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Darth Revan
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Thanks big grin

Any chance of some more poetry in here? whistle


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Old Post Aug 9th, 2004 06:02 AM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

OK, three more poems coming up;

Chosen Part 1

It feels odd, not being the other woman,
Looking out at the other woman,
Watching her struggle,
Fight with her feelings, desperation,
It overflows into my space,
Makes me feel like, I'm the bad guy,
I don't know why,
But I know I've got to try,
Not to make the other woman,
Feel, like the other woman.


Chosen Part 2

It feels strange, becoming the shunted woman,
Looking out at the new model,
Watching her glow,
She's fighting with feelings of satisfaction,
It overflows into my space,
Makes me feel like, I'm not good enough.
I wonder why?
Don't want to cry,
I stare, and try to work out what she's got,
That maybe I don't.
Oh, I know now,
She has him.


(I wrote these two separately, they kind of coincided with certain occurences right here on KMC, but I figured if I put them together then it would be easier for you guys to use them. Or you could even do them separately, I don't suppose it matters. Just draw them how you perceive them I guess).


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Old Post Aug 9th, 2004 02:15 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Just A Phase

I rise and rub my eyes,
Another day, another chance to die.
Hope coarses through my veins,
Warms my heart, yet feels so strange.
Why do I wish for closure?
I don't understand why I'm here,
Maybe that's the reason for wanting it over.
I could help it along,
No-one would ever be any the wiser.
Like they'd notice,
A little voice in the depths of me,
Always talking, always urging,
Why do I have this other side?
'Conflicting emotions' they called it.
As far as I'm concerned,
I'm suicidal.
The sooner someone notices that,
The sooner I can get on with my life.
Instead of wanting it to come to an end.


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Old Post Aug 9th, 2004 02:18 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Vampyr

Darkness alights, suffocating the skies,
Time stands still once more.
I walk alone, sounds sweep over me,
No wind, nothing touches my pale skin.
I try to recall the sun on my face,
Impossible, a far away place,
Where the warmth was once felt.
I shiver, more a reaction to lack of memory,
For I feel not a thing, clinically dead.
Eternity ahead,
I long to breathe again, to inhale the sweet aromas of life.
To taste something other than death.
Acceptance is my next step,
My fate sealed as I roam the Earth.
But I am strength personified,
For I am the undead, nor alive, it's a confusing state.
I know not what runs through my veins,
Nor do I care,
I am neither here nor there,
Always in one place and yet in another.
I walk on.........


OK guys, all done for a while big grin


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Mr. Sandman
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Gender: Male
Location: New York City

I have an idea for "Just a Phase" but just like last time, you wouldn't get to see it. no expression


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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

roll eyes (sarcastic)

It's ok, I can imagine your skill yes


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Mr. Sandman
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Gender: Male
Location: New York City

It's a teenage boy standing in fornt of a bathroom mirror. He has his head hung low, and the veiw is from behind. In his reflection, his medium length hair covers his eyes, and the shadow covers the rest of his face. He is leaning his weight on his arms, which are on the edge of the sink, where next to his left hand there is a trickle of blood(the only bit of color in the whole peice), and a razor.

A description is all I can give. I hope I can eventually get both 'poetry personifications' up on here.


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eek! I love how this thread has taken off,

Nice work all happy


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Syren
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Gender: Female
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quote:
Originally posted by Arachnoidfreak
It's a teenage boy standing in fornt of a bathroom mirror. He has his head hung low, and the veiw is from behind. In his reflection, his medium length hair covers his eyes, and the shadow covers the rest of his face. He is leaning his weight on his arms, which are on the edge of the sink, where next to his left hand there is a trickle of blood(the only bit of color in the whole peice), and a razor.

A description is all I can give. I hope I can eventually get both 'poetry personifications' up on here.




I had a picture of this when I wrote it, except it was a chick.........


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Old Post Oct 16th, 2004 12:46 PM
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Syren
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Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

No Longer Pure..

Against the darkest background,
Fiery red eyes lit the night.
Her body starts to tremble,
Overtaken by her fright.

A scratching noise so loud,
Scrapes at the paving stone.
Whispered words of hatred,
Reminds her she is all alone.

Clench her eyes tightly shut,
She gasps desperately for air.
And slowly as her eyes open,
She screams at the nightmare.

Blood red eyes stare at her,
Skin peeling off each second.
Boney fingers long and black,
To him they did beckon.

The clean air she once breathed,
Had turned so poisoned cold.
Eyelids fighting to stay awake,
To the devil her soul was sold.

And with his black red mouth,
He placed it to her lips.
Sucking out her pure soul,
Placing a nightmare kiss.

Black bone fingers sliding down,
Tracing her every curve.
She had become his evening meal,
To him she had been served.

Hands flitting across her thighs,
Then scraping across her ribs.
And as he ripped away the skin,
Blood drew from blood pen nibs.

In the dark of the evening night,
He left her on the floor.
Telling the cold dead body,
What she had had been so pure..


Written by Ash aka Delicious1

You guys can use this poem to draw your impressions too.


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Old Post Oct 16th, 2004 12:56 PM
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Mr. Sandman
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Gender: Male
Location: New York City

oh, this one may be my favorite so far. I have a lovely image in my head for this one.


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Syren
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quote:
Originally posted by Arachnoidfreak
oh, this one may be my favorite so far. I have a lovely image in my head for this one.


*sniff sniff*

My lil Ash is getting the recognition she deserves for her poetry, and to think she wasn't going to bother posting any. I forced her, it was the only way big grin


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Her eyes gleam with sadness, as tears begin to fall, she stands alone, as if she is a rose surrounded by thorns. Her sadness will immerse her already broken heart

Last edited by lil bitchiness on Oct 25th, 2004 at 08:03 PM

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Location: Metropolis

I enjoy reading poetry.

Acutally, I love reading them in The Poety Thread that is already in existence.

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it wasnt the greatest....


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Xx DaNi xX

Her eyes gleam with sadness, as tears begin to fall, she stands alone, as if she is a rose surrounded by thorns. Her sadness will immerse her already broken heart

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my name is Austin not Hon. no expression

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well Austin show me a better poem if you think these are all bad.


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Xx DaNi xX

Her eyes gleam with sadness, as tears begin to fall, she stands alone, as if she is a rose surrounded by thorns. Her sadness will immerse her already broken heart

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how about you use the POETRY THREAD?

That's what it was made for...


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get over it


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Xx DaNi xX

Her eyes gleam with sadness, as tears begin to fall, she stands alone, as if she is a rose surrounded by thorns. Her sadness will immerse her already broken heart

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quote:
Originally posted by BrOwnEyeDBitCh
get over it

this is going to get closed or merged, so i suggest the you get over it!

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