mmmm i think Asian Hulk may be using a computer Translater to convert Filipino into English thats may be causing some confusion in his English.
Anyway give the poor guy a break
__________________ With the first link, the chain is forged. The first speech censored, the first thought forbidden, the first freedom denied, chains us all irrevocably.These words were uttered by Judge Aaron Satie -- as awisdom, and warning. The first time any man's freedom is trodden on, we're all damaged.
"One ought never to turn one's back on a threatened danger and try to run away from it. If you do that, you will double the danger. But if you meet it promptly and without flinching, you will reduce the danger by half.-----Sir Winston Churchill
Dudes stop ripping on Asian Hulk for his grammar and his story, at least he's trying the best he can at writing up a story in English which is obviously not his primary language, how about you guys trying writing a story like this in French or German?
the only people who are making fun of his grammar dont visit much anymore, so you're basically talking to no one. this is a really really old thread and i revived it in hopes it will remind asain hulk that he didnt really finish the story and since i actually got really into it i wanna know what happens.
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What are you talking about, the dialogue is great, sure it's a little batman 70's show, but to say you didn't understand the story doesn't take anything away from it, it just shows your low level of comprehension.