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The Matrix Reprogramed
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The Matrix Reprogramed

Agent Thompson clenched his ear piece. “He's coming,” Thompson exclaimed. “Here?” another agent asks. We hear a gun shot as Agent Thompson falls to the ground. The 2 other agents stare blankly at the dead agent which suddenly turns into a dead child. “That was unexpected,” Jackson says. “Look-out!” Johnson shouts as he takes his gun and shoots Neo who dodges the bullets as he runs to engage combat with the agents.


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masterofmatrix
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post comments please


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I did some spelling editting and stuff. Cool, now write more! big grin


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masterofmatrix
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ok heres part 2

“Link, I need a weapon drop,” Neo shouts hoping Link will hear. Just as a sword was appearing in Neo's hands the two Agents laughed “You are no match for us,” as Neo chops both there heads off “who’s laughing now” asked Neo as the agents continued laughing “Well, you but I still win,” said Neo, but unexpectedly the agents stood up and both duplicated countless times (all with heads) and ran towards neo.


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More spell checking and such...

These parts aren't very long. Barely 2 sentences!!! They need to be longer than that to count it a credible story.


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well if you want longer parts part 3 will come in 2 days


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Re: The Matrix Reprogramed

cool story

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“That was unexpected,” Jackson says


mad thats from my story, big grin


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Means your work is inspiring... wink


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yeah... plus he mite not have read ur story and he thought of it himself big grin


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