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Jack Diavolo
moshpit assasin
 Gender: Male
Location: United States |
Jacks poems
ive been writing poetry for a few years but its never been something i decided to pursue
but heres a couple ive just had or just written.
heres an old one.
untitled
I've got a small confession
These butterflies wont quit
In your hand, Mine is woven
It's funny how they fit.
Your heart it beats in tune with mine
A dark enchanted flow
I feel your heart right next to mine
It's funny how they glow.
I suppose we call this love
A feeling that I miss
So light my my heart, that with a start
It stops within your kiss.
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Dec 10th, 2007 05:50 AM |
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Lara
Belladonna
 Gender: Female
Location: Some where in the Poison Ivy |
wow, this one is very sweet I like it. it flows well and is simple. the message is clear and tbvh its made my heart go all funny so its great.
very nice, jack. very nice indeed 
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be who you are not what they want you to be!
blessed be x
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Dec 29th, 2007 05:09 PM |
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