justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
words are in my head. just cant put them together
like my brain farted when i tried to and i felt under the weather
a little sickness that im missing
someone that i should be kissin
cant take for granted what you dont have
cant forget what wasnt there
lost oppurtunities what i have
situations never formed
shortened sentences taking place of
paragraphs i should have had
makes me wonder all the time
should this peom really rhyme
probably does but i never notice
and all the words flow from my head
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Jul 9th, 2005 02:35 PM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
neat dude.
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Jul 9th, 2005 05:04 PM
justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
stand up sit down, come in get out.
pas out wake up, large glass or plastic cup.
tons a money or sex appeal, all fake or just real.
real work or none at all, small mind or big ball.
do it or not, bring it or not, say what you got, stone cold or red hot.
in the end you gotta choose, will you win or will you loose?
be one way or another, cant have both my wayward brother.
cause either you with me or you're nothing at all.
which will you choose? you make the call.
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Jul 10th, 2005 09:50 PM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
Am I the wayward one? I am with you, bro.
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Jul 11th, 2005 01:01 PM
DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
yeah, kool man! well, been wayward... hahahaha but i am comin into the fold more. prayer needed alot these days man. love ya bro! write some mo!
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Jul 11th, 2005 10:18 PM
intoxicatedpoet
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Gender: Male Location: France
quote: (post ) Originally posted by justjakk
stand up sit down, come in get out.
pas out wake up, large glass or plastic cup.
tons a money or sex appeal, all fake or just real.
real work or none at all, small mind or big ball.
do it or not, bring it or not, say what you got, stone cold or red hot.
in the end you gotta choose, will you win or will you loose?
be one way or another, cant have both my wayward brother.
cause either you with me or you're nothing at all.
which will you choose? you make the call.
Kickass!
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Jul 11th, 2005 10:48 PM
justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
i was mused by OU to do this. it may cause others to look differently at me. but, the way i look at it is, it has happened before.
thoughts abound around and round
they sing me melodies to tease and taunt
throughout this house that is my haunt
from whence i came and ever stay
i hear myself quite differently not
not "now" but "not" which is quite same
familiar as i remember my name
and i keep it til i find the death
i walk not crooked but straight and wild
i know that this is quite obsurd
and i don't trust my very word
i bounce from off the rubber walls
i edit now tis true no lies
no fibs i tell in white coat tied
abound my sleaves my mouth is wide
my lip is flipped by my index finger now.
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Jul 14th, 2005 08:47 PM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
hahahaha funny dude... hahahahaha !
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Jul 14th, 2005 09:22 PM
justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
i bounce into this lyric. its just a lovely melody
the second verse i write for i cannot seem to let it be
misfit or not i cannot think straight for i do have no brain
all tied up with nowhere to go you see they all say im insane
this is all i can think of at the moment...i may add more to this....just thought it sounded fun
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Jul 14th, 2005 10:31 PM
justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
quote: (post ) Originally posted by justjakk
i was mused by OU to do this. it may cause others to look differently at me. but, the way i look at it is, it has happened before.
thoughts abound around and round
they sing me melodies to tease and taunt
throughout this house that is my haunt
from whence i came and ever stay
i hear myself quite differently not
not "now" but "not" which is quite same
familiar as i remember my name
and i keep it til i find the death
i walk not crooked but straight and wild
i know that this is quite obsurd
and i don't trust my very word
i bounce from off the rubber walls
i edit now tis true no lies
no fibs i tell in white coat tied
abound my sleaves my mouth is wide
my lip is flipped by my index finger now.
yanno, i think i should just edit the whole thing.......or at least one line...
thoughts abound around and round
they sing me melodies to tease and taunt
throughout this house that is my haunt
from whence i came and ever stay
i hear myself quite differently not
not "now" but "not" which is quite same
familiar as i remember my name
and i keep it til i find the death
i walk not crooked but straight and wild
i know that this is quite obsurd
and i don't trust my very word
i bounce from off the rubber walls
i end now tis true no lies
no fibs i tell in white coat tied
abound my sleaves my mouth is wide
my lips flipped by my finger now.
there, now i feel better about it.
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Jul 14th, 2005 10:41 PM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
hahhahaha stiches man.... stiches...!!!
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Jul 15th, 2005 10:10 PM
justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
when the sun is shinning no clouds around
why does it seem that my face still gets wet
oftentimes i fin myself going with the flow
but then i hit my breaks cause im stuck in the traffic
hmanity is insaity and im wasting my time
big ben is ticking along but what hour is it?
im still in solitary confinement everyone around
cant move without bumping into someone nowadays
i guess its just the way i see it, or i cant see at all
take the blind fold off its getting a little dark
did i say dark? i meant light. cause im the normal one here
your not listening to poetry. your listening to mind taunts
this isnt a quick lymerick, it the diary of someone twisted
i fought myself yesterday, i dont even know who won
i hate being with me. im paranoid schitzophrenic
im afraid one day, i may kill myself again.
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Jul 16th, 2005 12:45 PM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
Nice freeverse dude... work on the spellcheck, but otherwise a cool poem.
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Jul 17th, 2005 12:10 AM
DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
ha!
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Jul 17th, 2005 12:31 AM
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Jul 19th, 2005 04:35 AM
justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
you know your lonely
heres you last chance
will you let go
or be forever
wont you shape up
or ship out
do it now
or i will
you got the guts?
maybe not
go and get some
or you'll lose it
the ending
is the strongest
if you dont
you'll regret it.
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Jul 19th, 2005 09:41 PM
justjakk
Evil Bunny
Gender: Male Location: In written pages
shoes tied on the wrong feet
left or right you cant deside
get it together, clear your throat
curtain call, now begin
step to the mike
you feel the rhythim
let the bass flow
feel the chorus
open up and let it flow
let the tune pour
lyric line chorus ending
take your bow
your a legend
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Jul 19th, 2005 09:43 PM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
nice man. ha is this for me?quote: (post ) Originally posted by justjakk
you know your lonely
heres you last chance
will you let go
or be forever
wont you shape up
or ship out
do it now
or i will
you got the guts?
maybe not
go and get some
or you'll lose it
the ending
is the strongest
if you dont
you'll regret it.
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Jul 19th, 2005 09:58 PM
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