Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
Constructive Criticism
I suggest we use this thread to discuss personal poems written by actual members.... helpful comments, reasons for likes/dislikes etc.
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ThorinWoofer
Jan 12th, 2005 12:03 PM
Trickster
True KMC Jester
Gender: Male Location: United Kingdom
Damn, I was gunna do this too
Okay, I want tpo point out that I like BlackC@t's first poem, but I wasn't entirely sure about her second poem.
BC, what sort of message was that meant to give across about your mother?
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
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He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
Jan 12th, 2005 12:31 PM
lil bitchiness
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Gender: Female Location: Limassol, Cyprus
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Explan to me please how this thread is different to the sticky one.
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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة
Jan 12th, 2005 01:08 PM
Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
Read the stickied one... it was your idea to separate the discussions about famous poets/poetry and member poetry.
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ThorinWoofer
Jan 12th, 2005 03:52 PM
Trickster
True KMC Jester
Gender: Male Location: United Kingdom
Although they could be named better
Basically, that one is about contempory 'proffessional' poetry, whereas this one is for poems written here by the members.
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
Jan 12th, 2005 05:15 PM
Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
I think they're titled quite logically; members are posting their own work looking for 'constructive criticism' and the discussion thread is exactly as it states, a thread for the discussion of poetry. Just, not member poetry
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ThorinWoofer
Jan 12th, 2005 07:28 PM
Trickster
True KMC Jester
Gender: Male Location: United Kingdom
Lol. So, you got any constructive criticism for my poems?
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
Jan 12th, 2005 10:29 PM
lil bitchiness
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Gender: Female Location: Limassol, Cyprus
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quote: Originally posted by Syren
Read the stickied one... it was your idea to separate the discussions about famous poets/poetry and member poetry.
Erm, no it wasnt. I suggested that each one gets his/her own thread. Go re-read it.
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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة
Jan 12th, 2005 10:36 PM
Trickster
True KMC Jester
Gender: Male Location: United Kingdom
What about you, Lil. Got any views on my poems?
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
Jan 12th, 2005 11:11 PM
BlackC@
Confront the darkness
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It was a poem of how I really feel, that's what poetry's all about.
Are you saying you had a problem with my poem?
Jan 13th, 2005 07:57 AM
BlackC@
Confront the darkness
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Oh, and please, call me C@t
Jan 13th, 2005 07:57 AM
Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
quote: Originally posted by lil bitchiness
kk, I stuck it, so all is set now
Ok, another question, are you guys thinking of having this discussion thread to discuss only poems written by you, or everything?
My suggestion would be to have a seperate thread if you want to discuss opets - as in, each thread for a different poet.
Yeah, to separate the threads with regard to other poets and their poetry. You asked if there was a reason for this thread and I said yes, it's to discuss member poetry.
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ThorinWoofer
Jan 13th, 2005 10:20 AM
Trickster
True KMC Jester
Gender: Male Location: United Kingdom
quote: Originally posted by BlackC@t
It was a poem of how I really feel, that's what poetry's all about.
Are you saying you had a problem with my poem?
No problem, I just coudn't relate to it. Sorry.
You read any of my stuff? It's all nonsense
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
Jan 13th, 2005 01:44 PM
Peach
mordrem
Gender: Female Location: verdant brink
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I posted a couple of my things... if anyone cares to read.
I like your poems Trickster
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Jan 13th, 2005 02:08 PM
lil bitchiness
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Gender: Female Location: Limassol, Cyprus
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Ok, not only is this teribly off topic, but its getting confusing, so closing.
Use the other thread for member poetry discussions.
All other poets or writers you like or feel we should know about, please start a new thread about him/her.
Hope thats little clearer.
Closing.
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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة
Jan 13th, 2005 05:42 PM
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