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Mousse

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Cool Harry Potter 7...my style

I have relitively goten bored so im going to start my own story. I have not yet come up with a name, because I only do it when i finish. So This is the first FanFic ive made, so be patient. I hope to update when ever possible and for my readers to enjoy it. Thanx


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Mousse

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Chapter 1, Part 1

It was a chilling night in the residence of the Dursleyís. Even in the summer there is a nice gentle breeze that come and goes, but not tonight. There was an odd presence that only few can depict. A feeling of nothing good or nice can survive.
All was asleep on Private Drive except for one person. Harry Potter was still awake, looking out the window, and thinking. He hadnít been able to sleep with this presence in the air. Dementors, he thought; Dementors were foul creatures that suck all the happiness out of a place. He had been attacked by them two years previously.
Harry had been writing to Ron and Hermione, spilling his thoughts into them. He still was contemplating whether he was going to Hogwarts for his final year. There where his pros and cons, but how was he going to destroy all of the Horcruxes when he has his studies. Harry needed Hedwig back so he could send the letters. Hedwig was out hunting.
He looked at his watch and noticed that it was 11:58 PM. It was two minutes until his seventeenth birthday. He would now be of age and able to perform magic. He would have to go take an Apparation Exam, so he could legally Apparate. Harry heard a tap at the window and looked over to see Hedwig looking chilled outside. Harry opened up the window and Hedwig Flew in with a dead mouse in her beak. Harry was just about to close the window when something caught his eyes. It looked like a puff ball flying around. He soon recognized it was Pig, Ronís owl. Pig Flew right into Harry and suddenly dropped to the floor. Pig looked absolutely exhausted.
Harry noticed a thick envelope tied to Pigís ankle. Harry stooped down to untie it from the tired owls leg. Harry hurriedly opened the envelope and something fell from a thick letter.


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Mousse

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How are you liking it so far? reading

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Mousse

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Chapter 1 Part 2

Harry didnít notice that something fell, so he sat down on his bed. There was a letter was from the Ministry of Magic, Ron, and Hermione. Harry tossed the Ministry of Magic one aside, wanting to read that later, and opened Ronís letter. It said:

Harry,

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! How are you? Are you surviving the muggles? Hey when are you coming to the Burrow? Next week is the wedding and your invited. Well hope you can come and stay. Hermione is already here and missing you. Mum say that your welcome to come and stay for the rest of the summer. So send Pig back when he is feeling better. Iíve been hearing that Dementors have been hanging around in Britain. So Iíll talk to you later.

Ron

Harry set the letter down and picked up Hermioneís.

Oh, Happy Birthday Harry!!! Youíre now of age. Congratulations! Now you can go and take the Apparation Exam and perform magic. Iím so happy for you. Ron still hasnít retaken the exam, so heís willing to take it with you. Oh I hope that youíll spend the rest of the summer with us. Next week is the wedding. I hope that youíll be able to make it. Well, I will hopefully see you before summer ends.
Love,
Hermione


Harry felt his cheeks go warm when he finished reading the letter. He set down the letter to look at what the Ministry had sent him. He really didnít want to read what it had to say but she picked up the thick letter any ways. Harry skimmed through it and all it had was a congratulations about being of age, and the laws that would be in place and enforced, now that it was legal to perform magic.
Harry felt the heaviness of his eyelids and decided to go to sleep. He figured that he would make up his mind of what he was to do with his future tomorrow. He gave Hedwig and Pig an owl treat each and took off his glasses and fell asleep.


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It's good, your posts needs to be lenghtier although i keep getting told the same thing so... u don't need to take my advice .... ;^)


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WldGrnAgel
Mousse

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thanks
it's just that i've been busy with school... so i'll post asap


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good!!! i like it keep up the with the story
post.
pliz


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IcyMag3
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hey good work *thumbs up*
I'm glad ur grammar and spelling are good too big grin

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WldGrnAgel
Mousse

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Thanks guys... It might be a while before i post... i hate essays and studying for finals... mad oh well.


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exams in january? mine's in may...anyway gd luck & i hope u will continue posting afterwards

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i like it keep it up
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Mousse

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Chapter 2 Part One

Harry found himself around in a graveyard. He felt a similarity somehow, like he has been there before. He was stumbling across some tombstones. Harry tripped over a tree root and stumbled to the ground. His glasses lay askew on the ground. He got up, picked up his glasses, and wiped the dew off of them. As he put on his glasses, he saw a strange mist forming around him. Harry looked around and noticed two tombstones in front of him. He tried to read what they say, but at that same instant, his scar seared with pain.
Harry awoke abruptly with sweat dripping down his face. His scar felt as though his head just had been branded. I rubbed it to take the pain away, but found no relief. He looked at the clock, it was 1: 30 P.M. Harry jumped up quickly, realizing that he had been asleep for thirteen hours. He changed his clothes and went into the bathroom. He tried to comb his hair, but it kept on popping up. He put the comb down.
Harry looked in the mirror and noticed something behind him. He saw red glowing eyes and nostrils like slits. His heart stopped beating for a split second and his body froze with fear. He spun around and saw nothing. He rushed out of the bathroom, and into his room. He picked up his wand, yet nothing. Maybe it was an after effect from the dream? Harry didnít know.
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A couple of hours later, Harry had packed all of his stuff into his trunk, cleaned out hedwigs cage of droppings. He worked so hard, that at the very end, he finally realized that he could do magic now. That made him angry.

2 B continued

I'll post more sooner or later... thanks for the support


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hey your story is really good stick out tongue

post more soon


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SiriusRox**
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me likey. when ya gonna post again? i am sooo bored and really want to read some more of this!!!


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WldGrnAgel
Mousse

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there is more to come i have written out like to chapter 6... but im sick... cough cough.. and having so personal issues i have to deal with... so i will get some more done asap!!!!
thanx for the support


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Sirius_Rulez
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this is some story, its really gr8 its so good, plz write more soon,
im new here, well not exactly, iv read some other h/p fics but havnt really been able to comment on them cause i didnt no how to register on dis thing, i started to read from kmc just last christmas,
well its gr8
keep up da good work


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by da way, how do u write ur own stories on here?


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WldGrnAgel
Mousse

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you start a topic in the area you want to write
and update it buy posting comments

that's how i do it


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0o0o0o0ohhh! I like it. :smile: please resume to the story soon!
I understand if u have tests and lots of essays due soon. I have those CTBS test things next week, so I might not be on much.

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Emmy-xo
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please keep writing...your story is great!


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