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Moosey
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Originally posted by Philosophicus
Ok, yours are much better than mine. You know something? The greatest loves and friendships almost always start out with a CLASH! Because PASSION is at the heart of all things truely worthwhile.


Hey Phil....great words, but, here are some for you..

This heart you see is taken..
Our love, is true and real..
I see more than you think,
I know more than you want me to.
Our hearts share more than words,
Our lives, they intertwine,
I guess mostly want I want to say,
Is step off, Syren is mine.

smile


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quote:
Originally posted by Canadian Moose
My first attempt...for Syren...my love...

Have I ever told you
that if I sit really still and silent,
sometimes, I like to think
I can hear your heart beating
in time with mine?

Have I ever told you
that when I watch you speak to me
through lines and cords,
and bytes and ram,
I imagine
your voice,
whispering into my ear?

Have I ever told you
that I wait out each day
in anticipation,
wanting
only an hour or two,
just a second in space and time,
to feel close to you?

Have I ever told you
that there has been times,
when I ached for you,
ached for you so badly,
that the emotions overwhelmed me..
and so I sat and cried?

Have I ever told you
that sometimes,
I will reach out,
touching your name
on this cold screen before me,
wishing
I could reach in
and pull you to me?

Have I ever told you
that after the first time I heard
the sound of your voice,
thousands of miles away,
I sat up all night,
turning the conversation over and over
in my mind,
examining it,
like some newly discovered species of flower?

Have I ever told you
that I would give everything up,
just for one night
to be able to lay near you,
to feel your chest rise and fall
with each breath you take,
just to know that you are real?

Have I ever told you
that I dream of you often,
I dream of you reaching out
and touching my hand,
simply to let me know
that you are there,
and everything is okay?

Have I ever told you,
have I still yet to tell you . . .
that I love you?



Yanno at this moment I could call you a whipped moose. But I won't cause Kez would kick my arse.


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quote:
Originally posted by Canadian Moose
Hey Phil....great words, but, here are some for you..

This heart you see is taken..
Our love, is true and real..
I see more than you think,
I know more than you want me to.
Our hearts share more than words,
Our lives, they intertwine,
I guess mostly want I want to say,
Is step off, Syren is mine.

smile


Yes, I found that out yesterday, sorry about that man. smile


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Syren
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quote:
Originally posted by Canadian Moose
My first attempt...for Syren...my love...

Have I ever told you
that if I sit really still and silent,
sometimes, I like to think
I can hear your heart beating
in time with mine?

Have I ever told you
that when I watch you speak to me
through lines and cords,
and bytes and ram,
I imagine
your voice,
whispering into my ear?

Have I ever told you
that I wait out each day
in anticipation,
wanting
only an hour or two,
just a second in space and time,
to feel close to you?

Have I ever told you
that there has been times,
when I ached for you,
ached for you so badly,
that the emotions overwhelmed me..
and so I sat and cried?

Have I ever told you
that sometimes,
I will reach out,
touching your name
on this cold screen before me,
wishing
I could reach in
and pull you to me?

Have I ever told you
that after the first time I heard
the sound of your voice,
thousands of miles away,
I sat up all night,
turning the conversation over and over
in my mind,
examining it,
like some newly discovered species of flower?

Have I ever told you
that I would give everything up,
just for one night
to be able to lay near you,
to feel your chest rise and fall
with each breath you take,
just to know that you are real?

Have I ever told you
that I dream of you often,
I dream of you reaching out
and touching my hand,
simply to let me know
that you are there,
and everything is okay?

Have I ever told you,
have I still yet to tell you . . .
that I love you?


This is beautiful..... but I need to have a private word with you with reference to it erm


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Syren
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quote:
Originally posted by Canadian Moose
Hey Phil....great words, but, here are some for you..

This heart you see is taken..
Our love, is true and real..
I see more than you think,
I know more than you want me to.
Our hearts share more than words,
Our lives, they intertwine,
I guess mostly want I want to say,
Is step off, Syren is mine.

smile




A public declaration


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quote:
Originally posted by Philosophicus
Yes, I found that out yesterday, sorry about that man. smile


I am sure you are. Once done, a mistake, twice done, a problem. Thanks.


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Syren
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quote:
Originally posted by Canadian Moose
I am sure you are. Once done, a mistake, twice done, a problem. Thanks.


*hooks arm through yours and gazes adoringly at you*

You heard the Moose.


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quote:
Originally posted by Linkalicious
Misperception

I see you there, twirling your hair
you put on a shy face
I look at you, and you at me
but still we stand in place
your cig it drags, but still i lag
and cease to move my feet
you start grooving, and i start moving
toward you so we meet
I am in place, I see your face
but then you turn your back
I retransition and get in position
but you think i want your rack
Almost too mellow, i come to say hello
and offer you a drink
you shut me down, now i'm the clown
it makes me wonder what you think

works both ways ladies


I like your poem Linkalicious.... I'm a shy person myself too... I know how it feels... that is a great piece of poem there...!! Keep it up!!


