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Harry Potter and the Mudblood War
Chapter 1
-SIRIUS! Don’t leave me, please!!
-Harry, Harry! The neighbors may
Heard you! Harry did not understand but when he open his eyes it
All made sense; he was in his room talking in sleep, and uncle Vernon
In front of him, with face of a scared toad.
-I will not tolerate anymore you talking in your dreams boy! He
Snarled.
-I'm sorry sir; I'll try to keep it down. Harry said while he was
Trying to remember what was that he was dreaming.
When uncle Vernon left the images of Harry’s dream seemed very clear,
He was fighting the death-eaters and he heard Bellatrix Lestranges
Laugh and Sirius fell into a hole and scrammed-HARRY!!!!
When Harry decided to go downstairs get some breakfast the dursley
Family was already on the table, -joy... Harry whispered.
Dudley can you give me the bacon? Harry asked
Dudley seemed not to hear him.
DUDLEY...will you PLEASE give me the bacon? Harry asked again.
And Dudley without saying a word gives the bacon plate to Harry.
Thank you, Harry told Dudley which Dudley's face turn to the same color
Of Ron's hair.
After Harry had some breakfast he decided to go for a walk to the
Park near Privet Drive.
Once Harry got there he sat on the swing.
-Harry? Harry potter? A voice asked.
Harry looked up and he saw Mark Evans face.
-Hello, Harry greeted.
-Wow.... I know all about you, Evans lowered his voice and said- you
Know I am a wizard as well.
-Really? Harry asked with bit of excitement on his voice
-Yes...my parents prohibited me to tell you that I am from a wizard
Family till they know for sure that I am a wizard, you see for a lot
Of years nobody in family thought that I was a wizard they all thought
I was a squib, cause I never showed any clues that I had magic inside
Me.
-Wow... my friend Neville's family thought he was a squib as well.
-Oh, hey I was wondering since my parents allowed me if you would
Like to come to my home to have dinner tonight all my family would
Kill to meet you.
- Yes I would like that very much, Harry answered.
Harry was really exited about it.
It has been already two weeks since I left Hogwarts, Harry thought,
And on Saturday of the third week he will go over to Hermione's!
Hermione invited Harry to go over to her home for the holidays.
When Harry arrived to Privet Drive 4, he told Uncle Vernon that he would
Go out for dinner, uncle Vernon didn't answered so Harry thought that
There was no problem.
At 7:00 p.m Harry decided to go to mark Evans house, on his way there
He heard strange noises; it was like a kind of explosions, and Harry
Tried to look for the place where the explosions came from...after a
Little while he gave up and head to mark Evans house.
When he got there he realized that the noises where coming from Mark's
Home! Harry knocked the door, and then an old woman with a severe look
Greeted him, Harry asked trying not to be impolite -umm...is this
Mark Evans house?
-Yes, yes it is, the old woman answered, and you are? She continued
-Oh! Yeah...I am Harry Potter.
-Are you really? The woman asked, and her eyes went directly to Harry’s
Scar.
Then Harry heard Mark Evans voice asking who was at the door, when he
Got to the door he said-Oh Harry! You are early...why don't you come
Inside? My mom will be here in five minutes.
When Harry entered to the house he was surprised that it looked like
A muggles house.
Mark noticed that Harry was impressed because the decoration of the
House, - I reckon that you are wondering why does this look like a
Muggles house, well it is because that my dad is a muggle.
- Oh.... Harry said a little embarrassed.
-SO...what does your mother do? Harry asked.
-She works in the ministry, in the international magic
Cooperation.
When Harry was going to answer when a woman arrived, she was very handsome
She was tall, she had light brown hair and her eyes were dark green
Just like Harry's.
-Hello, she greeted Harry, -you must be Harry Potter, and I was looking
Forward to meet you.
-Hi...Harry stupidly answered, and your name is...? Harry asked
-Oh, Gloria, Gloria Habbelt. -Hello Mark, dear. She greeted Mark.
"So maybe we could eat now, I'm starving!" Miss. Habbelt said.
Harry thought that Gloria looked way young to have an 11-year-old boy
And way to cool to work in the international magic cooperation.
"So, mark, where is your dad?" Harry asked.
-He is on a business trip, he owns a trading company.
So after Harry had dinner with the Evan's he went straight back home
After he got home he went to his room to send a letter to Hermione
And Ron telling them about dinner, after that the Dursley's went to
Sleep and so did Harry.
In the morning Harry woke up because an owl was pecking his window
When he opened it he didn't recognize that owl and it was certainly not
The daily prophet one so Harry opened the letter and immediately
Recognized Hermione's perfect grammar.
Harry:
Harry, how have you been holding up with the muggles? I think they are
Not as bad as the last summer, well I just want to tell you that if
It is ok with you my family and me will go to pick you up at 3:00 p.m on Saturday.
