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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

loooong poem I wrote for English... does not reflect my emotions, so please don't worry about that smile

Raindrops

raindrops
fall
like tears
from the eyes
of a disappointed Goddess.

one single
shimmering bead of
innocent perfection
tumbles onto my
ashen cheek,
dashes down
the well used track
worn smooth
by a steady stream
of moisture,
the liquified symbol
of such agony and
anguish.

quite noticeably
thunder growls,
like the stomach
of a starving,
emaciated child.

the wind it
shrieks,
voicing the cries
I longingly wish
to enunciate, but
dare not to,
for fear of
repercussions.

reflections,
so accusing,
staring out from
teh scintillating surface
of this sharp
blade
I grasp in my hand,
so tenderly,
as I would a
newborn
swaddled in soft,
downy blankets.

the possible sensations
screaming through me
if this blade were to
pierce my soft, defenseless
flesh,
seem so endless.

also my blood,
the colour so lusciously
vibrant in the
haziness of my sight,
shall streak my skin,
the drops of
scarlet
sliding down the
silver of my blade in a
stream of shining jewels
of ruby,
shall be a wonderful issue
to investigate further...

it should be so easy...
all it takes
is one swipe,
one slash,
and the task
is finished...

no.

my passing shall
solve nothing;
it is only a
convenience
for those too
spineless to
seek other solutions.

staggering,
I release the knife,
slipping from fingers
too insensate to feel,
making aquaintances with
the solid soil beneath me,
reality
imposing itself into
my hazy thoughts.

raindrops,
glittering on my
overexcited and exposed
flesh,
cleansing me
of such impurities in
my mystified notions,
releasing the ballast
of guilt off my shoulders,
off my heart.

and in this cognition,
I am satisfied
to resume existing
for one more day.


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Old Post Apr 30th, 2006 06:39 AM
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Rodgort
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Gender: Male
Location: Over there. Maybe there, too.

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
aw thankies happy
No prob. happy


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Old Post Apr 30th, 2006 02:02 PM
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Rodgort
Dickroll'd.

Gender: Male
Location: Over there. Maybe there, too.

VERY nice..I'd give it a 20/10 happy

You made one little mistake though..

reflections,
so accusing,
staring out from
teh scintillating surface
of this sharp
blade


Merely a typo I'm guessing stick out tongue


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Old Post Apr 30th, 2006 02:07 PM
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justjakk
Evil Bunny

Gender: Male
Location: In written pages

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
loooong poem I wrote for English... does not reflect my emotions, so please don't worry about that smile

Raindrops

i declare, in soft words, that hold steadfast the eyes that read. this poem, such delicate form like rice paper that wold tight to the sides of a dojo. to puncture it would bring.....uhm...lost

was very good. heh heh


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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Spawn_Master
VERY nice..I'd give it a 20/10 happy

You made one little mistake though..

reflections,
so accusing,
staring out from
teh scintillating surface
of this sharp
blade


Merely a typo I'm guessing stick out tongue

haha yeah I see that now tee hee stick out tongue And thankies big grin
quote: (post)
Originally posted by justjakk
i declare, in soft words, that hold steadfast the eyes that read. this poem, such delicate form like rice paper that wold tight to the sides of a dojo. to puncture it would bring.....uhm...lost

was very good. heh heh

Gracias happy


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mikeydude
Cleveland is the Reason.

Gender: Male
Location: Heaven at nite.

they all rock!! rock rock


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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by mikeydude
they all rock!! rock rock

eek! Aww thankies!


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Old Post May 12th, 2006 05:54 AM
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Null
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
eek! Aww thankies!
More eek!

Old Post May 12th, 2006 06:00 AM
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ritoshi
More eek!

lol maybe this weekend stick out tongue


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Old Post May 12th, 2006 06:06 AM
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shifty

Old Post May 16th, 2006 03:12 AM
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D-Double
.. and some junk

Gender: Male
Location: St. Elsewhere

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
loooong poem I wrote for English... does not reflect my emotions, so please don't worry about that smile

Raindrops



Wow, Coldy. I'm supremely impressed with your way with words.

