KMC Forums - The Bat-Man!!!!!!!!!

Ok, jeez, I have a life ya know, I'm not an internet junkie! So, the sample was part of the first issue. So anyways...

After the big contraversy in Grifton's apartment,he gathers his hitmen. "I want those files...d***!" said Grifton. "I say, we get, in trash the place, and get out with the files."Joe, you have a good idea, I'm putting you in charge of this operation." "Me?" Joe Royale then flips a random playing card over...a joker. "Yes. Ok gentlemen, be ready at 8:00! Oh and Joe, remember, you're my, number one guy! And don't forget your lucky card!" "My friend, your luck, just ran out." "Hello, yes, get me the police..."Later, around 7:55:"Hello, do you know who Bobby Wheeler is?" said a girl named Sandi Pierce, in the same grade as him. "Ya know, I'm really not sure" said a boy who was actually Bobby. "Wilfred, can you check if the guests have enough soda?" "Yes Master Wheeler." "Hey Wheeler! Nice party!" "Thanks, but I don't really know who you are." "I'm Sam Vreeland." The two shake hands. "Nice name, you related to Veronica?" "No but can a have a million?" A girl comes by, "Hello you are?" "Sandi Pierce." "Bobby Wheeler." "You sure?" "Yeah." "Sir, the guests want to know if you have any cream soda." "Ya how many should we open? 4?" "4 is good." "Ok, 4, and Wilfred, give Sam here a million." Later, around 8:00: "Bobby this charity for Gotham PD was very nice to do." "You're welcome, Commishinor." "Commishinor!" "Be right back, Bobby." "Anomonous tip, Royale is cleaning up Monarch." "Why didn't I get the information sooner, who's in charge?" "Bullock jr. Ms." "Oh my god."Let's go." "Royale? huh?" said Bobby under his breath. "Uh, Wilfred, tell the guests I'm leaving to run some "arrands" and if anyone has questions ask you." "Ok sir, but do be careful." Bobby then went to his room on the 3rd floor,Checked to see if he was alone, then opened his closet, went down the elevator, gave the computer the password, "Bat" and went towards the costume chamber. He came out in the Bat-Man costume(Batman Returns model). He took the Batcycle and left the Batcave through the ramp leading to a doorway sized hole in the woods. He got to Monarch chemical factory. Meanwhile: ''Got them boys?" "Yeah Joe." "Ok, let's get outta here." Unfortunitly, the cops who were under Bullock jr. saw them. "Freeze!" Then a shootout happened. Joe, Ace, and Billy got away. The others were arrested. Billy was runnig towards the catwalk. POW! The Bat-Man had punched him and Billy fell down. Joe was flipping switchs to confuse the cops. Ace was going to the exit, he made it there. The Commishinor and her squad got in. "Bullock, what do you think you're donig!" "Shut up, they'll hear you!" "If anyone shhots at Joe Royale, will answer to me!" "What? You just blew our cover!" Joe got to the top catwalk. He was going towards the exit when, BIFF! The Bat-Man kicked him in the stomach. He then lifted him by the collar. "Jeez!" "Let 'em go, or the Commishinor get's it!" The Bat-Man then dropped Joe. "Nice outfit." said Joe. Joe turned around for a second and The Bat-Man was gone. Joe was amazed. ''Come on Joe, get out!" Joe turned towards Ace, shut up!" Joe then shot him. He then saw The Bat-Man out the corner of his eye. He turned to shoot but The Bat-Man dodged, he then punched Joe in the nose. He fell off the catwalk. He held on to the railing. The Bat-Man tried to help him back up but Joe Fell into a vat of chemicals. Commishinor looked at The Bat-Man and said "Oh my lord!" The Bat-Man then left the scene. ...To be continued...Ok, that took a lot of typing but it was worth it right? And sorry that I sort of took a lot from Batman(1989) for this issue, I just liked the chemical scene a lot and thought it would be great for the comic