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Heh, lemme guess...you need to know for your story?
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Yes, but I simply went with laser gun. *shrug*
If you stay on long enough, Chapter 10 will be up momentarily.
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Jan 30th, 2004 03:49 AM |
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Peach
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Hee, I was going to suggest referring to them as something completely random like calamari cooker 
Okay 
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Jan 30th, 2004 03:54 AM |
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Calamari cooker? 
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Jan 30th, 2004 04:00 AM |
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Peach
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Hey, it's late, I'm half-asleep, and I'm random enough as it is when I'm fully awake...me+no sleep=insanity.
...and now that I've mentioned calamari I'm hungry. Damnit.
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Jan 30th, 2004 04:03 AM |
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Posted, now on to Chapter 11.
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Jan 30th, 2004 04:07 AM |
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Peach
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Eep! Just read it, stupid sentinels...but very cool 
Meh, I'm going off to bed, maybe I'll get to sleep before midnight for a change...
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Jan 30th, 2004 04:13 AM |
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What? Before midnight? Impossible!
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Jan 30th, 2004 04:44 AM |
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It's not before midnight here on the east coast...
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Jan 30th, 2004 05:06 AM |
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REXXXX
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It's 10:15 here in southern Cali right now... 
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Wooooo I got DMC last saterday and I've just completed it. For the first time, I started my story part way through playing. Anyhow Part 2 will be up tomorrow.
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Jan 30th, 2004 05:49 PM |
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Ok, starting with chapter 4, I'm writing in notepad then transferring it...I'm going to write the entire story before I post it, though. I'm guessing that from chapter 4 on will be pretty good...I'm actually a decent writer, sometimes.
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Jan 30th, 2004 07:28 PM |
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Peach
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Hee, my Matrix story I'm currently writing I got a few more pages done of it today during Calculus...yeah, I don't really pay attention in that class...
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Jan 31st, 2004 01:17 AM |
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REXXXX
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I'm deleting Chapter 11, which I worked on a bit yesterday. I was coming up with the idea of a ship that betrayed Zion and uses the Matrix for fun since they can do anything being Wake's savior in his chrisis, affectionately naming the ship the Jabberwocky, but I ran into difficulties.
Still, the Jabberwocky might appear in a different form, rather than a renegade ship.
Instead, the Caduceus will rescue Wake and Janet. The crew being Ballard, Bane, and Malachi. Since the Operator is unknown, I'll just call him the ship's operator.
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Jan 31st, 2004 06:52 AM |
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I'm going to try to keep adding at least a chapter per day. There might be minor spelling errors but for me to pump out this story like I want, I don't really have time to spellcheck every single word...Overall, it should be fine but...We'll see. There's a serious plot starting to develop and I would greatly appreciate it if you guys would read the story and tell me what you think so far.
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Jan 31st, 2004 09:04 PM |
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REXXXX
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Well, that's what the spell check on your writing program is for...
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Feb 1st, 2004 02:14 AM |
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REXXXX
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I want to know what your favorite chapters/scenes in my Matrix story are. Any thoughts?
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Feb 1st, 2004 02:14 AM |
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Leave me alone rex, Notebook doesn't have spellcheck. WHAT? WHAT NOW? WHAT?
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Feb 1st, 2004 04:41 AM |
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Peach
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Type it up in Word, that has spell-check...
Hmm...there was one line that I particularly like, "Bringing pistols against a helicopter would be like trying to kill an elephant with a toothpick."
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Feb 1st, 2004 05:32 PM |
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REXXXX
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Glad you liked it. 
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