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Syren
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Constructive Criticism

I suggest we use this thread to discuss personal poems written by actual members.... helpful comments, reasons for likes/dislikes etc.


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Old Post Jan 12th, 2005 12:03 PM
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Trickster
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Damn, I was gunna do this too stick out tongue

Okay, I want tpo point out that I like [email protected]'s first poem, but I wasn't entirely sure about her second poem.

BC, what sort of message was that meant to give across about your mother?


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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"

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He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.

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Explan to me please how this thread is different to the sticky one.


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Syren
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Read the stickied one... it was your idea to separate the discussions about famous poets/poetry and member poetry.


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Old Post Jan 12th, 2005 03:52 PM
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Although they could be named better stick out tongue

Basically, that one is about contempory 'proffessional' poetry, whereas this one is for poems written here by the members.


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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"

Death only gives another set of choices.

He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.

Old Post Jan 12th, 2005 05:15 PM
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Syren
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I think they're titled quite logically; members are posting their own work looking for 'constructive criticism' and the discussion thread is exactly as it states, a thread for the discussion of poetry. Just, not member poetry roll eyes (sarcastic)


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Old Post Jan 12th, 2005 07:28 PM
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Lol. So, you got any constructive criticism for my poems?


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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"

Death only gives another set of choices.

He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.

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Originally posted by Syren
Read the stickied one... it was your idea to separate the discussions about famous poets/poetry and member poetry.


Erm, no it wasnt. I suggested that each one gets his/her own thread. Go re-read it.


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What about you, Lil. Got any views on my poems?


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Death only gives another set of choices.

He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.

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It was a poem of how I really feel, that's what poetry's all about.

Are you saying you had a problem with my poem?

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Oh, and please, call me [email protected] happy

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Syren
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kk, I stuck it, so all is set now happy

Ok, another question, are you guys thinking of having this discussion thread to discuss only poems written by you, or everything?

My suggestion would be to have a seperate thread if you want to discuss opets - as in, each thread for a different poet.


Yeah, to separate the threads with regard to other poets and their poetry. You asked if there was a reason for this thread and I said yes, it's to discuss member poetry.


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Originally posted by [email protected]
It was a poem of how I really feel, that's what poetry's all about.

Are you saying you had a problem with my poem?


No problem, I just coudn't relate to it. Sorry. wink

You read any of my stuff? It's all nonsense stick out tongue


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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"

Death only gives another set of choices.

He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.

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I posted a couple of my things...smile if anyone cares to read.

I like your poems Trickster yes


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lil bitchiness
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Ok, not only is this teribly off topic, but its getting confusing, so closing.

Use the other thread for member poetry discussions.

All other poets or writers you like or feel we should know about, please start a new thread about him/her.

Hope thats little clearer.

Closing.


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