KMC Forums - CSI fan scripts

this is were plp can give sorta a idea of what they would like to happen in the eppisodes.
Here is a script i wrote please don't take any thing out of it,of take credit for it,cause it took a week to make,and it still is not done,there are a few buggs to work out in it.
here ya go.
Script~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WARNIG!
ONLY A ROUGH DARFT!

Intro: Shows some shots of famous places in L.A , and then it shows a house with the two victims Mr. , and Mrs. Stokes are at home, and starting a fire in the fire place. Then it zooms over to Mr. Tompkins house were he is given an advil by his maid, and his girl friend leaves from a fight, and says, you�ll be sorry, and runs out in a fury. Then it shows Nick, and Warrick at the scene of the crime for the Stokes.

-Starts off Nick is in the brake room waiting for an assignment, while reading a letter from his brother.-
Warrick:*walks into the brake room were Nick is reading a letter.*What do you got there?
Nick: *Swings around to see Warrick�s face.*A letter from my brother .He his wife, and daughter just moved to Vegas.
Warrick: Oh yah?
Nick: Yah ,*grabs picture of them*here is picture of them.
Warrick: takes picture in hand and looks at it. Nice family.
Nick:Yah.they are. My brother is motor technician, and my sister in law is a Lawyer.
Warrick: *gives picture back to Nick* That�s great for them.
Sara:*walks into brake room with Warrick, and Nick*Hey guys.
Warrick: Hey Sara.
Nick: Hey Sara.
Sara: *goes over to coffee machine, and gets a cup of coffee.
Greg : walks in *Hey my CSI buddies!
Nick: *looks at Greg* Greg.
Greg: Yah?
Nick: Never say that again.
Greg: Ok. * Sits down* What�s that?
Nick: Oh it is just a letter from my brother.
Greg: Oh. *Sees picture of the family*Is that them?
Nick: Yah, with Jennifer his wife, and Abby his daughter.
Cathy:*walks in*Hey Warrick, Nicky, Greg ,Sara.
Greg & Nick & Sara & Greg: Hey Cathy.
Gil:* walks into room* Morning every one. Hope you all got some good sleep last night.
Cathy: Are we busy today?
Gil; No, not really, it weird cases I guess.
Warrick: you guess?
Gil:*Shrugs*I just give the assignments, I don�t make them.
Gil: here you go,*hands paper to warrick* You ,and Nick can get this case.
Warrick: grabs paper-*ok come on Nick.
Nick: *gets up* ok.
Warrick & Nick: *Leave*
Gil: Sara, your with me, and Cathy.
Sara: Ok ,lets go.*both her, and Cathy leave*
Greg: Grissom.
Gil: Yah?
Greg: What about me?
Gil: oh sorry greg,um if Nick,and Warrick need any help, then
You can ok?

-Then it goes Nick and Warrick�s Crime scene-

Warwick: Nice Neighborhood.
Nick: Yah, sort of like my brother�s neighborhood. *Short pause as they climb up the street * what number did they say it was at?
Warrick: Um*looks at paper*144,why?
Nick:*short pause * God. . No. * starts running towards the house*
Warrick: Nick? Nick What�s Wrong? *Starts running up to the house to catch up with Nick. *
Nick:*runs into house sees all of the blood rolling down the Victim�s faces.*Who are they ,do you know who they are?

David: Well, no, we might have to clean them up I bit to tell. * pauses , looks at body , and then looks at Nick*Why? Do you know him?
Nick: *looks at body*I don�t know, I mean, I think, but, god I hope not.
David: Well, do you know her? * Point over to the Mrs.*Looks like she may have bled to death.
Nick: *looks over at the woman*Not sure, how could you when there is so much blood?
Warrick*enters the house, and sees Nick, and the David. *Nick? What�s wrong? You ran off when I said the address.
Nick: I think we are Related.

David: Related?
Nick: Yah, he was my big brother.
David: He is your older brother?
Nick: Yah by 4 years.
David: And he has a daughter?
Nick: Yah. * Picks up a picture of his brother with his wife, and daughter. I t a playful laugh* I remember, oh. Oh no Abby.
David: Abby? Who the hell is Abby?
Nick: David, did you guys find any more bodies?
David: Yah upstairs in the bathroom. But it was a suicide.
Warrick: A suicide?
David: Yah there was a note, and every thing.
Nick; Did you find a girl?
David: A girl?
Nick: A girl around 12,or maybe 13?
David: No. Why?
Warrick: Nick?
Nick: My niece.
Warrick: Your Niece?
David: *Stars at Nick *
Nick: *Runs up to the bathroom.
Warrick: *Follows Nick.*
Nick: *enters the bathroom, were his brother lays in the tub on top of a sleeping bag with a bullet hole through his head.
Warrick: *Enters the bathroom behind Nick, and sees the body.*
Nick: *Turns around to Warrick* I think Grissom�s phantom killer is back.* gets really mad* But why him!
Warrick:*Steps back from Nick.*Nick ,man I�m sorry about your brother.
Nick: I know, but *pauses* We need to find Abby .If she is Still alive.
Warrick: I�ll call Brass, and have him form a search team.
Nick: Thanks Warrick.
Brass: *shows brass interrogating the witness*