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Captive
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Gender: Female
Location: A location

Things have started to change
Much to my disliking
Maybe things might go back to normal
Hopefully without any fighting.

Haylie, u and me have changed
which i dont really want
But i wasnt there 4 u
So old memories start to haunt

I realise Melissa is ur best friend now
Which i dont really accept
Maybe because theres nothing
Nothing in our friendship is left

Things are way different now
And its not gonna be alright
Because i'm left with no one
Things wont ever be what they were like

I realise you probably feel the same
Our friendship is seriously dying
So maybe through what i write
Will stop all this lying

The thing is, i need somebody
U have Melissa, Leo has Bi,
I wont have anyone
Except for me

So i'll stop and say
I'm happy that you've moved on
So you dont worry about me
Because I'm already, gone.


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Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sexay1
Okay here's one i wrote about four months ago

I try to stop them
I really do
In this case
They don't
Because these tears are for you

I don't want to cry
Not for you
I don't want to love you
But I still do
And that's why these tears fall

I want to try
To become more brave
I don't want to cry
I hope to save
Myself from drowning in my own tears

I cry you a river
And maybe more
Yet it's still no different
No different from before

I don't want to cry
Not for you
I don't want to love you
But I still do

I try to stop them
I really do
In this case
I can't
Because these tears are for you

I can remember a time when I felt this way. Quite recently actually.
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sexay1
Daddy...
Whyíd you have to leave me?
Why couldnít you stay alive to see
What I have become for you?
Youíve been with me all the way through
But now youíre gone
To the Underworld you have flown...

Daddy...
Why canít we return the days
When we used to laugh and play?
Weíd swirl around the bend
I prayed to God it would never end.
Now I have my restless nights
Without you there to remind me of the light

Daddy...
I wish you were alive now
Maybe I would not be so down
Now all my fears seem so near
Sometimes I canít even see you clear
You are there in my dreams
But I always seem to return to reality

Daddy...
I know that youíre with me in my heart
And thatís what keeps me on day and night
But I would like to say, Daddy,
That I have met some awfully nice friends
And our loyalty has no ends

So Daddy...
I miss you still
And you always have a special spot to fill
In my heart and in my mind
But now I think I can move on fine
But I will always remember the night
When you reminded me of the light....

I could NEVER write something like this about my father. I hate that SOB!!!

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Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sweetest Sin
Confession of Confused Soul



I can't love
I can't see the light
I've forgotten
I've forgotten...

I can't see you
I can't feel you
I've forgotten the light of the sun
I've forgotten the sound of songs

Your caress, is it your caress?
Your kiss, do I feel your lips?
I've forgotten
I've forgotten how your kisses felt...

I don't know what to say
I don't understand what to do
I don't know
I don't understand
I don't understand anything...

I'm trapped here
I feel trapped in this world
I'm trapped in gray, sad world
I'm trapped in myself

What can I do?
What can I see?
What can I believe?
Will I ever...

WHY

I ask myself countless times

Why does my heart long to be with you?

Why does everything I do turn out to be for you?

Why -- Because I love you

I ask myself countless times

Why do I do the things I do for you?

Why does my mind replay thoughts of yesterday?

Why -- Because I love you

I ask myself countless times

Why do I want it to be only you and me?

Why do I want and need you in my arms?

Why -- Because I love you

And again I ask myself

Why arenít you here with me?

Why canít you see that I would fulfill your deepest fantasy?

Why -- Because you donít love me

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sweetest Sin
Would You

No matter how hard I try
To be happy for you
I still cry myself to sleep every night
And I wonder why
You choose her over me
And yet you seem happy
Would you even care
If I died here, tonight
Would you even cry
If I were to die
Right here, tonight
In front of your eyes
Would you at least burry me
Or not even bother
Would you care
And see your mistake
Would you cry
And dump her
Would you burry me
By the my favorite blossom tree
If I were to die
Would you.....

TIME SPENT APART

Itís been very hard -- us being apart

I wonder if you even remember my face

Am I still the one you hold close to your heart

Or has someone else taken my place?

I spend many nights alone in bed

With only my thoughts of you to keep me company

I constantly relive memories of us in my head

They have proved that youíre the only one baby

Although not being able to see you hurts, I can live with the pain

I can honestly say Iíll never love another the way I love you

When you see me again

I pray that youíll still feel the same as I do

Only time will tell if our love is truly meant to be

But I hope that our time spent apart doesnít convince you to forget about me
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sweetest Sin
Will you ever?

I don't think you will
ever fully understand
how you've touched my life
and made me who I am.

I don't think you could ever know
just how truly special you are
that even on the darkest nights
you are my brightest star.

