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Syren
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embarrasment

Aaaw, thanks baby.


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Old Post Apr 30th, 2004 05:40 PM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Get Over It.

You've said all you can and you're still at square one,
Does that tell you nothing?
You've made me feel like a spare part, an accesory,
Do you realise how much that hurts?
You've forced yourself in like a square peg, in a round hole,
You dont fit. Stop it.
You need to step back, before this turns ugly,
Don't you understand? Can't you comprehend?
Get out! Leave him! Let go!
Honey,
Get over it.

Short, sweet and to the point. I can't say what I want to say, not straight out, but I can write it in verse.

Anyone who may think that was directed at them, be assured right now, the person it's meant for will never see it, else I would never have posted it. I'm not that cold. no expression


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Old Post May 1st, 2004 05:49 PM
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Xena
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worderful poetry Syren! yes

your poetry is very emotional!


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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Thankyou, I find that I'm better with words than anything else. Sometimes I come across as quite violent, but I'm not.

This may sound silly, but my mum always taught me that the ability to use words rather than physical actions is to show deeper strength, and I've always remembered that. So, I dunno, my poetry is probably my way of releasing my frustration, y'know?


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Old Post May 2nd, 2004 12:05 PM
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You're poems are great Syren smile


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My mum thinks she's not violent too.


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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Yeah, thanks for that shaber thumb up


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Old Post May 3rd, 2004 10:52 AM
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big grin Sy theyre class


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Syren
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big grin

Thanx B, sweet as always yes


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Old Post May 4th, 2004 02:03 PM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

quote:
Originally posted by White Lady
bad memories

Screaming for you
crying your name
watching me bleed
the pain is near
the pain i bleed
ripping apart
empty i feel

I wrote this after i had a miscarriage


On behalf of CaseyLeigh.


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Old Post May 5th, 2004 09:43 AM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
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When You Crack

You never see it coming do you?
It encases you in grimy darkness,
It's hard to inhale,
You feel so frail,
It's like you don't exist anymore.

You never see it coming do you?
It suffocates like a plastic bag,
Wrapped around your face,
Your heart begins to race,
It's like you don't exist anymore.

You never see it coming do you?
It strangles your mind and soul,
Sucks out all your might,
You lose the will to fight,
It's like you don't exist anymore.

You never see it coming do you?
Curled up like a child on the floor,
Screams that make no sound,
You've finally hit the ground,
It's like you don't exist anymore.

You never see it coming do you?

But you feel it hit.


When you lose your sanity in one foul swoop, it's almost as if you switch. In a split second the world falls in around you.


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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Snowflakes

Delicate and beautiful,
they float from the sky,
Gently landing on my face.
They melt away so quickly,
I almost miss them,
They're gone without a trace.
Each one different to the last,
Not one the same,
Toward the ground they race.
I look around me,
Everyone's enraptured, like me,
But I still feel cold and out of place.


When you feel ice cold and completely out of it.


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Old Post May 6th, 2004 11:58 AM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Rage

I feel it forcing itself through me,
It spills from every crevice,
Overflowing,
Like a waterfall.
But not peacefully,
There is no peace,
It oozes from me,
I'm in constant agony,
And when I break,
It screams it's way out of my withered body.


Pure anger I guess, but no way to release it.


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Old Post May 6th, 2004 11:59 AM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Forest

So many varied kinds,
All individual in their own special ways.
Kind of reminds me of something my mum said,
When I was young,
Worried about how different I felt.
"Our differences are what makes us who we are".
I was made to feel shame,
I was never the same,
I was the odd one out, every time, the outcast.
Do you think the trees feel like that?


I have absolutely no idea what this is supposed to reflect, other than being different. Trees? I don't know. It just spills from my head, apologies big grin


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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Rêves (Dreams)

Derrière ces yeux de verre,
Fermé,
A Enfoncé solidement sur l'avant de jeûne,
Les choses arrivent que personne jamais ne comprendrait.
Je vois des choses que je ne peux pas partager,
Même ne peut pas expliquer,
Bien qu'il semble naturel,
Tout le monde rêve, la droite?
Mauvais,
Pas la façon que je fais,
Pas les choses que je vois,
Pas les émotions qui coulent par moi.
Vous ne pourriez pas comprendre probablement,
Je ne vous demanderais jamais à.


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Old Post May 6th, 2004 12:48 PM
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Wow Kerry, you have a lot of poems and a lot of talent. yes


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quote:
Originally posted by lil bitchiness
Wow Kerry, you have a lot of poems and a lot of talent. yes
my sentiments exactly. Great work babe...you have a lot of passion in your writing.


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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Broken

My heart hangs by a tiny thread,
Swinging in the wake of your love.
It's cold, oh so cold,
I watch as the last droplets of emotion seep to the floor,
I'm dry now, numb.
I don't feel much though,
So don't be sad,
You did nothing wrong,
It was my foolish notions of perfect bliss,
That left me here,
Not you.
It was never you.
How can I possible lay the blame on someone so beautiful,
After sharing something so beautiful.
I'm honoured to have been a part of us,
And that will remain with me,
Until the day I die.
The day I join my heart,
And my soul,
In terrible loneliness.
It's fate.


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Old Post May 7th, 2004 10:43 AM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

quote:
Originally posted by Syren
Chosen

It feels odd, not being the other woman,
Looking out at the other woman,
Watching her struggle,
Fight with her feelings, desperation,
It overflows into my space,
Makes me feel like, I'm the bad guy,
I don't know why,
But I know I've got to try,
Not to make the other woman,
Feel, like the other woman.

All you ladies must know how this feels, when some guy actually chooses you over someone else, and by rights you should be ecstatic, but you kinda feel like you did something wrong sad



Chosen Part 2

It feels strange, becoming the shunted woman,
Looking out at the new model,
Watching her glow,
She's fighting with feelings of satisfaction,
It overflows into my space,
Makes me feel like, I'm not good enough.
I wonder why?
Don't want to cry,
I stare, and try to work out what she's got,
That maybe I don't.
Oh, I know now,
She has him.


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Old Post May 7th, 2004 10:47 AM
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Xena
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Location: USA

Magnificient! Please give us more Syren! big grin


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