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Ax3l
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Poem's by Drumdude1167

Well, I am going to be entering some poems here, then i want you guys to rate them for me



Anticipation

She doesn't know how I feel
She can't
I wish she could see inside my head so she could understand

Beauty doesn't even begin to describe her
If only others saw her through my eyes...

This is the worst feeling I have ever had,
but I feel so wonderful that I can't sleep at night
Could this emotion be a bad thing?
I ask myself: if I could feel nothing for her, would I?
Never

I would give anything
I would give any earthly possession and material thing I have ever had
I would give my life

She wants someone to return love to her
It is right in front of her eyes
Does she see me?
....not the way I see her


well thats the first one of mine...just rate it on a 1-10 basis


Thanks


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Since I'm all into the romantic stuff, of course I loved it big grin I'd prolly give it an 8/10


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