Syren, if you want this forum to be succesful, then don't make sarcastic remarks about my poems in the thread: "Poetica", that's plain rude you f*cking, unoriginal *****! I suppose you would say the same thing if you read a Sonnet or other poem by Shakespeare - 'seeming significance'. Just because you don't understand a poem, or because it looks complicated on the surface, doesn't meen the author is trying to make it seem significant. Shakespear's sonnets are mostly utterly hard to comprehend, but I don't say it's 'seeming significant', I try to read it a couple more times in order to understand what he wanted to say, and in the end I do and a whole new world opens up.
By your comment, you're merely exhibiting your own shameless ignorance.
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
No problemo, I'm not a complete beeatch. Only when people thoroughly deserve it, and like I said, there was NO reason for me to be cruel to you or about your poetry
Ok, yours are much better than mine. You know something? The greatest loves and friendships almost always start out with a CLASH! Because PASSION is at the heart of all things truely worthwhile.
wow all the poems are so cool!
i wish i could write poems that good !!
i do write some his just one
Kitten praying
Now I lay me down to sleep
The king-size bed is soft and deep.
I sleep right in the center groove
My human can't hardly move.
I've trapped her legs, she's tucked in tight
And here is where I pass the night
No one disturbs me or dares intrude
Till morning comes and I want food.
I sneak up slowly and begin
To nibble on my human's chin.
She wakes up quickly,
I have sharp teeth.
For the morning is here and it's time to play
I always seem to get my way.
So thank you Lord for giving me
This human person that I can see.
The one who hugs me and holds me tight
And sacrifices her bed for me at night!!
I sit to write poetry, i come up with strife.
Couldn't make a rhyme to save my life.
Then turn to the side and see a knife
held my axe-muderer of a ex-wife.
I'm not married, so don't take me wrong.
I see the future. I'll write it in a song.
Till the chorus is full and long.
On Apolo, i should get the gong.
Humorus lyrics for you i write.
Til i give up my plagerous rights.
And stop to turn out the light
so i can howl at the moon at night.
You would say that i'm half-baked.
Cracked from the morn i've waked.
Bad grammar for heaven sake.
My own critisism, i'll take.
Why should i stop and let you leave?
My taylor hasn't himmed my sleive.
I don't know how to spell sleive.
Im being economic, not writing on loose leaf.
So i will say to all boys and girls.
Who really want to save the world.
And have all my evil planns unfurled.
Drop a house on me, make my feet upcurled.
Read all this and be amazed.
Of how a young man so crazed.
Can rhyme alot yet says.
He hasn't rhymed a thing in days.
That is not what it is about. I used the word colorless like no soul bc I really do not like that person anymore. If you want to go with blindmess you can though.
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Jan 11th, 2005 03:24 PM
Wonderful!! 
