dialogue from the movie 'Superfly'
I Wanne Be Where You Are - Marvin Gaye
It's an image worth pondering for a moment. Maybe, when you cut past the instrumental and songwriting virtuosity, the funny voices and characters, what is left is a man alone in his recording studio for days at a time.
omg i just read what that guy wrote and tbh they were amature lyrics.
and when i read what you wrote i pissed myself laughing
your lyrics were pretty good and really funny, which is what i like.
i record my own raps and i think id be intrested in hearing some more of your lyrics,
drop me an inbox if you'd like to yeah
I wrote a random verse when I was 14. Wasn't all that great.
Here it is, I just changed it a little btw.
"I'm smiling while the last thing you hear is my chains rattlin'
I'm piling you up with the rest of my slain dragons
You're waking up with brain damage and sprained back discs
insane rap gifts, just wait till I gain traction
The main attraction which grants no lame scratchin'
Your veins blackened, nothin to gain rappin'
You'll sleep on the streets layin' on your rain jacket
Praying for a stained mattress with frayed fabrics
Challenging you to rhyme but you're just babbling
Don't waste your breath battlin"
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Last edited by Insomniatric on Mar 27th, 2013 at 07:09 PM
Any hip hop heads will see where I got this 'inspiration' from....
We strolled in the club in which tom cruised behind us
Charlie sheen us an decided to leave without saying what up to his cuz'
Bruce upped and left to jump from the willis' tower
Severely depressed to see his withered flower
Whitney to houston we have a problem
On the rampage there's stormin norman the green goblin
We better take his ass out and let justin drown in timberlake
Pharral williams took it too far so alicia keyd his car
Curtis jackson the kids round the projects without causin to much harm
Curtis got a nasty prick of the police of george bush
Russell branded him a criminal of many men and he got told to shush
Christopher walken the boulevard while sam rocked well
Curtis broke out an took a stroll through jonah hills, he came across charles mansion, broke in there an jason voorhees(thoughthees) goin' straight to hell
Very difficult for a 15 year old to do...lol try it... That's very very below amature imagine what someone like nas or az could do with that concept...listen to 'gza-fame follow tha name' basically what I just done there but with different people, although I stole a bit of his lyric but ah well
Disposition of decadence, no denizen dare to switch
Recalling desolate decor of Dickensian period
Daffodil patch unveil semblance of variance
Making kings leer in jest,
Draconian iron fist - ****ing civilians
paupers and principles share cartesian coordinates
every story has a plot and every plot has a point to it
Connect the dots, line the stars, finding one's orifice
Divine representative - blessed in disguise?
What's mine is Yours, minus ours now the question is Y?
Why ignore this intrinsic - common course of enlight'
why this sickness of perspectives? Wiccan. Vatican. Vice ..
surely you'll find a cure in Lucifer - AND Jesus Christ
Seeking lights through the night requires open view inspection
And the road to Helldorado's paved with golden good intentions
should we mention curse and blessing' only works through incentives?
As fears are firmly fixed in mental gears; the birth of the heretics
Last edited by dynamix on Dec 16th, 2013 at 04:47 AM