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ginny for harry redo

hi i have rewritten my storry heres the first chapter


It was the day before Harry's seventeenth birthday when he would come to age. Hermione and Ron should be hear any minute the letter said met us in your room the day before your birthday at 12.00 pm. Harry ha got this letter 2 days ago and had been waiting in his room since. He had sent Errol back saying okay and it was 11.55 when aunt Petunia came in and sat next to Harry
“Harry there’s something you should no I’ve always loved you and Lilly.”

“Then why did you always act like you hated us.”

“That would be because Vernon hated that life so I had to stop talking to her,
But just before she died she sent this to me.”

“Dear Harry if u gets this letter then your father and I are dead but know that we love you, your father has attached something for u in another letter.”

“Wow I never new u cared about us so why are you telling me now.”

“Because your mother said I had to give you these just before your 17th birthday, heres the other letter

“Dear Harry this is the ring that I gave your mother when we got engaged please give this to your girlfriend when use get engaged love dad


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<3harry and ginny forever<3
<3 hermione ad ron forever<3

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ok tell me if thats better so i know how to rewrite the 2nd chapter pls


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well its better, but still we need to know whos talking and grammar is much better, but some mistakes


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yeh if you wrote like
"wow" gasped Harry.

we no but it s great


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It was the day before Harry's seventeenth birthday when he would come to age. Hermione and Ron should be hear any minute the letter said met us in your room the day before your birthday at 12.00 pm. Harry ha got this letter 2 days ago and had been waiting in his room since. He had sent Errol back saying okay and it was 11.55 when aunt Petunia came in and sat next to Harry
“Harry there’s something you should no I’ve always loved you and Lilly.”

“Then why did you always act like you hated us.”snarled Harry

“That would be because Vernon hated that life so I had to stop talking to her,But just before she died she sent this letter to me.”

“Dear Harry if u gets this letter then your father and I are dead but know that we love you, your father has attached something for u in another letter.”

“Wow I never new u cared about us so why are you telling me now.”
gasped Harry
“Because your mother said I had to give you these just before your 17th birthday, here's the other letter

“Dear Harry this is the ring that I gave your mother when we got engaged please give this to your girlfriend when use get engaged love dad


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<3harry and ginny forever<3
<3 hermione ad ron forever<3

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ok how was that i want to write good so please i dont mind rewriting and once this ones good the others will be up quicker


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ok no one has replied so this is how it will work i will post leave 1-2 days post the next part and i may combine sections


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Second half
Sorry for not posting all at once

Just as expected Hermione and Ron showed up at 12. But something they weren't expecting was to see Harry lying on his bed crying. They walked over and asked him what the matter was.

“Im fine it’s just the fact that well I found at that my mum and aunt Petunia really did love each other and aunt Petunia loves me.”

“Are you okay with that Harry?”

“Yeh and then she gave me a letter from my mum, and then from my dad which had the ring he gave to mum when he proposed to her.”

“Alright tell us more at the burrow” said Ron in a bored voice.

“Well where's your luggage me and Ron will go back with that.” enquired Hermione

“Over there next to the window”

“OK mate see ya when u get to the burrow just Hermione will come back for you.”

They left about 1 minute latter Hermione was back but instead of being alone she had Ginny with her.

Hermione was yelling “why did you come with me I told u not to”


Ginny said “Hermione I had to talk to Harry before he arrived”

“Fine ill be back in 5 minutes” and Hermione disappeared

“What do you want Gin”

“I wanted to tell you that I still love you and I still want to go out with you and I don't care if I die as long as I'm with you.”

“OK I'll tell u what at bill and Fleur's wedding u will find out my answer”

“You promise”

“Yes Gin I promise”

Just then Hermione came back and said get Hedwig where going back to the burrow now.
Ginny grab my left hand Harry my right.


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i need i review for chapter 2


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good...love the spacing...much easier to read


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ok chap 2 will be up the safternoon


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here it is


Chapter 2
The burrow

Harry Hermione and Ginny arrived at the burrow to see Ron waiting at the door.

“What took u guys so long? Harry”

“Ummm” said Harry

“What about you Ginny”

“I don’t know”

“Hermione”

“Harry couldn’t find his quidditch trough the age’s book”

“Oh ok”

Just then Miss Weasly ran out to them.

“Harry would u like some lunch dear.” she asked while she was giving one of her famous breath taking hugs. Just then did Harry realise how hungry he actually was.

“Yes please” he said

“That’s okay dear it’s on the table”

“Thankyou that was verry nice Miss Weasly.”

“Im glad you liked it dear now u can go play quidditch for an hour or 2 but then we need you to go up to your room so we can set up for your birthday oh and your in Percy’s old room again.”

“Ok mum
Oh Im so sorry it just came out.”

“That’s okay you can call me mum if you want.”

“Ok mum.”

“So who wants to play quidditch?”

“I do called Ginny.”

