Finishhhhhhhh
I am really sick and tired of the people on this website.
They never finish their stories.
And if they do sometimes it doesn't even make any sense!
But good story!
But please try and to finis your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gender: Female Location: Griffindor common room,
Hogwarts
The next part-
The word of their relationship spread like fire in a forest. And Sirius was right- many heartbroken girls were seen crying in the toilets. And among them was a ghost too. Yes- Moaning Myrtle.
There were few boys also who were sad about this relationship and among them were none other than Lucius Malfoy and Severus Snape. Lucius had a crush on Lily though being a ‘Mud-blood’ but Severus was serious. He remembered how she had helped him in his early days in Hogwarts when no one wanted to be his friend, not even the Slytherins.
Unaware of all this, James and Lily were enjoying their fifth year at Hogwarts. There romance had grown to a great height. Sometimes even Sirius was annoyed of their affection (which he knew was James’ idea to tease him). The days went by at a fast rate and soon the exams were on their head. The fifth year students had O.W.L. which was very important in their lives. And as usual Lily was there to motivate the Fifth year students to study hard.
“Lily Please. We have already done all the course twice,” James said one such evening.
“Yeah Lily. Thanks to you,” Sirius said making a face. Sorry to keep u waiting. I had exams and so I was unable to post.
“It is for your own good. And it won’t harm if you will study a third time James,” Lily protested.
And the rest of the evening passed away with nothing other than a quarrel between them.
Gender: Female Location: Griffindor common room,
Hogwarts
BOOM! And Snape’s cauldron exploded. At the far end of the dungeon, the Maraudars snickered and Lily shot them a disapproving look.
Sirius had managed to pour vampire blood into Snape’s cauldron while he had his back turned towards it.
“What happened Severus? Perhaps you added a wrong ingredient,” Professor Slughorn said when he came over to enquire.
“Or perhaps someone else did it for me,” Severus replied glaring at Sirius. As soon as the Maraudars saw that Slughorn was turning to look at them, they started paying their potion attention wearing innocent faces.
“That was very bad of you Sirius,” Lily said once they were outside the earshot of everyone, “Because of you, he will not get a deserving grade.”
“Oh! Come on Lily. You also know as much as we know that Snivellus is a member of the Slug club,” James reasoned with Lily.
But what he got in return was a glare from Lily.
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“Oh James! We are studying from past three hours. I for one is tired. Can’t you take her out for sometime so we can relax,” Sirius whispered in James’ ear pointing in Lily’s direction.
“Well you know dragging her from studies is a next to impossible task,” James replied back.
“Back to studies. What are you whispering about?” Lily asked.
“Lily can we relax for a little while? Please,” Sirius requested making a sad puppy face.
Lily visibly softened.
“Fine but only for 15 minutes,” Lily said.
Wow! That is a lot of improvement. It sounds SO GOOD!! Just remember to make it flow. Only because it was studying for exams and then right to potions class. Otherwise it was very good
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Gender: Female Location: Griffindor common room,
Hogwarts
Thanks to all It certainly helps to know other's opinions. I am having my board exams which will finish on 28th. I'll try to post before too but will certainly post around 29th.
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