You're English teacher better give you an A.

... seriously though, I look forward to going back through your thread and reading what I've missed.
Cuz you got skills, luv. wink


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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ritoshi
shifty

Or maybe not that weekend haha stick out tongue We need some more ideas hun shifty


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Old Post May 16th, 2006 05:58 AM
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jlee17xoxo412
Senior Member

Gender: Female
Location: US / UK

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
loooong poem I wrote for English... does not reflect my emotions, so please don't worry about that smile

Raindrops

raindrops
fall
like tears
from the eyes
of a disappointed Goddess.

one single
shimmering bead of
innocent perfection
tumbles onto my
ashen cheek,
dashes down
the well used track
worn smooth
by a steady stream
of moisture,
the liquified symbol
of such agony and
anguish.

quite noticeably
thunder growls,
like the stomach
of a starving,
emaciated child.

the wind it
shrieks,
voicing the cries
I longingly wish
to enunciate, but
dare not to,
for fear of
repercussions.

reflections,
so accusing,
staring out from
teh scintillating surface
of this sharp
blade
I grasp in my hand,
so tenderly,
as I would a
newborn
swaddled in soft,
downy blankets.

the possible sensations
screaming through me
if this blade were to
pierce my soft, defenseless
flesh,
seem so endless.

also my blood,
the colour so lusciously
vibrant in the
haziness of my sight,
shall streak my skin,
the drops of
scarlet
sliding down the
silver of my blade in a
stream of shining jewels
of ruby,
shall be a wonderful issue
to investigate further...

it should be so easy...
all it takes
is one swipe,
one slash,
and the task
is finished...

no.

my passing shall
solve nothing;
it is only a
convenience
for those too
spineless to
seek other solutions.

staggering,
I release the knife,
slipping from fingers
too insensate to feel,
making aquaintances with
the solid soil beneath me,
reality
imposing itself into
my hazy thoughts.

raindrops,
glittering on my
overexcited and exposed
flesh,
cleansing me
of such impurities in
my mystified notions,
releasing the ballast
of guilt off my shoulders,
off my heart.

and in this cognition,
I am satisfied
to resume existing
for one more day.


wow very beautiful poem
i love it
smile


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Old Post May 20th, 2006 04:28 PM
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by D-Double
Wow, Coldy. I'm supremely impressed with your way with words.

You're English teacher better give you an A.

... seriously though, I look forward to going back through your thread and reading what I've missed.
Cuz you got skills, luv. wink

She did... a 93% I think happy

aww thankies hun

But most of my stuff is on http://www.nightfeather.deviantart.com ... I'm lazy so I don't put as much here lol stick out tongue

quote: (post)
Originally posted by jlee17xoxo412
wow very beautiful poem
i love it
smile

Thanks! big grin Nice to see you back again hun!


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Old Post May 23rd, 2006 03:55 AM
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

*bump*

lol stick out tongue


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Null
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
*bump*

lol stick out tongue
You Bumped and now you got to deliver more Poems shifty

Old Post Jun 5th, 2006 07:08 AM
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ritoshi
You Bumped and now you got to deliver more Poems shifty

But I'm too lazy right and tired right now


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Old Post Jun 5th, 2006 07:20 AM
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
But I'm too lazy right and tired right now
How about now shifty

Old Post Jun 8th, 2006 04:20 AM
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
But I'm too lazy right and tired right now
hey babes, hope you are somewhat going good during this hot a.. summer! got online finally for a bit, gonna be back on regularly soon... miss you and JJ and Vay and all of ya'll alot. Email me your addy for a wedding invite, I am gettting married to Rebecca July 1st.


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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hey babes, hope you are somewhat going good during this hot a.. summer! got online finally for a bit, gonna be back on regularly soon... miss you and JJ and Vay and all of ya'll alot. Email me your addy for a wedding invite, I am gettting married to Rebecca July 1st.

I missed you too hun... it felt so odd not having you here, to tell you the truth lol. omg that's awesome!!!!!!! eek! Congratulations dear!!


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