Please respond me as soon as possible to tell me if this hour is ok
With you well really looking forward to see you Harry.
Hermione
PS: My Dad and Mom gave me this owl when they saw the results of
My OWL’s, Ron and Ginny will come to my house on Sunday.
After reading this letter Harry remembered that Miss McGonagall
Have already send him the results of the OWL's but he didn't
Opened there and he have completely forgot since then.
He started looking for the letter and finally found it.
And Harry surprised saw the results, which by the way were
Really good, Harry even thought that maybe the confused but
He decided not to say anything.
Harry went downstairs and he told Uncle Vernon:
"Umm…Uncle Vernon?
-What? Vernon asked.
-Well my friend Hermione, has invited me over to her place for the
Rest of the summer, and she said that if it's ok she and her
Parents will come pick me up here on Saturday a 3:00 p.m,
And don't worry Harry added when he saw the look on Vernon's
Face, her parents are muggles, I mean non magi...just people
Like you very normal if you know what I mean.
-Ok. Vernon answered.
So Harry run upstairs and sends a letter to hermione that sounded
Like this:
Hermione:
Well, the hour you told me it's ok, my Uncle isn't happy about
It so it's even more perfect, well sees you soon!
Harry
PS: nice owl!
The next days passed pretty slowly, Harry couldn’t wait till the weekend; Harry daydreamed about being so in touch with the magic world.
On Saturday morning, Harry dressed up (even though it was 7:00 in the morning) and went downstairs to have breakfast the Dursley family didn’t even looked at him, and Harry was so happy that he didn’t even felt like bothering Dudley.
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Auror Chk
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its good...i mean it needs a little bit of work but who am i to judge you..even i havent written a fanfic before...btw its mum..or unless you wanted to put in mom  ....and it was sort of like the sentences didnt have any full stops...if you get my drift??and there were other things but i guess ill leave it for the others..anywayz out of 10 id give it maybe an 6 or 7....sorry hobbit_dude... 
i feel really stink!! if you want to say something horrible about me you can... 
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Jul 25th, 2004 12:57 PM |
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u b!tch!! shut up~!! g2 hell!!!
nah just kidding, I know it needs a little bit of work it's my first fasnfin  but what i meanyt is like the idea of the story whether os good or not
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Jul 26th, 2004 05:15 AM |
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Auror Chk
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oh sorry hobbit_dude *gives hobbit dude a massive hug* yes the story so far is good...   im sorry i hurt your feelings....
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Jul 26th, 2004 08:44 AM |
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bookworm4lyf
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write more!
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Mar 11th, 2005 10:34 PM |
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sounds pretty good. i like how you switched it up. they're going to Hermione's house.
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Mar 11th, 2005 11:36 PM |
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Good job keep going!
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Mar 12th, 2005 08:12 PM |
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Diamonds
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v. cool. i luv it! keep going...wait this was done 9months ago...will u post again?
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Mar 12th, 2005 09:37 PM |
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I will i'll work n the next chap now
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Mar 12th, 2005 09:55 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
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yay!!!!!!!!
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Mar 12th, 2005 10:13 PM |
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Chapter 2
Part 1
"I trust your friends won't come from the chimeney this time" Vernon said after he buttered his toast
"No, my friend, hermione, her friend's are mu-" Harry stopped, he knew his Uncle would not appreciate him mentioning that word "they are very normal" he finished
"I highly doubt normal... but as long as they don't destroy our living room"
"They won't" Harry finished the conversation coldly.
At 2:45 PM, Harry had already finsihed packing his things and was waiting in the living room, Dudley was in his room, with the door locked.
At 3:00 PM sharp the door bell rang, Harry quickly went to answer it, when he opened he saw the Grangers, Mr. and Mrs. Granger smiling with they're perfect white teeth, Harry remembered they were dentists, and Mrs. Granger's hand over Hermione's shoulder, Hermione had grown a lot this summer, she looked vert pretty Harry thought.
"Harry! It is so nice to finally see you!" Hermione greeted Harry as she hugged him.
"I know, I was looking forward to this" Harry answered "Mr. and Mrs. Granger, nice to meet you"
"nice to meet you too" Mr. Granger answered.
"are you all packed up already?" Mrs. Granger sweetly asked.
"oh yes of course, I'm ready to go" Harry happily answered
"don't you want to say bye to your Uncle and Aunt?" Mr. Granger asked.
"Oh no, I already said good bye" Harry lied. Hermione smiled at him obviously she knew he was lying.
In their way to hermione's house, nobody talked much, Harry wanted to ask Hermione if she had heard any news from the Order, but he felt he'd wait until they were alone.
