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This is my RPG backstory for a made up StarWars character...
Born in 41 BB, is a future jedi, or so it is thought. At age 4, young Moonhunter is beleived to be "The chosen one." As he went through tough, rugged jedi training, he became a ggreat master at age 25. However, Moonhunter, has been having secret meetings with the sith lord, Darth Plageuis, Plageuis has been telling Moonhunter, jedi are evil since he was 15. Years later, Moonhunter, met the ruthless bounty hunter Jango Fett, who told him to join him in an alliance to defeat the jedi for lord tyranus, he agreed. Moonhunter was believed to be killed in the great battle. Later in 0 BBY, he was found hiding somewhere on Hoth by a group of secret jedi, he was then arrested for murdurer against members of the jedi council, where he was hidden was never revealed. Later after the death of master Yoda, he escaped custody and fled to work with and for many bounty hunters including Boba Fett, Durge and others to eliminate main rebel figures with a new invention he created, called the NetherSaber, which is the most powerful saber ever, so powerful it can change its own colour. Later in 25 ABY, he gained the name Lord Nether by killing and skinning the great Chewbacca...
What do you think, is it good?