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kofmaster
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smile?... big grin hehe cheesey grin ^^


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aww beast has a heart.........i like that


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aww see lukey smiles


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i love you
From the moment I saw you my soul touched yours.
I've never been so in love in my entire life.
I feel like I'm in a dark cave.
I scream I LOVE YOU,
and in the desperate desire to hear your voice,
my heart jumps at the echo.
but then I realize,
it's my own.


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Krabs55
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pretty good


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Before I met you,
I was badly hurt from relationships that fell apart,
I didn't wanna live no more
I just wanted an end,
I thought nothing could cure me,
My heart would never mend.
You walked into my problems
and made them go away,
I didn't wanna be with you,
'Cause I thought you'd hurt me someday.
I gave you a chance to see if that was true,
But something was different and you were something new.
Now, I know what your love is truly about,
your sweet, honest, and loveable,
something I can't live without.
I hope that this love will last,
Because you know I'll always love you,
I hope we'll never part,
because I know you love me too...


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Krabs55
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why do you always write about love hurting


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Fëanor
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quote:
Originally posted by Krabs55
why do you always write about love hurting


i would think it was obvious...you write what you're feeling at that moment...

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I hope that White Lady won't mind me posting here....

She is a shinging star upon the horizon
A brilliance that illuminates the night sky
Her heart filled with such emotion
Her smile filled with such beauty

As I lay my eyes upon her
I feel a warmth in my heart begin to grow
She touches my heart so softly
She touches my soul so tenderly

I look into the eyes of this Princess
and I hope that my eyes tell her so
this moment I am lost in
this moment I am with you


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kofmaster
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our world...

the night its so dark yet so peaceful
people look to my eyes they see fear
i have fear in my eyes from falling in love
i thought i was the only one to be left in darkness
the darkness sooths me
as it also frightens me
i dont want to fall in love again
but i have
i have too many tears falling in love again
how can i look to your eyes when i feel i should die
this was my world, but somehow you have found your way in
i dont know what to do

you found your way into the darkness with me
no one has ever done that
you put your hand on my cheek as i cry
you begin to cry with me
i ask you whats wrong
and all i hear is the soft gental beating of you heart
it scares me to think i have found someone
to think i have surched long and wide for someone
now that i have found you i don't know what to do
im so scared of hurting you

you told me how you feel
you said you love me
i feel so weak yet my heart beats so strongly
i finaly decide to look up to your eyes
i look away as they are so beautiful
you hurt me in a way that i have never felt
yet its in such a beautiful way
love is cold, it making me shake
you hold me in your arms to warm me
i place my hands on your back to say im sorry
i kiss your soft lips just so you know im here
this was my world...now the darkworld
its our world


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quote:
Originally posted by Krabs55
why do you always write about love hurting


love does hurt!!!!!
every wanted someone so bad and beong away from then killed you


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quote:
Originally posted by A.D. Skinner
I hope that White Lady won't mind me posting here....

She is a shinging star upon the horizon
A brilliance that illuminates the night sky
Her heart filled with such emotion
Her smile filled with such beauty

As I lay my eyes upon her
I feel a warmth in my heart begin to grow
She touches my heart so softly
She touches my soul so tenderly

I look into the eyes of this Princess
and I hope that my eyes tell her so
this moment I am lost in
this moment I am with you


wow skinner i have a rough idea who this poem it about...........lets just hope it dont take her a 100 yrs to wake up and find her prince........she is one lucky gal......


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awww lukey im sure that the girl in this poem feels the same way......love is kinda scary......but can be very good..you should hold on to this love as it just might help with things right now.love is a key luke use it to unlock all your pain


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* uses the key and makes the suffuring go away *


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My final promise

i am your friend when the darkness takes you
yell for me and i will come running
when you have no one left to call
use your last breathe and call my name
when the pits of hell take over your soul
use my love to set you free........
When the tunnel shows you no light
use the love i gave you as a beacon
when you feal weak from your father strike
remember my soft words and your tears will dry
Whenever you need me just listen to your heart
Cause it will always guide it to me


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As i sit at my pc and take in the news
I cry a soft cry..
Wasn't my love good enough
I think of the guy who loved me
Think of the girl he has chosen
Think of the time they now share
And i fall to the ground in floods of tears
The smile you gave me has now gone
the heart you made beat has no stopped
the girl you once loved is an empty shell
and the terror of it all sinks in......
I am a face with no smile
A body with no heart
and a soul with nowhere to go
Am i completely lost..........


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kofmaster
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walking away..

she gave me everything
her love, her heart, her soul
i didnt want it at first
i fell for her
now i must crush her
i dont wish to but you must leave my darkworld
i will be ok..darkness is home to me
you dont belong here with me
its because i feel in love that i cry
i didn't want anyone to get hurt
im a fool to belive that love is wonderful
all it brings is pain to the ones i care the most
i will never forget what she did for me
never forget she was the first to love me
never forget that i returned her love
and never forget that i broke her
if you go
i wont forget you
can't you see
that you will always be with me
even though i had to let you go
when theres nothing left to do
but..
walk away..


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that poem was sad luke.........that all i have to say


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omg casey thoses poems made me cry.. The last one from that kofmaster guy was different from the others. One moment he is saying to this girl hey i love you and now its all... Oh well you loved me and now i must crush you.........no offense but why are you so up yourself? Is it fun to break a girls heart. Lets hope one day your heart isn't the one being broken. God i hate men like you


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Be@st
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Registered: Dec 2003
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quote:
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aww beast has a heart.........i like that


Of course I have a heart; everyone have heart; but the thing is that my heart is hidden most of the time.
Here's another of my poems.

Rage
Rage is rushing through my soul
Thoughts mean nothing anymore
Legs are moving with their will
Fists are flying; they sense no fear

Blood is boiling in my veines
Heart is colder than ice cold tear
Someone is screaming can't you hear
Forgive me; I don't have my own will

Rage is a feeling you can't contol
And now is more powerfull than ever before.

btw: I like all the poems written in time from my last post.


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