Harry felt a bit of an awkward situation, nobody talking... so he said "So, Hermione great we're all staying at you're place, eh?"
"Yeah... it's really cool" Hermione answered. Harry's attempt to break the ice was failed... he kept trying "yeah... we are gonna have lots of fun, when are we going to Diagon Alley?"
"Actually, we're gonna meet with the Weasleys in four days, we're all going to go together" Mrs. Granger explained Harry
"Oh, great, by the way Hermione have you heard anything from Fred and George?" Harry asked.
"No... not really, I sincerely hope their shop is doing OK"
And the rest of the trip was pretty much silent, when they arrived to Hermione's Harry was not able to hold a "wow..." Hermione when she saw Harry's expression explained that her Grandparents were rich so they left it all to them when they passed.
The house was gorgeous, the front yard was extremely well taken cared off, the house was really beautiful in the inside too, at the entrance hall there was a big red rug, and many paintings of who harry thought were hermione's relatives, Hermione lead Harry to the guest room, it was a big room with two beds.
"You'll sleep with Ron here, Ginny will sleep with me in my room" hermione said.
Author's note: Ill divide this chapter in three parts, Ill probably have the next 2 other parths by tomorrow
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Mar 12th, 2005 10:24 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
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*waits patiently with bated breath*
"Oooooooooohhhhhhhh, i can't wait any longer!!! Oh dammit I'm gonna have to wait!" says me.
*sighs*
lol 
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Mar 12th, 2005 10:26 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
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Location: Newcastle, England |
sorry about my posting about not being able to wait, i think there is something wrong with my computer, coz i didn't see your post!!
Well never mind, i can't wait 4 tomorrow!
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Mar 12th, 2005 10:30 PM |
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awesome...its really original for no one has ever been or described Hermione's house...ene Rowling! AWESOME!!
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Mar 12th, 2005 10:32 PM |
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O.A.R21
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awsome yay good job!
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Mar 13th, 2005 03:55 AM |
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Chapter II Part II
"great" Harry answered. Hermione smiled and Harry couldn't help himself to think "what a beautiful smile Hermione has" but then he thought "oh my god... I can't... I can't fall in love with her... she's hermione" what he did not know was that she felt the same feelings towards her.
Harry and Hermione spent the rest of the afternoon watching TV, they both laughed at the fact of two wizards behaving like muggles, but Harry wasn't concentrating on the movie... he just couldn't stop looking at her she was so... beautiful.
"Come on guys, we'll have dinner in 10 minutes go wash your hands" Mrs. Granger told Harry and Hermione at around 8:00, they both went to wash their hands and then head directly to the dinning room, the dinning room was a big one, it had a very big table even though three people lived in the house, the plates were already served, it was smashed potatoes and beef.
"So, Harry how has your summer been?" Mr. Granger asked.
"It's been OK" Harry lied "But I can't wait to go back to Hogwarts" he continued.
"Oh well... you don't seem to enjoy you Holidays so much, eh?" Mr. Granger said.
"No, I do... but I simply feel more at home at Hogwarts" Harry truthfuly answered.
"Oh... OK" Mr. Granger answered, he obviously thought Harry liked school in a studying way, but that was because he hadn't met the Dursleys.
The rest of the evening was almost mute, Harry complimented Mrs. Grangers cooking, but she said that she hadn't cooked it, and then they just started to talk about the new books, and which classes they were going to take this year "If one thing's for sure... I am not going to take Divination this year" Harry said "You finally catched on, eh?" Hermione joked, after they finished dinner they all went directly to their bedrooms, Harry couldn't sleep he was still trying to find out whether he's "crush" on Hermione, simply was a crush. Right after he decided to stop thinking about it, somebody knocked the door, harry got up and opened it
"Hermione?"
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Mar 13th, 2005 02:19 PM |
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O.A.R21
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AWSOME! keep going cant wait to see what happens!
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Mar 13th, 2005 02:22 PM |
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Diamonds
I'm Special.
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ooooooooooooooooo wot is gonna happen? well, thats a daft thang to say, its pretty obvious. well maybe its not. hermy could say anything from "i really like you" to "what lessons are you taking this year". or not. cos its summat like 9pm. ok, thats early. oh someone shut me up!!! *dad comes in room and shoots me* *head lands on key board* nmj bvnmhjsd
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Mar 13th, 2005 02:28 PM |
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Diamonds
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its official. i need to be taken to a mental hospital. erjdhdfshuiserhurhurjzdyseohjdmklxgdrhio;n wej buatr ynm,s5ryu89f bgf. there, my friends, is hard damn proof.
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Mar 13th, 2005 02:30 PM |
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spoiler for coming part : [SPOILER - highlight to read]: it corncerns Krum
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Mar 13th, 2005 03:44 PM |
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