-Cuts to Grissom, and Cathy.-

Gil: *swabs blood for sample.*
Cathy: Who do you think she is?
Gil: I don�t know .dose she have, an id on her?
Cathy: I don�t know, we�ll have to wait till the coroner gets her in.*ponders thoughts for a minuet* How do you think the guy, well girl, person blew up?
Gil: Well we might get a lead as so as Greg is done with that blood sample that Sara brought him.
Cathy:*Goes out to the other body.*
Gil;*Examines the body. Then sees the body has some sort of box in her hand. He picks it up ,and calls for Cathy: Yah?
Gil: Could you come here please?
Cathy: *enters room with Gil holding up a box of liquid capsule Tylenol* What the hell is that?
Gil: I think we found out how victim number two died.
Cathy: *Grabs the box* She could have had taken all of the pills.*opens the box*
Gil: *looks over at the open packet *But there is only one missing capsule.
Cathy: Looks like it could be the only witness to the crime.
Gil: I think I�ll look in the yard, maybe there is some evidence there.
Cathy:*looking at the girl�s face.* ok.
Gil:*wonders out into the back yard, searching for some kind of answer. But he finds a body instead*Cathy!*runs over to the body, and feels for a pulse ,and there is one.* Cathy get out here!*gets on phone calls for help*Yah I need emergency medical assistants on scene. Young girl white, maybe 12-13 years of age, I think*looks at the girls face.* It is, it is the girl from the Amber alert. It is Abby Stokes.* tries to assist the girl, and hangs up phone*
Cathy: *comes out side to see Gill kneeling over a body.*My god. Is that? * looks at face of the girl*
Gil: Yah, it is the girl from the amber alert. It�s Nick�s niece*LOOKS AT Cathy*
Cathy: * looks at Gil*

-Cuts to Crime Scene with Nick, and Warrick-

Brass:*Arrives to tell Nick about their finding of Abby.*
Brass: *Enters the house to find Nick kneeling down to swab a stay blood sample*
Nick:*looks up to see Brass, and stands up straight.* Did you find her?
Brass: Yah, but �( gets in erupted by Nick.)
Nick: What? But what ? Is she ok?
Brass: Well, she was pretty beat up.
Nick: *sighs*Damn! Who the hell would do this? *looks at Brass*
Brass: You should consider her lucky.
Nick: I do. Were is she?
Brass: Right now she is at the hospital. She was pretty beat up like I said.
Nick: Like how?
Brass: She had some pretty serious busing.
Nick: Ok, um *gets coat* Could you call some one to cover this? I have to go get her.
Brass: *Smiles* sure.
Nick: *leaves*
Warrick: *comes down the stairs* were did Nick go?
Brass: We found Abby.
Warrick; You did? Were?
Brass: We were by her house, and she was on the side of the road.
Warrick: Were is she now?
Brass: She is at the hospital.

- Cuts to The Hospital-

Nick: *walks up to the front desk*
Secretary: Welcome the L.A. Hospital, how may I help you?
Nick: Abby Stokes, Abby Stokes what room is she in?
Sectitary: Are you family?
Nick: Yah, I�m her uncle.
Secretary: *looks at paper*Abby Stokes Room 144.
Nick: Thank you.*Rushes off to room 144.finnaly finds it, and enters it, and sees Abby with a cast on her right arm. And slowly walks up to her.*
Nick; Abby?* looks at her face, and all of her cuts, and what not*Abby? Are you awake?
Abby;*slowly opens eyes*
Nick; *sighs with relief*Abby?*walks up to her bed side*
Abby: Yah?
Nick: I�m your uncle.
Abby: I know who you are.*looks at him* I have seen you in pictures before.
Nick: Abby, I have to tell you some thing about your Mom, and Dad.
Abby; Their dead.
Nick:* pauses* what?
Abby: Their dead aren�t they?
Nick: How did you know?
Abby: I was there.
-Flash back to Were Abby sees her mother get hit in the head.-
Nick: You saw who did it?
Abby: I saw the back of a head.-flashback-But then some thing hit my head, and that is all I remember.
Nick:*Grabs Abby�s right hand, and cups it between his. Abby? Is there any thing you want to talk about?
Abby: *Begins to tear.* Yah.
Nick:*looks at Abby�s tears*What?
Abby: * begins to cry* What�s going to happen to me?
this is only half of it.