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remus lupin sat in the study of number twelve grimwald place and was reading a letter from minevera mcgonagall that asked him to come and teach D.A.D.A at hogwarts again he replyed with a simple "yes i would love to".
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nymphadora tonks sat in office at the minstry for magic and read the request that she come teach potions at hogwarts. and also she could help with extra protection from the death eaters incase they came for harry or the weaslys or granger she scribbled her reply " yes minevrea i will thank you for asking me"
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harry potter sat in ginny weaslys room and listend to her beg him for them to go out again reminding him what dumbledore said about beating voldemort with love. " harry be reasonable please we can date each other i mean i love you and well i dont know if you love me but if you do that should be enough." " i will think about it gin". said a very worn out harry.
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hermione granger sat in ron and harrys room (harry was living with them now that he was of age). she pushed on rons chest to break the kiss; she needed to catch her breath she and ron sat there breathing heavily when they herd a little giggle outside of the door it was natilea bill and flurs little girl. hermione opend the door suddenly scarring the little girl and sending her flying down the stairs calling " granny, granny, guess what; uncle ron and hermy-onie were kissin the were kissin !!!!!" ron turned redder than a red hot and hermione laughed.. hermione and ron walked down stairs only to find half of the order laughing at the little girls explanation of why she was screaming.
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it was quite good but i have 1 question...Bill and Fluers little girl???whats that all about???this is like the 7th year right?
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Apr 9th, 2006 11:07 PM |
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yea 7th year and they havent even been married yet and use CAPITALS. its makes it easier to read but i love the cute little girl kissin thing but you shouldv'e have wirtten about bill and flluers wedding. They shouldnt even have a kid yet.
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you are both right about the little girl i guess i moved to fast. i will fix that and thank you for the advice
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Apr 9th, 2006 11:39 PM |
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it's good so far, but the little girl part kinda confused me.
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o.k. so im fixin my story here
preface:
"Arthur,Arhtur please come here;Arthur?!" Shouted a frantic Mrs.Weasly. Mr.Weasly came down stairs and asked exasperaredly " What is is Molly I'm kind of busy here." just then bill came down with his face coverd in some type of material (it looked like toilet paper). " Oh dear Bill what is it now?" Mrs. Weasly asked her son. " I cant get married to Flur with scars on my face so I will cover them." He stated sadly. And then suddenly like she knew she was being talked about Flur appeared on the last stair carrying a wailing infant about to turn two. and asked " Vhat eez eet bill? And vhy do you haf tolet papur on your head?" Bill looked at her and the flailing infant and said " its not toilet paper its a bandage. and i cant marry you with theese scars on my face. When you have a perfecly beautiful face." with a tired sigh Flur said " Bill take your daughter I am goeng to take a shower and then ve vill talk." She handed over the tiny little girl and with that she left the room the little girl crying after her.
skip one week Bill and Flurs wedding
Everything was perfect to harry except the fact he couldent date the girl he loved; for fear of getting her killed. " This wedding is almost as depressing as Dumbledore's funeral" he wisperd to ron who was sitting next hermione and holding hands with her. " Why" asked ron very quietly. " Because after this I have to go and kill Voldemort and I know I cant marry the girl I want to" he wisperd back as the family who could hear them cringed. Ginny on the other side of the isle could only vagely here the pastor preforming the cerimony because she was wrestling with Natilea who turned two, three days before the wedding. Natilea could almost talk like a grown person;" I guess her mother has more brains than I thought." She said to herself and she could almost swear she saw harry double over in laughter on his seat. Ginny looked up and saw Bill and Flur kiss, it was over. Bill and Flur turned to everyone and Ginny let go of Natilea and the little girl jumped out of her chair and ran to her parents making the audience laugh.
there is that better i know that bill and flur had a baby before the got married and stuff but i dont see how i could fit natilea in the story unless they had her before they got married.
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Apr 10th, 2006 12:16 AM |
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ok its pretty good! but this si getting on my nerves sry but its not Flur its Fluer
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Apr 10th, 2006 12:49 AM |
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LOL I will keep that in mind
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Apr 10th, 2006 12:54 AM |
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wen r u gonna post mur?
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it's okay, can't wait for more though
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Ok so here is more story oh and im going to pick up where i left off before i wrote the preface ( the part when ron and hermione walk downstairs and half of the order is laughing at natilea.)
Ron and Hermione had just walked into the room when Natilea finished her story. " And then Uncle Ron was kissin Hermy-ione" " HA-HA-HA" she forced a laugh. Mad-Eye looked up at Ron and made a kissing noise; when the group heard an all together too real kissing noise and turned around to see Tonks kissing Lupin.
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Lupin was suprised at first, and then he let out a small groan, he had wanted this for so long.....
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Sorry I know its short but I have to go tell me how you liked it
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OK I'm bored more story!!
..... Tonks was shocked at her own boldness. She heard lupin grown and then she tried to push away from him but he held on to her tightly. She tried to show him that she wasn't sure she wanted to continue by staying stiff, but it didn't work she melted to him she felt him deepen the kiss and then it was her turn to groan. she was thinking to her self " wow, we fit perfectly" when he pulled away she heard him gasp for air, as she did the same. Tonks was still in her own world when she heard Mad-Eye whistle and say " its about time!" Everyone laughed..
