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Coldfire
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Maybe ya are!!
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Apr 15th, 2005 03:34 AM |
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dorks lol ^_^
yin and yang
Night and day,
a perfect match
in every way
fire and water
white and black
i smile when u say
u love me back
hot and cold
sweet and sour
u will always
be my lover
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Apr 15th, 2005 11:37 PM |
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Coldfire
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Did you just call me a dork??!! lmao! heh heh heh. I liked that poem; it was simple, yet effective
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Apr 16th, 2005 04:46 AM |
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thanks! i wrote that in like 2 minutes...lol
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Apr 16th, 2005 06:33 AM |
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Coldfire
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2 minutes!! It took me sooo long to do mine!! But I am slow at stuff like drawing and writing poetry....
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Apr 16th, 2005 06:44 AM |
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lol i'm like that too sometimes.
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Apr 16th, 2005 06:48 AM |
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Coldfire
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Well actually, once you get into the flow of something you're doing, it doesn't seem to take as long, for some weird reason.
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Apr 16th, 2005 07:11 AM |
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peterKSL
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lol same here.. I do my writing in 2-3 mins and post them...
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Apr 16th, 2005 12:41 PM |
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Do you just write yours on the computer at unexpected moments?
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Apr 16th, 2005 10:21 PM |
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peterKSL
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^ yes.. I write them "live" actually...
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Apr 17th, 2005 08:50 PM |
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
that's awesome then!
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Apr 17th, 2005 09:17 PM |
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this one is personal..i really like it..i hope u do
The sun rises and the moon fades
Time goes on without looking back
Though hate has lasted through the days
We walk down the street holding hands
People stare and talk about us
As though we’re walking on no mans land
We take a breath and keep walking
With no reservations about us together
Keep going ignoring all the talking.
Why are we outcasts and why are we hated
People just don’t understand us
Seems that this type of hate should be dated.
We are no different from the ones who stare
We love each other no matter what
Just want to be accepted everywhere
One day we will be able to fly
Now we can only dream when we can show
Our love in the public eye
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Apr 19th, 2005 12:43 AM |
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Wow.... that's all I can say right now.... wow..... That was very deep indeed. I could feel the emotion in that poem. That was, without a doubt, the best one you've posted!!
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