I don't think you will ever fully comprehend
how you've made my dreams come true
or how you've opened my heart
to love and the wonders it can do.

You've allowed me to experience
something very hard to find
unconditional love that exists
in my body, soul, and mind.

I don't think you could ever feel
all the love I have to give
and I'm sure you'll never realize
you've been my will to live.

You are an amazing person
and without you I don't know where id be.
Having you in my life
completes and fulfills every part of me.

THANK YOU

I woke up today with only one thought on my mind.

How can I thank you for all that you have done?

You have given me so much more than just a friend and a lover.

You have given me the strength to believe in myself.

The strength not only to dare to dream,

But the courage to chase after those dreams.

You have given me a love that no man or woman could ever think possible.

This love cannot even be described by the words of this earth.

Itís a love that even makes you question if forever is long enough.

I could spend this rest of my life trying to tell you why Iím grateful for all that youíve done,

But instead Iíll just say what I intended to from the start.

Thank you for doing all that you have done and continue to do.

I love you, [insert name]!!

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Dante Vlada
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sweetest Sin
A short one i wrote last night



I didn't try to love you, but the feeling was so strong.

I try to forget you but I can't carry on.

You hold me close like I was your own, but I know I'm not alone.

I know there is no room for me in your heart, but I'll continue to be with you just like I was from the start.

I know I can't break the bond, but I know I have the strength to try to carry on.

I know I love you, and you have no room for me, but I will still love you no matter what happens to me.

TODAY

Today was a day like none I have ever experienced before

I was given something that only left me craving for more

It was such an unexpected feeling that I never say it coming

Even now I still cannot believe that Iím not dreaming

To me this is that one thing I didnít think could be true

Can I really be so deserving of this promise from you

If I am then I wonít do anything to change your mind

Why would I when now I have that which I thought Iíd never find

I am so very thankful that this day has finally come to be

Because today was the day that you finally told me that you loved me

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sweetest Sin
That was one of my favs that you wrote too Sy

As I Turn Away....

As I stand here

Your eyes tear

Wishing me to hear

Word so sincere

But I turn away

While you cry in dismay

Gods, I wish to stay

But the dreams will have their way

You scream words of love

But this is not what I wish to speak of

For I am mourning dove

Not someone I am proud of

Taking one last look at your face

And I leave without a trace

Yearning to fell your warm embrace

Knowing that I will soon be replaced.

TYPICAL

I know I should have been totally honest from the start

But I donít think Iíll ever be able to love you with any of my heart

I am sorry if this seems to be coming from out of the blue

Itís just that the things we often promise donít always turn out to be true

I thought that one day there could be a you and me

But my feelings proved that was a lie, obviously

I am sorry for doing the things I promised I would never do

But I couldnít help being the typical guy when it came to you

I want to be able to say that I wish you all the best

But then Iíd be lying just like all the rest

So instead lets just say our final good-byes

And take a step closer to what is next in our lives
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Sweetest Sin
That was great Sy!

I wrote this one back in May.

A Cry For Help
I cannot find peace here,
I need to be free,
I want to go back,
But there's no chance to flee.

I wish I could love him,
But there isn't a chance,
There isn't a way,
We'd have a happy romance.

My friends live their lives,
I try to live my own,
But every time I get lost,
It just chills me to the bone.

Please help me,
I really need to find,
Something in my life,
I can call mine.

LOVING YOU

Loving you is what I live for

Loving you is what makes me want you more

Loving you has brought me closer to you

Loving you has made all my dreams come true

Loving you is knowing youíll always be there

Loving you tells me I never want you to go

Loving you tells me youíre an angel --

I see it in the way you glow

Loving you means so much to me

Thatís why I will for all of eternity

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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Please, if you have any poems you would like to share, feel free to create a thread of your own in which to post them. Each of us has our own thread for poetry, constructive criticism from other members and the like... excellent stuff by the way. happy


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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Syren
Please, if you have any poems you would like to share, feel free to create a thread of your own in which to post them. Each of us has our own thread for poetry, constructive criticism from other members and the like... excellent stuff by the way. happy

yes Very nice stuff


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Dante Vlada
Living My Last Days

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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Syren
Please, if you have any poems you would like to share, feel free to create a thread of your own in which to post them. Each of us has our own thread for poetry, constructive criticism from other members and the like... excellent stuff by the way. happy

umm I didn't know sweetes sin had her own thread???

thnx

*leaves* sad (at least I have a new muse to write about now)

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Syren
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Location: every which way but loose

Oiram, I meant no offence, of course wink Sweetest Sin particularly requested that I allow her to post here, she was nervous at the prospect of sharing her work and I figured she may be more comfortable sharing my thread.


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Syren
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Location: every which way but loose

Hello there sweetie, welcome back wink


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