in time,
signed by Deputy Head Mistress M. Magonigal,
Head of Gryffindor House.[i/]
He got his badge and presented it to everyone. They were all shocked, especially James himself. He thought for sure that Remus would be chosen to become Head Boy.
Sirius went and got into one of the compartments while James went to one of the compartments which consumed the prefects. On his way he saw a certain redhead. His hand automatically went straight to his hair and made it even messier than it already was, "Hey Evans" there was no reply. "What are you doing here Potter? this is only for prefects and HB and HG compartment."
"Well Evans, why don't you take a closer look and see for yourself" she took a closer look and had to blink to make sure her eyes weren't playing tricks on her. "You stole that from Remus, give it back to him or I'll have no choice but to report you and put you on detention" she sneered, putting her most hateful glare that she could to the guy she loathed. "You obviously didn't look close enough" he said with a huge grin on his face. So she looked more closely this time and read the words 'James Potter HB' printed on the badge. "I don't believe this!" she outraged. "I know, I couldn't believe it at first either and that there must have been some kind of mix up"
"This is so absurd, great, I'm going to have to do patrolling with you this year" she said in a disgusted voice. "Oh, cheer up Evans, surely it wont be that bad, will it?"
"As a matter of fact it will be." She just walked on like he didn't even exist. He mustered up the courage and grabbed her arm but she simply pulled away. "Eh, don't touch me Potter"she said with vemace. She walked ahead without a seconds glance. James simply stood there, feeling really dejected. He got into the compartment and sat down. He kept on shooting Lily furtive glances which she just ignored and faced the front.
That done he walked back to the carriage in low spirits that contained Sirius and Remus. Peter on the other hand wasn't present which was quite peculiar to all of them, he hadn't told either of them his whereabouts. "Hey mate, whats up? your looking kind of glum." Sirius asked with a questioning look. "Let me guess, Evans?" said Sirius shaking his head. He looked towards James who appeared to be nodding his head in confirmation. "Bad luck mate, better luck next time" said Sirius with an amused look plastered onto his face and also a look of sympathy to go along with it. James went and sat down next to Sirius. Sirius and Remus exchanged glances, both thinking the same thing, Evans and how she keeps neglecting James. They really wanted to help but didn't know how. "Hey mate, she's not worth it, why not go out with a chick who actually likes you. Hey mate are you even listening to what I'm saying? Earth to Prongs!" Sirius waved one of his hands and waved it in front of his face in order to get his full attention. James looked so out of it, it was like he was in another world of his own. "What?" he asked in a confused voice, seeing that Sirius was trying to get his attention. So he decided to repeat the question again for James.
Sometime later the express came to a sudden stop.
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May 24th, 2006 07:20 AM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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plz comment and tell me what u ppl think
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May 24th, 2006 07:22 AM |
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It was great
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May 24th, 2006 03:03 PM |
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It pretty good thus far....please continue.
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May 25th, 2006 08:17 PM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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Everyone filed out and everyones luggage was transfered inside of Hogwarts. As the Marauders formed out James heard someone call Evans a filthy little mudblood and hexed him and went up to him, hauled and lifted him by the shirt and said "How dare you, apoligize to Evans right now" sneered James and dropped Snivless to the ground. "Make me Potter" spat Snape. "I could make life very unpleasnt for you Snape" Sneered James. "How dare you talk to James like that" Sirius had his wand pinted at him and James felt himself slide back a couple of feet. "Dont you ever hex him again Potter" spat Lily and had her wand ponted at him. "Miss Evans, I am so appaled that you could even hex a student, especially a Head Boy, you will be serving detention with Mr Filch the care taker for a week. And as for you Mr Potter, I ve no reason to think that you took no part in this and the same goes for Black and Snape, you's will all serve detention with Mr Filch and 20 points from Gryffindor and 10 points from Slytheren." said an outraged Proffeser Magonigal and marched off. So they all walked to the castle, James and Sirius giving Snape dirty looks.
When they all got to the castle they sat down listening to Dumbledore welcoming everyone to Hogwarts for another year and Magonigal sorting the first years into their houses. When that was done Dumbledore made all sorts of food appear onto the table and everyone helped themselves to whatever appealed to them. When everyone was finished James and Lily led all the first years in their House to the Commin Room and gave them the password which was Flobber Worms. Then they both patrolled the castle. "Evans, I just dont get why you hate me so much, maybe if you could tell I could fix it" Lily looked at James and felt her stomick go all wiered as if she liked him or somthing. No I cant like Potter, could I? Its just not possable, but his all so messy hair just makes him look so handsome, no I will not think like this. Sjhe thought to herself. James saw a blush creep up her nice rosey cheeks. "Well I guess I should at least try to get along with you since we will be patrolling together for awhile, after all I dont think I have much choice. I dont think anyones doing anything wrong this evening, how about we just call it a night"
"Thats fine with me Evans." James suddenly looked at his watch and realized the time and that they were both 5 minutes late for their first detention. "Hey Evans, were 5 minutes late for detention with Mr Filch" So they both bolted down the hall and got to his office panting and trying to get their breaths back. "Your both late" He sneered. But in a way it didnt really matter cause he could just make them do more work.
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May 27th, 2006 11:04 PM |
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iluvhp1_7
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you type it up on word spell check read it through a couple of times. COPY and PASTE it into the Posting box.
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May 28th, 2006 03:39 PM |
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iluvhp1_7
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ok its McGonagall, Common Room, and don't forget the put punctuation in your quotes. Like put periods before the last quotation marks.
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May 28th, 2006 03:57 PM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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thanks
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May 28th, 2006 09:10 PM |
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It needs work..
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May 29th, 2006 08:23 PM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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wat kind of work, could u plz tell me?
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May 30th, 2006 06:20 AM |
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Sirius_Rulez
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i mean pm me plz farrah_k21, thanks
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May 30th, 2006 06:22 AM |
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paliwal_ruppal
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Well it is nice except yes it is McGonagall.  
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May 30th, 2006 12:20 PM |
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iluvhp1_7
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you know what, I think we should make Sirius_Rulez a spelling dictionary! And you can use it at all times when your writing your story!
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