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Somewhere of in the distance a young boy was sobbing and kissing the hem of his masters robes " Master,Master,please i know i let snape do it please understand master i was scared please master,please" Draco malfoy sobbed. Lord Voldemort had bound his parents to make them watch there only son be torcherd. "hahaha You fool of a boy do you think that you can get out of punishment by crying at me like a baby, NO YOU CANT!! Draco,Draco i have invented a new spell I'm not sure what it does but you are going to help me with that aren't you? YES YOU ARE!! alright here it goes.......limbotoria!!!" voldemort screamed;then laughed. Draco looked down at the point of the white hot pain all the time he was screaming in agony but what he saw made the scream stop in his throat when he looked down he saw............. well thats all for now!! how do you like? comment please.
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your story is good. keep posting!
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exellent!!!continue!!!
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...... He looked down to the point of white hot pain all the time screaming in agony and what he saw made the scream stop in his throat all of his fingers had been detached at the nuckle like an invisable axe chopped them off he had just enough time to hear his mothers scream and voldemorts high pitched scream of a laugh before the darkness surrounded him....
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Harry was sitting in his and Rons room, listening to ron explain how he almost got to second base with hermione for about the third time in one hour. " Ron I know you almost got to second base with hermione before natilea walked in on you guys again, but could we please talk about somthing else now, the mental image of my two best friends rubbing each other down is grossing me out!" harry said. Just then Ginny walked in the room and said " Harry we need to talk you havent spoken to me for three days!!!" ginny yelled. " Well see you later mate" said ron eyeing ginny. " Harry i dont care if voldemort wants to kill me i want to date you." " Ginny will you go out with me?" they said in unison. Ginny obviously heard him bcause one moment he was sitting the next Ginny was on top of him with her tounge in his mouth.........
well tell me how you liked it please!!! i know its short but i lost my work and i had to re-wirite it
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Apr 10th, 2006 05:55 PM |
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G8!!!update soon!!!
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Apr 10th, 2006 06:46 PM |
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iluvhp1_7
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well i like it but it seems like you've written it out of own experience. But i like the tension and your writing style but try to write more in your posts
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lupin/tonks harry/ginny ron/ hermione
thank you for the advice i will keep it in mind and also thank you for the support. and if you have any ideas tell me and i will find a way to work them into the story.
skip the next day with tonks in her office.
Tonks looked up from her letter and looked out the window, " I love Remus and he loves me" she thought with a faint smile on her face. " Who love who?" asked Alidia her partner. " Oh did i say that out loud?" tonks asked with a small laugh. Before Alidia could answer a snowy white owl that she new to be Harry's tapped on her window. Tonks jumped out of her chair and grabbed the bird ripping at the letter afraid of the worst for harry instead she read this:
dearest tonks,
please meet me at the leaky cauldron on July 31 we will spend a few days there before escorting the children to hogwarts. and i have a question for you it is very important.
yours truly R. Lupin
Well i wonder what he wants she thought she sat down and couldn't think of anything to say but yes it sounds lovely.
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" Ronald where are we going?" Hermione asked Ron for about the fifth time in three minutes. " We are going somewhere to be alone for a while I'm sick of natilea bursting in on us whenever we start to....." he let the sentence trail off. Hermione just giggled and turned a pretty shade of pink. they came to little shack on the side of the house. " But Ronald wont natilea find us here?" " No she thinks its haunted". Hermione laughed again. Ron opened the door and what he found shocked him; " Harry what the bloody hell do you think your doing to my sister?" harry and Ginny were standing in the shed both with their shirts off and Ginny was in the process of taking Harry's pants down. they both dressed quickly and left with out another word to Ron or Hermione until later that night.
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Ginny sat in her room and Hermione came into the room " Ginny i hope you know that your really wanted to do that with harry because" Ginny cut her off "of course i wanted to how many times do i have to say it i love harry and that will not change!" Shouted Ginny who then rolled over and cryed herself to sleep
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" I hope your bloody happy harry you ruined my little sister successfully" Ron shouted at harry. " Listen Ron i didn't mean for it to go that far... and what if i marry Ginny one day..huh? did you ever think of that we would be true brothers then! so lay off a bit because i wouldst do that with any body i didn't love OK?" harry said " w-w-wait did you just say you love my sister? because if you did that would be great! i mean me and Hermione getting married...." he stopped short " I should not have said that she didn't want me to tell...she is going to kill me." he said with a sheepish grin. " your marrying Hermione? mate thats great good for you." harry said "yea just don't tell you know we weren't going to tell until the end of the school year. and you should get some sleep tomorrows your birthday. well good night."............. thats all for now how did you like it ?
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iluvhp1_7
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well personally i think you going to quick with the marriage thing. You shoul dhave waited until after the school year to tell us that they were going to get m,arried it would make it a happy ending but otherwise its relli good
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ok thanks for the post i have major writers bolck right now so ill post soon as i get some more ideas!!
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