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peterKSL
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thankzzzzzzzzz a lot!! you guys made my day...
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Apr 13th, 2005 06:26 PM |
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peterKSL
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...Hunting for you...
Hunt, hunt, and hunt,
Those are my aims.
My life just couldn’t seem to be any better.
You did, brought light,
And it’s because of you,
Now I’m trapped in an abscence of light.
Am I happy?
Or do I regret?
Perhaps grateful is what it is?
But one thing I promised myself,
That I’ll hunt for you,
No matter what-
All I want to say is –
I miss you…
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Apr 13th, 2005 06:45 PM |
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peterKSL
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I've posted this in another thread but I decided to post it here too... I like this poem very much
...Love....
First time I met her,
I didn't really cared.
But then,
She looked me in the eye,
Her eyes penetrated my heart.
The feeling of being watch,
And being thought of,
Filled my innocent heart.
Blank thought to racing heart beat,
What could be better than this?
We blush when we meet,
It's just like hide and seek.
Time to time,
We just laid eyes on each other.
Attraction is what it is...
~This is love~
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Apr 13th, 2005 06:59 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
That last one is sooo cute!
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Apr 14th, 2005 03:05 AM |
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peterKSL
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Apr 14th, 2005 11:29 AM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
I really like those romantic poems, but when I try to do one myself, it sounds reeeally bad!!
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Apr 15th, 2005 03:36 AM |
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peterKSL
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these are all drafts... lol... bad or good I still post them...
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Apr 15th, 2005 09:01 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
They look good just the way they are to me! Keep it up!
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