“Same here.” shouted Ron

“What about you Mione” said Harry

“No not really”

“But we need you for it to be even” whined Ron

“Fine I’ll play as long as im captain’s

“Alright you can be captain and Ron can be” decided Harry

“So let’s go get our brooms” cheered Ginny

“Ok Hermione chose your team” said Ron hopefully

“Ok I want Ginny”

“I want Harry’

“Right that’s settled now positions me and Ginny chasers and you 2 keepers”

The game was pretty normal Ron’s team was up by 5 it was 20/15.
When Harry dropped the ball using his seeker skills he dived down but so did Ginny. Ron and Hermione looked away scared of a head on collision between the 2 of them.
Ginny freaked and fell off her broom Harry totally forgot about the apple pretending to be a quaffle and dived to catch Ginny he caught her on the front of her broom Ron an Hermione turned just to see Harry catch her and they decided to go inside and leave them alone Ginny and Harry were gazing at each and didn’t notice them leave when they landed Harry lent down and kissed her.


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awww....so adorable....last part was best lol....keep up the good work


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here it is just as promised i combined 3 chaps the wedding is next


Birthday
“Harry wake up.” yelled Ron throwing a pillow at his head

“Ok ok im up why do I have to be up so early.”

“Ummmm let me think it’s your birthday today rember.”

“How could I forget?”

“Now quick downstairs to the living room everyone’s waiting.”

Once he got down there he saw the decorations where all snitches an seventeens.

“Why this is so cool guys I love it.”

“That’s okay it was no trouble at all dear now come met the guests.”

“Who’s here you’ll he wait an see.”

He walked into the kitchen to see tonks lupin madeye hagrid aunt petunia (that shocked him) Luna Neville and all the weasly except bill and percy where there.

“Oh my god guys thanks for coming.”

“That’s okay Harry it was no problem.” said tonks

“Now can we give our presents please molly.” pleaded tonks

“Oh well I spose you can now he’s up.”

“Ok harry heres a present from me and lupin.”
it was a book 101 defences against the dark art spells.


Fred and George had given him a bag of Weasley wizard’s things.
“Thanks guys”

Hagrid had got him a photo album of all his years at Hogwarts
“thank you so much I love it its wonderful.”

“Harry me and Luna decided to give you a whole bag of honeydukes best” “thanks my favourite ones to.”

The weasly had got him a hand on there clock
“Awwww thanks u so much guys u don’t know how much it means to me.”
“It’s okay dear.”

“Bill and fleur will be hear for lunch bye the way now
breakfast”
“Hang on me and Hermione need to give our gift.”

“Ok then where is it.”

“Come up to my room mate oh and you to Ginny”

“Ok”

Harry and she followed slightly confused when they got up there.

Ron and Hermione said “this is your present”

And the kissed and then Hermione said “surprise me and Ron are dating”

“Wow um that’s great love it would never have thought use to would eventually hook up.”

“Me neither but me and harry had an idea it would be this year.”

“Come on guys we better go down for breakfast.”
The rest of the morning past normally till

Hagrid came out and said. “Harry I got a surprise for you come to the barn.”

So off they walked when they got there harry saw buckbeak and jumped for glee harry took Ron Hermione Ginny Fred and George for rides all morning till Mrs Weasly called them in for lunch. Because bill and fleur had arrived after lunch they went and played quidditch they teams where
Captain/ seeker harry captain/keeper bill
Chasers Fred and Ginny chasers George and Hermione
Keeper Ron seeker Charlie
Of course harry team won they come back for dinner and where surprised to see a humongous cake and lots of Harry’s favourite dinners and desserts.


“THANK YOU SO MUCH MISS WESLEY THIS LOOKS DELICIOUS.”

“THAT'S OKAY NOW EAT”

AFTER EVERYONE HAD FINISHED MISS WESLEY SAID “OFF TO BED WE'VE GOT A WEDDING TOMORROW”

SO THEY ALL QUICKLY WENT TO BED. JUST AS HARRY PASSED GINNY'S DOOR SHE ASKED HIM TO COME IN. SO HE ENTERED.

GINNY SAID “I JUST WANTED YOU TO NO THAT I LOVE YOU AND I CANT WAIT TILL TOMORROW AND I ENJOYED OUR KISS YESTERDAY.”

THEN HERMIONE ENTERED AND HE LEFT HERMIONE ASKED GINNY WHY HE WAS IN HERE. SHE SAID “WE MIGHT BE GOING BACK OUT I HAVE TO WAIT TILL TOMORROW TO FIND OUT THOUGH”
“OK GOOD NIGHT”
HARRY WENT UPSTAIRS TO HIS AND RON'S ROOM AND RON ASKED “WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG”

“YOU’RE SISTER WANTS US TO GO BACK OUT.”

“WHAT DID YOU SAY?”

“SHE HAS TO WAIT TILL TOMORROW”

“YEH BUT CAN’T YOU TELL ME NOW.”

“YOU WILL FIND OUT TOMORROW.”


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good post...but try really hard NOT to put it all in CAPS lock at the end...


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yeh but it was typed in caps lock last time an cause it was christmas eve i didnt have time to change it and todays christmas so no post


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ummm yeh but is was christmas eve so i was trying to put it up before i got kikked off to celbrate


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